OS: revenge for love

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok guys, i know that you guys dont know me at all. As i am a silent reader here. This is my first ever post and first ever Arjun's OS. i know i am not very good writer as writers in here. but this is a try. Please support me. Well let me tell you that this os is on demand of my friend.. PIYA(lizadavidmm)... i think some of you are familiar with her... so here it goes...


Today the whole ETF team was resting, not in their home but in office, doing paper work as no case has arrived. Shree and Chotu were as usual cracking jokes in between their work. Aisha was in Sameer's cabin helping him with some work. Arjun was alone in his cabin with a file open in front of him. yes it was same of Sikander's file, the devil who destroyed his life and took away the love of his life.

Aisha looked at Sameer with a sad look which concerned. He asked the reason. She gestured him at Arjun's cabin. Sameer, stood up his chair and went close to Aisha and sit at the chair near her.

Sameer(holding her hand in his): see Aisha, there is something and people I don't want to talk about presently. It was a bad past which I never discussed with anybody so...

Aisha: but you could tell me, atleast now, because I can see how you both are suffering without each other's support, you two are friends, so what made you ...

Sameer: fine, listen carefully.

Sameer took his coffee mug and sipped coffee once. He looked at nowhere. And started.

FLASHBACK

" Yaar, what is this? You don't even know how to make a sandwich? It tastes like hell." Arjun said sitting on his dinning table in the morning. This was his everyday statement and he gets the same reply. " then why don't you make your own, I know this much only, and remember tomorrow is your turn to make the breakfast, so better don't shout at me." Sameer said in a faked anger tone.

Arjun: yaar tu naraz mat ho, see I am having this sandwich na, its not at all bad. I loved it. Wo mai tujhe tease karne ko bol raha tha... lol

Arjun faked a smile. " please god, iss stupid breakfast se chutti dilado..." Arjun said to himself...

Sameer: but why are you so sad? It cant be because of this food?

Arjun(with a sad face): actually, I thought that I would see someone yesterday but somehow it didn't happened..

" you better mean me!!", a sweet voice from his back came. Arjun turn around to see Roshini standing. He stood up and without any delay hugged her tightly, almost raising her, a bit, from floor. Arjun placed a feathery kiss on her cheek and a peck on her forehead.

Sameer: please get a room guys, I still here.

Roshini: ohh hey sam, how are you and thanks for helping him... hope he didn't drive you crazy. (she said this with a wink)

Arjun: sorry Sameer but roshini, look at this breakfast, he made me eat this crap. Please don't go to your parents for so long. I missed you so much. (he said this by again kissing her on her lips)

Sameer: ok guys, u guys carry on and I will see u Arjun in the office. Don't be late.

FLASHBACK ENDS...

Sameer: our life was perfect. But somehow perfect things don't remain perfect for long time. And so our life. Sikander's case came and Arjun got involved in that so much that we lost Roshini. Sikander killed her. The day was a black day for us. And till now also, we are unable to find him. but still this man ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte is after that man. I will be always his backup but I cant show this to him otherwise he will care for anything. But promise me Aisha, you are not going to talk to him anything about this.

Aisha nodded and smiled.

Arjun was still in his office, glaring at the same file. Then he closed his eyes and make his head rest on the back edge of the chair but then suddenly, there was a knock at the door and Sameer was standing in front of Arjun.

Sameer: arjun, we need to run. I have something for you. I will tell you on the way.

" tell the backup to be on the address, we are on the way", Sameer said on the wireless. Arjun was still confused and went with Sameer.

Arjun: what the hell Rathore! What was this?

Sameer: we had his address, sikander's address. I don't want you to go alone and so I arranged everything. We have to be very careful, he is very clever.

Just by listening this, Arjun's eyes were red with anger. He wants to kill that person with his own hands who took Roshini from him. Sameer warned him to do everything in law. But everyone present in the SUV knew this that today this is impossible.

Rage, anger, revenge were all in Arjun's eyes today. SUV stopped at a place with no one and nothing around them just a small house with a grey and brick color paint.

No sound from inside, no light, no traces of any person from outside. Still the team didn't burged in the house. They waited for any activity to take place from inside. But Arjun cant wait for this long. He as usual decided to go in alone. So he went in front of the main door and pushed it hard with his legs in order to opened it with a jerk. But before he could step in, a bullet passed his arm without hurting him. he got an idea that sikander is in there.

Arjun: SIKANDER... SIKANDER... Stop being a coward now. I am at your place so now why are you hiding or are you scared of me that I will kill you...

" do u reallu think so" , a voice from a dark came. " still hiding in the dark, I must say u don't have the guts to face me!" Arjun said with a smile but rage in his eyes.

A man step forward and showed his face. " so here I am Sikander, well you have the same spark in your eyes, even after the death of our wife.. ohh sorry... murder by me, did you remember how I stabbed her???"...

Without a word Arjun punched her on his face but sikander punched him harder, making Arjun fall on the ground.

" you still are the same ACP Rawte, I have warned you so many times but stubborn kid you are! But don't worry, I will send you at the same place where ur wife is, so that u both can romance well" Sikander said. Arjun cant take his creepy words anymore and so he took out his gun with no dalays of even seconds and shot him on his knee cap. His man came into action but Sameer and ETF team took care of them, one by one.

Arjun: no I am not the same, have become a hard rock, who didn't have anything to loose, not scared of death. Tu apni soch.

Arjun started puching sikander, he placed one hand on sikander's wound in order to give him pain and with other he was punching him.

Finally with the help of backup, his man was arrested and ETF team moved in.

" stop it Arjun, stop it please. Let the law do its work" Sameer said. " no I cant leave him to law... I have to ..."...

Sameer cut him and arrested Sikander in the next minute. But sikander was clever, he somehow freed his hands and took snatched Sameer's gun and pointed it to Arjun.

" no matter, how much smart you are nut I am smarter, I will... bang"... Arjun shot him in his head and Sikander is death on the spot.

With everyone's statements, no claims were on Arjun that he broke any law. The life was again back in everyone's life but still two people are still alone, Sameer and Arjun.

Arjun was in his office again with no glaring on files today but resting his head on table.

FLASHBACK

" Please Arjun, stop it. You are getting naughtier day by day. Leave me, its already morning and you jerk didn't let me sleep the whole night." Roshini said still on the bed with her husband Arjun. " hmm, stop being so mean.." arjun.

Roshini jumped of the bed and moved to washroom. " Roshini, come back na... u know I cant wake up properly without our kiss!" arjun said lazily lying on the bed.

Roshini( coming out of the washroom all smiling): and what will happen when I am not around you ever??

Arjun: shut up, I will not let that happen. You will always be with me... always... Because I cant live with out you...

Roshini(cupping his face): no Arjun, I don't want this to happen. Even in my absence, I want you to live, to move on and live your life...

FLASHBACK ENDS

" want some cutting chai?" Sameer was standing in front of Arjun in his office with a mug of coffee and a cutting chai, making Arjun out of his flashback.

Sameer: are you ok??

Arjun: ya Sam, I think, I can move on now...

Now you can throw things on me, but still i prefer tomotoes😆😆😉... please do tell me how it is and critics always welcome😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
wow
beautiful os
love it
👏👏👏👏
Edited by khemanisarita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ex cause me plz


ab ye mat bolna kya re?
ruko abi padh ke aati hu...lol
side plz..
main sukh ke kanta ho gayi tere iss os ke chakkar mein...

edit:-

lovely-super OS
heeheh 😳
i just love an OS etc
riya i vll kill u😡 use badka mat 😡 😆
sys!! she is coolbie ...shaant lady!!😃

love u Juhi🤗
Fb scene were awesome!
muah dear! Finally Sik ki band baja ke baith hi gaya arjunva!!
Edited by lizadavidmm - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
reswaaa

buhahahahah...

juhiii...u have no idea how happy i am to see u here...welcome, and hope tum itne ache ache os likhte raho...because i will demand from u more like this in future😆

coming back to os...👏👏 awesome! the FB between rosh sam arjun was cute. uff arjun and his PDA infront of sam😆 and the dosti moments...cute.

and then...sik ka the end...KKC u rot in hell!😡🤢 good arjun shoot him point blank.

and again arni FB...uff arjunnn😳😳 and the line move on...so true⭐️

and again friends ke dill mill gayye...perfect ending.


loved it juhi. u are awesome writer...and mummy ko itna spoil mat karo, agar aisa hi chalta raha she will stop writng funny OS for here😭😭 aur tumse doouble kaam karwayegi😆😆😆 but meri request pe zaroor os likhna, ok?😉😆



loved it again
Edited by riyasarkar007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow.It was so simple yet so painful.
I loved it
ending was fab 😊
Edited by laila1994 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tune arjun pe likha...wow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear
n piya di 🤗
awesome os
lovely
finally sik is dead yay
party time lol
raesha convo nice
hmm fbs super duper hit
samjun bro rocks
grt title
ps. maine padh liya tha pehle hi lol
comment on d way tha
still piya di thanks for d pm
happy i m to read
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

reswaaa


buhahahahah...

juhiii...u have no idea how happy i am to see u here...welcome, and hope tum itne ache ache os likhte raho...because i will demand from u more like this in future😆

coming back to os...👏👏 awesome! the FB between rosh sam arjun was cute. uff arjun and his PDA infront of sam😆 and the dosti moments...cute.

and then...sik ka the end...KKC u rot in hell!😡🤢 good arjun shoot him point blank.

and again arni FB...uff arjunnn😳😳 and the line move on...so true⭐️

and again friends ke dill mill gayye...perfect ending.


loved it juhi. u are awesome writer...and mummy ko itna spoil mat karo, agar aisa hi chalta raha she will stop writng funny OS for here😭😭 aur tumse doouble kaam karwayegi😆😆😆 but meri request pe zaroor os likhna, ok?😉😆



loved it again


u so sweet of you dear... loved your comment. she asked me for long time... so i wrote it...
ofcourse dear i will write for u too... hugs...
i really dont know that how was it... but glad u liked it...😃
thanks for ur comment dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😃Awesome awesome awesome awesome
awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome
awesome awesome awesome awesome!!!!!!! 😃

Great job!!!!!
I loved it!! 👏

P.s- Thanks for the pm Riya!!
😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome,superb os
fb is awesome,blosam

thanx 4 pm me

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