OS : Koi Apna *Complete* - Page 2

bt mridu
yarr..i had expecteda swt romantic confession or atleast a soothing words filled romantic scene betn SaSha...

i hope u write th sequel of this...or a one more part...

will love to read it...

unressed my comment on page 1 :)

First of all...Mridu! Thatz d spirit gurl...Agar Kisi ko Problem Hai then go to hell!! Huhhh!!! :/ now to updatewa...Awsummm! Luvd Raesha!!!! Hayeee! Lovd Aayesh ki Umadti feelings!! Awww...Luvd Her Concern fr him! Aayesh ne Bhai ko zabsrdasti pakad kr khana khilaya! Gud!!! Hayeee...Bhai aisi smiles doge na toh Aayesh ke saath saath apni Mriduwa bhi yhi pe flat ho jaavegi!😆 Hailllaaa!!!!! Main toh bhul hi gyi ki wo already h!! 🤣 Me Also feeling lyk cryingg wid bhai...!!! 😭 Really Bhai lost evrything..Arjun,Roshni,His Parents! Now Aayesh only u can support! Thanxxx 4 pm Mridu! Love,Shanaya...(Sam Bhai Ki Sister Dearest!)

res...
will edit later...
btw phle wala kyu delete kiya JB???>.<
*edited*
glad u decided to write it in a new thread... :P
super top JB...
aisha's concern for sam lovely...
and her pov was awesome...
aahan her conflict with her heart and mind...was a treat to read😉so she finally realized ki she loves sam.. and sam bhi shayad...
loved her determination...bike haan cool...
aww the way she made sam eat food... haaye mai mar jawa :P
aur sam ka dialogue tumne phir pe li?? lol iska matlab kya?? sam bht janta hai aisha ko ahem ahem😉
omg sam is so lonely... :'( glad aisha is trying to remove his lonliness...
but ye kaha end kya tune??? aisa cliffy??? aisha ne confess nai kiya?? :'( aise point pe koi stop karta hai JB >.<
P.S. teri dhamkees as usual rocked... i loved ur notes😉 mera itna naam liya haaye meri JB...
continue soon... and plz dnt tell me ye end tha???

Originally posted by: MriduB

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dubara bata deti hunn agar padhne mein kasht huya ho toh...no res cmnts!

@Bhawna : Abhi Sam sirf Towel mein tha na...u haven't read my other works...usmein Sam bechara bahut kuch karta hai...sabut ke liye ask Miss Devildiva aka Divya!😉

mujhe to bht kuch pta hai... 😉 P

FF se OS kyun kar diya...😭😭

Awesome os dear.
Sam is sucha a great chief.
Vo itni takleef mai hai firbhi work.
Nice yaar.
Thanx for pm.

edited my comment on page 2 :P

atlast i found the new thread...please update soon dear