Arakshi FF: Rang jo Lagyo, pt 8, pg32, 10/11; pm later - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nicky13

Thanks Rati that you liked the name I suggested for Chhotu's GF ... ThanQ- 2
Now come to the update ... Hmm loved it ... It is awesome ... Sam and Aysha love life is almost on the track ... Love the way Sakhshi was teasing Aysha... But ye Arjun sahib g kuchh jiyada hi Akdu hain ... Ab bhai aapko usse Pyar ho giya hai tou ussko apne se door Rehne ko kion bolte ho... Accept it buddy ... But nahi janab ki akad beech tapakti hai na... Hmm that undercover mission was amazing yaar... Sakhshi ka sexy dance and wow the way she was seducing Arjun that was so wonderful ... Mission was super success... Hmm and I m sure that Sakhshi ki Ek achhi waali class Lagne waali hai ... Aww precap oh Rabb g Arakshi fight and woh Bhi big waali ... I m scared 😲 Update ASAP sweety :)



Thanks so much and I am really thankful you suggessted the name..
I know Ayesha and Sam will soon be becoming one...very soon...
Well Mr. Akdu will take some time..
I am really happy you liked undercover mission... dont worry about fight..
toda spice bhi chahiye story mein aur humari Sakshi toh teeki mirchi hai..
Arjun ko mirchi kaane ki todi aadat toh dalni padegi...lol...with be updating soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Never underestimates the power of a girl 😎 hats off to you to portray Sakshi like that...Mr Acp dared to talk to her like that..haha now see they could save the girls because of Sakshi help only 👏 👏 👏

Hey bharati..I know girls are independent today and all no less in any field..
I really wanted to portray Sakshi as strong girl..that's why took this route..
ACP sir ko bhi acha samaj aaya...
I totally love the way Acp Arjun alias Mr akdu 😆😆😆 was getting irritated and jealous in the whole update😃 😃 😃
ACP sir maane ge nahin...He is deeply affected by her..lekin he wont admit it for now

Sakshi must be looking sooo seksy and that too dancing with shahid...absolutely awesome 😳
I m glad you liked the idea of Shahid dancing with Sakshi..
Looove loove the update and yes the precap absolutely interesting and increase my eagerness to read the next chapter 😛 😛

Haha looove your poem...but haan tum average writer nahi ho...meri rati is a brilliant writer..ab samjhi ya samjhaon?😳😳
thanks so much..will be updating soon...
K k samaj gayi..thanks so so much bharati..u r real sweetheart
Update soonish and thank you soo much for the update and pm 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome... Thanks for pm..


thanks so much...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pihu_angad

aweome update..

continue soon.


thanks so much...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

wow...beautiful update...sakshi teasing aisha was a nic part...i m glad dat u put SaSha scenes in this...

about Aman u asked...sorry for last time...remember i told u i m writing a story vid HARSHAD as a lead...his name is Aman there...so it jst slipped off my tongue...

gud dat u included Prem in this part...

sakshi is brave nd daring enough to take upto any situation...

wow...shahid as a cameo role...great...

the last dialogue of sakshi ws gud...

precap is interesting...

continue soon...

love
Aisha


THanks so much..this story has everyone's story in it and how Sakshi helps them in their
story...so right now focus is on Raesha..you will see more of their romance soon..

Oh k..You have to sometime make me read your story..I m sure it will be amazing..

Ya cannot get rid of Prem ...dil nahin manta...

I am glad you liked Shahid's cameo..who better than him to include for dance..

thanks so much..
will be updating soon..love dear..😊🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakuu

hmm chhotu ki chhoti ho sakti hai...

Shradha/ Sandhya/Aarti?


Hmm thanks for suggestion.I will think about it..I want a good punjabi girl for himm..
someone fiercy yet punjabi..i dont know why..who else we can think of..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKSHI..

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SORRY SORRY sorryyy for being sooo late...!!!!!!! Really sorry haaan...!!!
Well coming to your update...
It was sooo goooddd !!
Really liked it...
now the detailing part...
Well pehle to i was happy to see prem back...i mean not going...
Dn...Akdu ...pehle to sunta nai hai ki bechari kehna kya chahati hai...n upar se use hi dosh dete hai ki y didnt she say n was jst standing...!! He indeed was stupid ..hahhaah
Well well well Miss Anand is no usual girl...she provided the lead so had full right to accompany dm...bt bt bt...adkdu n his akad..!!
Oh...sakshi wud luk stunning in that dress...!!
She acted sooo smartly...wow...!!
Well the last part was my fav...sakshi defensing herself...and then her dialogue...esp SYS...
Hahahaa ACPwas dumbstruck ..!!! hahahhaha
Amazing update ...realy loved it...!!
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Hey dont be sorry at all..i totally understand..you can comment whenever u want
no worries aur friends me no sorry no thankyou..(i know chessy tha...fir bhi chalta hai)

I am glad you liked the update..
thanks I could not just let prem go..
Well woh Mr. Akdu hai..toda toh akad dikhaye ga..
I know she is Sakshi singh..she is today's girl..independent and brave..
Well it will be take mr. ACP to decode her..
woh teeki mirchi hai...toda time toh lage ga..ACP sir ko adjust hone mein..
I m glad you liked Sakshi defending part..
thanks so so much sweetheart..🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello everyone ..thanks everyone for lovely comments..i Hope u guys like this chapter..honestly this time I also dont know what I have written..hope this one makes sense..
Now I will be working on my other story..so next chapter probably on sunday..
i hope you guys like it otherwise I m ready for gallis and ande and tamatar..😆

Chapter 7

Arjun came out and saw Sakshi standing with Ayesha and taking care of the girls that were rescued. He was very angry at her rather he was angry at himself for thinking about her too much. Why did he stopped her from joining the mission very beginning? Was he merely wanted her to stay away from him or was he worried about her? He does not know answers to these questions but the answer that he had rather found out or should I say Sakshi had showed him was that he was judging her completely wrong. He felt today that he does not even know her at all. It was first time Arjun Rawte was completely wrong in analyzing someone. Wait a minute...Arjun why are you even analyzing her? Remember what you told her yesterday that she should stay away from you. That applies to you too.. Stay away from this Miss Publicist.

Her chain of thoughts was broken by Prem.

Prem: Hey Arjun will you do me a favor?

Arjun: What

In a meanwhile Ayesha put all the rescued girls in the van and they were taking all of them to the police headquarters so that their family members can be contacted and sent back home.

Liza went with the girls.

Chotu was also going with them.

Sameer asked Shree to go home and he himself went to drop Ayesha to her place.

Suddenly Prem came to Sakshi

Prem: Hey Jaan..Nice work waise..Ek baat bolni thi. I have asked Arjun to drop you home.

Sakshi: What the...Prem are you gone nuts..I am not going with that Akdau. Why cannot you drop me?

Prem: Hey I have to go to police headquarters. Since this club belonged to my area. I have to do paperwork and also contact girl's families and necessary women NGO's . Chotu and Liza also went there. So I have to go.

Sakshi: Its ok Prem. I will take a taxi. I won't go with that angry young man.

Prem: Very funny. Nahin yaar iss time no taxi. I have already talked to him and he said he will drop you.

Sakshi: What ..he said he will..tum jaante ho iska matlab..achi tarah SYS session lega mera..kya pata meri zindagi mein kal ho nah ho...Woh toh mera encounter kar dega aur kisi ko pata bhi nahin chale ga.. Are deva..tum mera dost hai ya dushman Prem..

Prem: Hahaha..Kuch nahin hoga tujhe..band kar apni nautanki..Stop being Mirchi Madam and be a sweetheart and go with him.

By now Arjun had brought the car and was waiting for Sakshi to get it.

Sakshi saw him with the car and was skeptical to get in..

She gave a look to Prem and looked up towards the sky thinking bacha lena deva and finally got in the car.

Almost after driving for a 2 minutes, Arjun stopped the car.

Sakshi: OMG Sakshi...lagta hai tera akhri waqt aa gaya hai...

She saw Arjun coming towards her.

Sakshi: Dekho Arjun ruk jao..If you do something to me, you will not be saved either..

Arjun was really surprised at what the hell she was talking. He stopped for a second and asked: What is wrong with you..Why I won't be saved. I am ACP. I know ways to save myself.

Sakshi: What..Iska matlab, you are definitely going to ...OMG this is not fair..abhi toh meri shaadi bhi nahin hui hai...

Arjun could not take blabbering of this girl anymore..He might have said those two sentences just to scare her because she has been irritating him since they came to club.

He still moved towards her.

Sakshi shut her eyes and was making herself and ready to fight, when she felt her seat belt being moved. She realized Arjun was just making her wear seat belt. She finally felt some relief. Woh kal ka subah dekh paaye gi..This man is not going to kill him.

Sakshi: Tum bol nahin sakte the, I could have wore it myself.

Arjun: Tum meri kahi hui baat kahan manti ho and honestly I don't want to talk to you.

Sakshi: Fine I don't want to talk to you either.

She averted her gaze to the road and the journey towards Sakshi's house was in complete silence.

As soon as Sakshi's house came, she quickly got out and was about to shut the door when she heard Arjun spoke

Arjun: Your welcome...

Sakshi: Whatever and just shut the door of the car aggressively and went in.

Arjun did not even realize that a really small smile came on corner of his lips seeing her antics. He also went to his home.

Next morning

Sakshi woke up and get ready to go to office. She came out of the shower and switched on radio and was enjoying listening to music and simultaneously getting ready..

Song on radio ( I know you guys might be super annoyed with me for including songs in update..But what I can tell I love having some songs)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdB2n4AMOX8[/YOUTUBE]

Sakshi was singing, dancing and also getting ready at the same time...(multi tasking u know..lol)

Na Chaand Ka Na Taaron Ka

Na Phoolon Ka Na Baharon Ka

Na Nazaron Ka Na Isharon Ka

Na Apno Ka Na Begaano Ka

Meri Zindagi Mein Ajnabee Ka Intezaar Hai

Main Kya Karoon Ajnabee Se Mujhe Pyaar Hai

Woh Ajnabee Jaana Pehchaana

Sapno Mein Uka Hai Aana Jaana

Aa Ajnabee Tere Liye

Dil Yeh Mera Bekaraar Hai

Meri Zindagi Mein Ajnabee Ka Intezaar Hai

Main Kya Karoon Ajnabee Se Mujhe Pyaar Hai

Note: You have to imagine..Screen is shifted in half..One side we are seeing Arjun getting ready and other side Sakshi

On the other side Arjun was getting ready to go to office too ( at his house offcourse) and also without listening to radio (lol)

Khushbon Ki Gali Mein In Hawaon Ne Dekha

Maine Chehra Uska Dilkash Fizaon Mein Dekha

Oh Bekhayal Karta Hai

Oh Bada Deewana Hai

In Labon Ka Pyaasa Hai

Dil Ka Aashiqana Hai

Sakshi is happily humming song and putting her bangles and on the other side Arjun while emotionally putting his band on his arm.. Sakshi kept her laptop and notepad in her bag and Arjun kept his gun.

Ab To Uske Liye Hi Raat Bhar Jaagti Hoon

Aye Gadiyaan Milan Ki Yeh Dua Maangti Hoon

Oh Jaaneman Mohabbat Mein Faasla Zaroori Hai

Dhadkane Yeh Kehti Hai Chaar Din Ki Doori Hai

Jaaneman Mohabbat Mein Faasla Zaroori Hai

Dhadkane Yeh Kehti Hai Chaar Din Ki Doori Hai

Woh Ajnabee Jaana Pehchaana

Sapno Mein Uka Hai Aana Jaana

Aa Ajnabee Tere Liye

Dil Yeh Mera Bekaraar Hai

Meri Zindagi Mein Ajnabee Ka Intezaar Hai

Main Kya Karoon Ajnabee Se Mujhe Pyaar Hai

Sakshi left her house happily to go to office whereas Arjun left his house to go to office with big grief and strong determination in his mind. Both is unknown to this fact that right now their destination may be ETF headquarters but time is going to come very soon when they both will become each other's destination soon. They say matches are already made in heaven but unka milna is left in this world. Sometimes that person is right in front of us and we are not able to realize that or maybe sometimes we do realize it but does not want to admit it. Lekin destiny will show its colors and they both won't even know when they both will be engulfed by the color of love.

Sakshi came to office first and straight went to conference hall where Shree, Ayesha, Chotu and Liza were sitting. She straight went to Shree.

Sakshi: Kameeno tumhe sharam nahin aati. Kal raat mujhe akele chod kar chale ga. Yeh nahin pata tha ki Sakshi ko bhi drop kar de.

Shree: Lekin mujhe laga Prem will drop you.

Liza: Lekin Prem toh came to police headquarters.

Shree: then who dropped you?

Sakshi: Wohi Junior Amitabh Bachchan.

Chotu: haila Abhishek Bachchan dropped you.

Ayesha: Woh Arjun Sir ki baat kar rahi hai.

Chotu: Oh you mean angry young man ACP SYS dropped you aur phir bhi tu zinda hai. Yeh kaise hua. Humhe toh laga tha kal tujhe club mein dekne ke baad, we won't see you anymore.

Sakshi: Meine bhi yahin socha tha, lekin woh kehte hain nah Jako rakhe saiyan, maar sake na koi (Nobody can harm you if God protects you).

Everybody started laughing at Sakshi's nautanki.

Suddenly Sameer and Arjun entered the conference hall and everybody became serious and went back to work.

To everyone's utter surprise Sakshi did not get any SYS from Arjun. He just completely ignored her.

Days keep on passing

Arjun and Sakshi were completely ignoring each other to the max.

Well Sakshi was doing better job at ignoring than Arjun. Not knowingly he would end up stealing glances at her now and then. He was actually very confused himself but he concluded that was not his fault. Every day he was seeing new Sakshi. She was totally bubbly and jhalli with Shree, Liza, chotu and Ayesha but she will be so brave and confident during cases. Her articles showed her very intelligent and complete thinker. She would provide them great leads during the cases and have great informers too. If you hear her talking in the conference hall with Shree and company, one would realize all they talk about was food and desserts and anybody would think they do nothing but when they are in field together, they all were just fireworks. This girl has so many traits that it was hard to ignore her. She was breadth of fresh air to the team. She had brought different energy with her to the team.

After a week

Sakshi walked in conference hall.

Sakshi: Hey is Sameer sir in his cabin?

Ayesha: Ya why?

Sakshi: Kuch nahin. I just needed to talk. I will come.

With that she went to Sameer's cabin

Sakshi: Can I come in?

Sameer: Are Sakshi come nah.

Sakshi: Hey Sameer I needed to tell you something.

Sameer: hmm bolo

With that they both talked and she went back to conference hall to do her work.

Sameer came to cabin and announced commissioner sir was here to talk.

They all had a meeting with Commissioner sir and then he left.

Sakshi suddenly remembered something and ran to talk to Commissioner sir in the parking. There she saw Arjun talking with Commissioner sir.

Arjun: Sir you promised me Sikander ke maamle me you will help me.

Commissioner: I am trying Arjun, lekin abhi tak koi information nahin mili hai.

Arjun: Lekin mein kitni wait karo sir, aap toh jaante hain I only joined ETF to nab Sikander. Meri life ka ek hi maqsad hai. Sikander ki maut.

Commissioner: Mein samaj sakta hoon Arjun. I am trying. Just have some patience.

With that he left.

Arjun was very angry and irritated with this process going so slow. He muttered to himself, kab tak patience rako sir.

With that he went inside the office oblivious to the fact Sakshi had heard their talk.

Sakshi felt really bad seeing him so vulnerable. She went inside to conference hall too.

She went to where Arjun was sitting

Sakshi: Arjun woh..

Arjun: Not now Sakshi..

Sakshi: Arjun woh meine tumhari aur Commissioner sir ki baatein sun lit hi.. I wanted to tell you...

Arjun was extremely pissed now..He got up and held her by both the arms and almost yelled at her...

Arjun: What the hell Sakshi..How dare you listen to my personal talk...Don't you have any shame.

Sakshi: You are hurting me Arjun..

Everybody was surprised to see Arjun and Sakshi fighting like that..

Arjun: No you are hurting me or should I say irritating me. Jab se aayi ho, you always do something or other to irritate me. Tumhe apni insult karane mein mazza aata hai kya. Actually reality is tumhe har waqt apne aap ko mahaan dikhane ki padi rehti hai. Always interfering in everybody else's business. Meri aur commissioner sir ki baatein sun li and you are here to sympathize with me. I don't need your sympathy. Samjahi tum..

Sakshi: Lekin Arjun meri baat toh suno

Arjun: I cannot believe you Sakshi. Itni insult hone ke baad bhi you are still trying to make me understand. Actually galti tumhare parents ki hai. They must be fulfilling all your demands since childhood and that had made you stubborn. Tumhe lagta the world revolves around you. Sakshi tum rich parents ki bigaadi hui beti ho aur kuch nahin..You are rich spoilt brat. That day too, you came to club when I told you not to come but you needed to show me wrong. You disgust me Sakshi Singh...

With that he left her and was about to exit the conference hall..

Sakshi: How dare you ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte. How dare you? Tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui mere family ke against bolne ki. What do you think of yourself. Tumhe kya lagta hai. Only you are suffering in this world and everybody else's life is all rosy. Dukh har kissi ke life mein hai. Mein yeh nahin keh rahi tumhara dukh kuch kam hai. Lekin tumhara dukh yahan (pointing finger to his heart) hai ,isse yahan mat le kar jaao (pointing finger to his brain). You think you are always right and we all are always wrong. Waise hi yeh job itni stressful hai aur tum chahte hai ki hum sab tumhare jaise gusse waali sakal bana kar baithe rahe.

Aur I was not coming to sympathize with you. I was only trying to tell you..

Before she could finish Arjun cut her off.

Arjun: I am not interested in listening anything. I told you other day too, stay away from me and I am telling you again..Stay away from me...

Before he could finish this time Sakshi cut her off..

Sakshi: Shut up..Did you hear shut up and Just go to hell...HELLL...hell..

With that she picked her stuff and stormed out of the office and Arjun also went to terrace of ETF headquarters.

Everybody who was witness to this scene was still trying to understand, what the hell did just happened her.

Precap: New Case and Meet Arnav Singh Raizada and his family ...

Edited by shaleenrocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yuppie me first...ressie res 🥳

unres😳😳😳

Oye soni kudi...you are back with an update..thats just awesome...

Coming to the update...haha love sakshi sense of humour..the way she was praying to lord to save her from arjun and then her and prem convo...that too funny actually

Omg this khadoos and akduu AAcp...look how he is talking to sakshi...im really gonna give him a sweet punch..dhishyum dhishyum but haan i really love akdu Acp and his miss publicist fights...its just alag and totally unique😳😃😛

Did i read write...Arnav singh Raizada and family in precap...thats sounds really interesting..am too excited now to read next part

Ps- i really want to see Arjun realizing that he behaved very rudely to sakshi and he should not have talked like that😳

Pps-please please you continue utting song in your updates..i just loove them

Ppps- oye tum director bhi ban gayi kya...screen rotating to Arjun then back to Sakshi..kya baat kya baat kya baat...awesome ji 😆

Ppps-thank you very much for this amazing update..me just loooves it ⭐️
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Edited by PoohLover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey soo intresting .angry young man arjun ki dialouges are so.gud.
Poor.sakshi shez always at the recieving end.
And precap kya tha asr family cant wait yaar
update sooon

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