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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: despicable_me

haaawww! 😲

le.. aab sab kasoor mera huh? 😡

aur nahi to mera?

nonono, youu missy ended it at the wrong moment, nahi to maine usko maarne ka socha hi nahi tha.. Woh to your chapter was the game changer😆

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Sakuu
aur nahi to mera? 😲 nonono, youu missy ended it at the wrong moment, nahi to maine usko maarne ka socha hi nahi tha.. Woh to your chapter was the game changer😆

Duh... if u have't noticed Madam.. I didn't kill her but u khoon bhadhi taang, you killed her hello hi bye bye? 😲😡

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: despicable_me

Duh... if u have't noticed Madam.. I didn't kill her but u khoon bhadhi taang, you killed her hello hi bye bye? 😲😡

Hmmm, you might be right, but still inspiration ka credit to tumko hi jaata hai, I was left thinking different scenarios, abhi aisa hi hona tha na fir.. Don't let my imagination run wild =P

Ayooo khoon bhadi taang? Whut? Me likes😛

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

majhya naadala laagu naka... dekh lungi tumhe.. hello hi bye bye!😈

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: despicable_me
majhya naadala laagu naka... dekh lungi tumhe.. hello hi bye bye!😈

ki keha? Mainu ta kuchh palle ni peha

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

sorry for the late comment
awesome update
loved it
poor sakshi..arjun gave her so much work
aww so arjun followed sakshi to make sure she reaches home safe
so arjun scared for her
think he found amit
hope they find her soon
thanks for pm
continue soon

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Good nice sketch of crime scene I wonder who's eyes these may be kid let's see what happen tomorrow .
Thanks for updating waiting for tomorrow
Next update soon

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bollywoodfan16

@bollywoodfan16

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

OMG this was so beautiful...full on paisa vasool...

First of all Arjun sending her scooty for repair and then looking for her ...his chai cup...all small details were so beautifully written...Finally he had to go ahead and ask Miss publicist kahan hai...

No no before that..i liked how u presented him in uniform..My heart goes hmmm...

finally television par kabar and i liked how Arjun didnot even waste a second...

bechara amit..feel so sad for the boy...then all the crime scene..marvelous job...

All the team's fear of not finding her...

Love the thrill element...finally it will be Amit who will Arjun encounter because i m pretty sure you won't let our fiercy heroine meet our handsome cop so soon..let him find her and rescue her...

from that i remember thats what i love about your stories that your heroine has that "spunk"...i totally love that too...

loved it loved it loved it..it was wonderful and waiting for next update tomorrow...

ps...still i know u r not kasai but i have seen you love tragic ends in your stories..U will show awesome romance and then in the end somebody dies or they separate or something...I know it might be irratating to you but still dont kill anyone ...

pps: banner is awesome..

ppps: why dont u start writing for Arjun (the show) they should fire all the writers and hire you...the show will top the trp charts..

ppps: We have not introduced each other...I m rati...are u from india? or out of india?

finally end of my bakwaas...

again loved the update...nobody can beat u in writing...hatts off..

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

I am almost afraid to hope and comment, I don't trust you bahuria.😡

I swear if you don't update this one regularly as promised I am coming to Singapore to help fifty beat you to a pulp, and then I am dragging you back to Philly to nurse you in my style.😈

Samjhi ya samjhaun.

🤣

Yeah, Yeah, I know you are not scared of me, but I will cut you of without a second thought if you even think about leaving this one half way.

Now to the update, fantastic start and a concept, and like you I don't trust the CVs as far as I can throw them.😡 So that's another reason I need you to finish this one.

So I take it the whole thing is related Sakshi, and person hiding up top is the little boy, that means Sakshi has been kidnapped and Amit is the only clue the great ACP have to track her.

Mindblowing behna, please do continue soon and try to take my threats seriously.😆