ArAkshi OS: Healing souls - Page 2

Originally posted by: SAKSHI..

res/ unres...

🥳Yepie...me first...!!!!😃😃
Seeing the PM i stopped all my work and thought first to reserve the comment hehehheehe😆
Wow...!!! amazing story...👏
Really loved it...!!
I always find this OS thing veryyy difficult...because you have to pen down all your thoughts in limited words...and as you know me, my 4 part update...is already 12 now...hehehee I myself dont know wn ill end it...😉
This was really good...👍🏼
that first word itself...'mat jao' itself had its impact...👏
I really liked the way you drew the analogy between the thunder outside and the inner turmoil of Arjun that was the best part...again that word .mat jao, had its impact when he pleaded...😊
really loved it...would love to read more from you...!!!!
😊

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Awesome story! very well written!

loved it!

Originally posted by: life93

hi sukku 🤗... awesome...loved it to the core!...i loved their bonding ... brilliant ...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: PoohLover

GF ji tussi kamaal ho yaar...kitni changi seh likha...mainu yeh OS bohot pasand aayi...bohot emotional thi lekin tune usse bohot aachi tarah seh likhi...mainu tere naal bohot proud feel hoyasi 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

(hope that was good punjabi)😳

Amazing sakuuu...loove it to the core...better write mooore soon apni GF Ji and Sweet sautan ke liye...Did i say that your're writing is amazing...agar nahi toh ab kehti hoon,GF ji aap ek brilliant writer ho and all your OS always touches my heart😛

Hats off to you ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Originally posted by: Sakuu

Hunnyboo!☺️

Abh jaa ke likh rahi ho memsaab!😡

Lekin m really glad ke tumhe achha laga 😊 Also love how u talk Afghan style Punjabi 😆😛

Ahhw, thnks, je rougirai😳

and will write soon😊

Originally posted by: Sakuu

Hunnyboo!☺️

Abh jaa ke likh rahi ho memsaab!😡

Lekin m really glad ke tumhe achha laga😊Also love how u talk Afghan style Punjabi😆😛

Ahhw, thnks, je rougirai😳

and will write soon😊

Originally posted by: nicky13

Sautan g maaf karna g late reply kar rahi haan ... It's really very sweet story yaar ... Very-2 emotional waali ... Wow what a relationship between these two ... What sweet deal ki c dona ch ... But jealous Arjun g looking sweet more than any other sweets te fer chahe uh mera fav besan da Ladoo hi kion na hove 😛 ... You wrote it very well Sautan g and I love your story and I love you tooo 😳

Haw, bessan de ladu to vi zyada sweet? Eh kuchh zyada nahi ho reha missy!

And main vi tainu lab ju

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Sorry ji...i was sleeping sleeping and dreaming dreaming of my cuties GF ji 😳 😆 😆 else i would never missed your OS..you know nah 😳 😃😃

😲😲😲Haila thats a new punjabi kya...koi baat nahii im also hatke nah toh my punjabi also will be hatke🤣

Originally posted by: Payal_156

hey dear
awesome os
very well written 👏
so emotional
heart touching potray of emotions
title
😉
lov d os 😃
u r an amazing writer