Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue..'#3:New thread link:P 47 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Leki

oh no Ri will miss updates... she is on break from tomorrow till Nov... i feel for RI😆

Originally posted by: beenish248

What the i was not expected slap from shree i was shocked when i read i thought how on the earth shree chould slap her BEST Friend 😲 then i also thought from shree's point of veiw Then i am able understand shree's point of view when we TRUST Someone blindly and they betryd us how its feels 😭

MINDBELOWING update dear loved it

waiting for next part can't wait now ..

Originally posted by: srividhya68

CONGRATULATIONS FOR 3RD THREAD👍🏼👍🏼

I LOVED EACH AND EVERY ONE'S REACTION
THEIR REACTIONS WERE PROTRAYED BEAUTIFULLY
HANDS OFF TO U FOR THAT👏


ALL FOUR HAVE THE RIGHTS TO FEEL BETRAYED...EVEN THOUGH HER DECISION TO HIDE WAS PURE... BUT EVERYONE WILL FEEL THE SAME AS THEM WHEN THEY GET TO KNOW THAT THE PERSON WHO THEY LOVED SO MUCH HAS LIED TO THEM...

WE MIGHT FEEL BETRATED FOR SMALL THINGS ITSELF...BUT THIS IS NOT THE SMALL THING...IT WAS MATTER OF LIFE TO SOMEONE(U-KNOW-WHO)

THEY FOUR MUST FORGIVE HER EASILY...SHE MUST AGAIN START FROM THE START TO GAIN THEIR TRUST AND ESPECIALLY THEIR LOVE...ITS JUST MY POINT OF VIEW

I'M EAGRELY WAITING TO SEE HOW THE STORY PROGRESS FURTHER...

P.S: I THINK I'M GOING TO BECOME TIRED ALWAYS SAYING THAT U R A AWESOME WRITER...
BUT U R REALLY A FANTABULOUS WRITER

Originally posted by: AbhiyaMaaneet

Congrats 4 d New Thread...

Awesome Update...

Loved It...

Can't Wait 4 d Next Part...

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

awesome update...

made me speechless...

song was apt for her situation...

waiting for the next explosion and ofcourse the revealations...

update soon

Originally posted by: -Amri-

First of all, thanks a ton for commenting religiously on my story, dear. I always look forward to reading your comments:)

I had a hard time writing this, because personally I do not think violence against women is justified in any situation/circumstance. Yet, I had to portray the emotions in this story properly, and I felt that Shree's reaction would be...expected😲

Thanks for loving the update! New one coming up soon😊

Originally posted by: Live-life

All I can say is

😲

and

😳

Abb mein full comment next update pe doongi

I am at the verge of tears right now...😭😭

Update soon!!!

Originally posted by: abjeya

thank you so much for dedicating this update to me. I really just gave what my thoughts were. it was really nice but it seems like riya has a really painful past but yeah in the end she is also just a mere mortal. and felt bad when shree slapped her but his reaction was justified. please update soon. want to know the reason why riya did all this.