ARIYA:Tere ishq pe jaan kurbaan..last part pg 58 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice start
lovely concept
wow riya is so daring, she cares Arjun alot
She stolen pass key only for the sake of Arjun and his mission
Hats off to this daring Riya
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

thank u readers for the lovely response...


love u all for the efforts u take to read our work/..


part 2


Arjun quickly uses the passkey and finds out that the key




is correct and get a link of someone name sikky'



Arjun pov: yahin sikkander par yahan toh iske sirf kale




karmamone ke barien details hai..




Aur yeh kya agle 5 din ke andar wooh kuch ladkiyon ko



yahan se lekar jana wala hai..through waterr route..and




drug dela karne wala hai..




may be baki ki info..ke liye aur paaskeys hongi..




Thank u riya.. mere liye itna kuch karne ke liye..




mere liye ladne ke liye..




mujhe ussee baat karne chahiye par yahan nahi uske




ghar jakar baat karta hoon..




He collected his required information and went to




conference room to call for riya..




Riya was working on her files' whn he entered and stood




behind her..she was working .. she didn't evne turn back




bt came to know that arjun was there.




Riya: jee sir.. kuch kaam tha..??




Arjun was shocked..



it was he who use to sense her presence without looking



at her.. bt this time she had recognized his presence..



he remembered her words..




" jisse dil ki ahat sunai deti hai usee chehra dekhne ke zarorat nahi hoti"




Riya: sir.. kuch kam tha?





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Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Before arjun could speak anything..




rathore barked in the room..




He was in the total roudy avatar today..




he was boiling with anger and his eyes was red..




Arjun: rathod kya hua?




Rathore: riya in my cabin now?(he roared like a lion)




Riya was so scared that she forgot to breadth for a




moment.. arjun knew rathod might have come to know




about riya stealing his passkey…




riya also knew it .. bt she was ready for the punishment..




Riya in rathore's cabin..




Riya: jee sir..




Rathod: riya tumne esa kiya? Out of all u did this?




Riya: sir meine..




Rathod: not a word more miss riya mukherjee..



u are an etf officer.. protocols, systems ,




rules tumne kuch nahi socha..




kya itni andhi hogai ho apne pyar mein..??




Every body knows that riya loves arjun more than




anything..




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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Hume guhna hone se rokne ka kaam diya hai..




gunah karne ka nahi.. u are theif riya.., u stole ..




Riya: yes sir I stole the passkey..




meine passkey churai hai..



meine passkey churai kyonki mein jisse pyar karte hoon




usee yun tadapte nahi dekh satke..




rathore: adhni hogai ho tum pyar mein riya…




tumne paass key dekar rawte ki mushkle aur badhai..




ab kaunsa toofan ayega uska andaza bhi nahi hai tumhe..




riya: toofan toh aa chuka hai.. aur barbadi bhi ho chuke




hai..wooh toofan sab kuch toh le gaya..




roshni ki jaan,,




she stoppedd for a sec and said..




apke aur arjun sir ke dosti..



arjun sir ke khushiyan..



unka sukoon sab le jaa chuka hai wooh toofan..




par abb wooh iss tofan se ladkar jitna chahte hai wooh..




sikander ko khatam karna hai roshni ki maut ka badla,




rathod: enough riya..




rawte ke pyaar mein usee ki zubaan bolne lagi ho tum…




kaun hai sikander,… dekha hai tumne ussee.???




Janti ho ussee? Kaise khatam karega rawte usee?




Bolo… jawab hai tumahre paas????




Kisi paas iska jawab nahi hai…riya …




Riya: jawab toh hai sir.. sikander hai … zinda hai.. aur





mumbai mein hai.. uske hone ka sabot hai roshni ki





maut..aur arjun sir ussee zaror marenge..



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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Sir aap shayad wooh paaskey issliye chahte the kyonki




aap apne dost ko protect karna chahte hai..





par meine wooh paaskey unhe isliye di kyonki mein unhe




sukon se jete hue dekhna chahti hoon..




Jiss din se roshni ki jaan gai arjun sir ek raat nahi soye..




mein unke wooh bhayanak sapno se unhe chutkara dilana




chahti hoon.. taki wooh ek pal toh sukkoon ka jee sake..




Sir please request karti hoon..




sikander ko marne mein arjun sir ki madad kijiye..





warna wooh kabhi cheen se jee nahi payenge..




Rathore: miss riya mukherjee..




u r suspended from etf for breaking the protocols and




doing activities against etf..





Yeh tumhara suspension letter..




apne idd card aur gun yahan rakhkar chali jau..




Riya: thik hai sir.. mein chali jaungi..




hoo sake toh roshni ke liye arjun sir ka saath dijiyega..




unhe bohot taklif hoti hogi aap dono ko ese dekhke..




She stormed out of the cabin..





and to see arjun standing there.





precap:


will riya be ever back in etf??


will arjun do something to bring riya back???

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
OMG...
Itna sab kuch hojayega,yeh na pata thha...
Riya is supporting Arjun in his mission.
Rathod bhai got to know abt it and he is angry.
But,question is that,how come Rathod bhai got to know that Riya stole the pass key.
Truly loved Riya's determination to support Arjun in his mission.
Hats off to her.
She even left her job from ETF.
Riya's words' spoken in the favour of Arjun was superb and true.Just loved it.
Arjun ko pata chal gaya.
Ya Allah...
Ab kya hoga???
Really scared.
Precap is interesting.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
WOW Super cool update... Riya👏 the way she spoke to Rathore supported Arjun WOW Great...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Nice upadte thanks for pm plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
super awesome update..


rathod came to know that riya had stolen the passkey and he suspended her for that..


i hope arjun can bring her back to etf..


riya was still strong to fight with rathore that sikander doesnt exist and she will help arjun to fight him..

dialogues are well written and really beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome update
omg rathore suspended riya from etf
hope arjun ll do something
loved the way both feel each other's presence
cont soon

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