OS:Letter's To ETF By Riya(Important Note at Page-25) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Hey Ila...
Loved the prologue.
It was indeed really very touching.
Indeed,Riya's death shook everyone from the core.
Please continue...
I guess,u should start writing the letter from Rathod first.
Continue soon.




thnx for reading it and appreciating it... i will look for ur suggestion
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
first toh ur wish but last shuld be arjun's!!!!!

chill madam i just confirmed whether its u or not
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome concept and
superb prologue...1!
it was very heart touching...!!
missing riya like them...!!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: alee001

first toh ur wish but last shuld be arjun's!!!!!


chill madam i just confirmed whether its u or not



ok madam ji...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nicely written superb tumne fir se riya ki yaad dila di😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Nc yaaar plxzzz post it
Nc cncept ...
strt wid chotu shree sam and arjun
Plzzz pm me...
Plzz plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Letter To Chotu

Next day shree enter the office little early and placed the envelope where there team member can find the envelope easily and waited for them to come. First chotu enters and says hii to shree. Shree gives a faint smile to him and get into thought for open a envelope or not and thinking of that... then their bosses Rathore sir and arjun sir came in the conference room. As there was no case they were told to complete the paper work... they leave leave to their respective cabin. Shree also went to his tech world that his his place where he always spend most of the time with gadget and thinking of opening the envelope or not but he doesnt get that much courage. Here Chotu comes to his Desk and opens the desk where he has put the photo of his 11:30 vaali he has taken that pic secretly except his best friend shree and riya noone knows about it... He saw an envelope and on the envelope To chotu was written. he got inquisitive who has put it he thought he must be shree who has put it here he was going to him for asking this but out of curiousity and thinking of its prank he changed his plans and want to read it... So, he opens the letter and start reading it...



To Chotu

Hii Chotu, agar tum ye letter pad rhe ho toh shayad tum pta chal gya hoga ki m no more... par tum dukhi mat hona vo kya hai naa muje bura lagega ...toh shree ko meri hideout place mil hi gyi mujhe toh lga tha ki usse pta hi nhi chalega... Anyway uss gadget freek ka todha toh dimaag chala anyway mujhe tumse baat krni hai..


Chotu mujhe pta hai tum mujhe bahut miss krte hoge par kya khair jo hona toh so ho gya.. Chotu jab main tumhe pehli baar dekha tha toh main dar gyi thi sorry par jab tumse baat kri toh pta chala jaise tum dikhte ho naa vaise tum ho nhi... tum itne pyaare or cute ho naa or itna saaf dil hai tumhra..


Tum aur shree naa hote toh main ETF main tik hi nhi paati mujhe tum done itna support jo kiya tumhri baatein tumhre saath masti krna and awl that sabkuch... aur rathore sir ki training and arjun sir ka kahdoos vaala look oh god tumhre saath sab kuch itna acha lgta tha mujhe...


Tumhre saath vo mastiyan vo baatein sab yaad hai mujhe vo haan hope tumhri ruby achi hogi jab tumne mujhe uske baarein mein btaya toh muje bahut hairaani huyi ki itne bade body mein ik cute saa or soft sa dil b hai and tumne muje arjun sir ke baare mein btaya toh dukh b hua or shock b jab uss khadoos ne mujhe uss terrace ki wall pe chadne ko kaha or tujhe mana kiya meri madad krne ka toh muje bahut gussa aaya anyway...


Chotu yaad hai hum riyaaz khan ki movie ke liye premiere pe saath gye the kitna mazaa aaya tha naa vaha tum toh uss actress pe fultu flat ho gye the.. u r dreaming chotu... kitni mushkil se chance mila tha and so sad riyaaz ki death ho gyi aur humein vo case solve krna pada u know vo mera fav actor tha... u know chotu vo priemeire mere liya bahut acha tha mujhe ik baat pta chali thi ki pyaar ik aisa jasba hai jab hoga toh smjh aaeyaga...


Pyaar se yaad aaya chotu tumhri 11:30 vaali ka kya haal hai baat aage badi ki nhi... I am sorry Chotu main tumhari madad nhi kar paayi plzz departmental store se aage bado plzzz... ab main toh hu nhi ab tumhe hi kuch krna padega kyuki shree toh kisi kaam ka nhi... usse apni gf... arre uska first love uska lappy se fursat mile toh vo help kare naa...


Main kitna kaam adhure chod gyi naa chotu... kbhi kbhi ye zindagi kaise pal dikha deti hai na chotu... par khushi iss baat ki hai mera aakhri case maine pura kiya aur fakar b hai ki maine itni jaan bachayi... hey chotu rona mat ab u know mujhe bura lagega... or haan mere secrets secret hi rkhe hai naa.. kahin bol toh nhi diye...


Apna khayal rkhna aur Shree ka b.. Shree kabhi bolega nhi par vo kbhi kbhi bahut senti ho jaata hai... usse uski favourite spot b le jaana usse acha lagega aur usse plzz apni gf change krne ko bolna kab tak uss lappy ke saath rahega apne lappy pe apna naam b likhwa ke rkha hai uff... kbhi kbhi toh lgta hai ki uski shaadi kisi insaan se nhi ik lappy se ho jaayegi... Rathore sir ko cofee de dena jab vo gusse mein ho haan yaad rkhna vo coffee fiki peete hai maine Shree ko bola hai par uske dimaag ke nut dheele hai toh vo kbhi bhool jaata hai and Arjun sir ki Cutting chai b saath mein gussa aur khaddos pan toh kam nhi hone vaala par todha environment todha light ho jaayega vo kya hai naa north pole or south pole ik saath nhi aa skte na...


Or unki baat ka bura mat maanana todhe gusse vaale hain par dil ke ache hain kbhi gussa kare toh ik kaan se sunana or dusre se nikaal dena aisa behave krna jaise kuch sunna nhi... Sorry yaar meri vjh se tumhra work load bad gya hoga... kbhi kbhi mom dad se milte rehna unhe acha lagega..


Thnx yaar humesha mere saath rehne ka humesha support krne ka... sabse bada thnx for arjun sir ke bag ka code yaad rkhne ka although unke gusse se bach nhi paayi but madad toh ki thi... mere saath preimiere par chalne ke liye... sorry maine tumhe bahut tease kiya hai naa par acha lgta tha... shree ki teasing vaisi hi hai naa nhi hai toh meri trf se ek jor thappad lgaana...


Acha Bas tumhaare liye itna hi hai mujhe ab shree ke liye b likhna hai acha toh ab main chalti hun... bye... hope tumhe ye acha lage and please hanste rehna... Aur meri achi yaadein yaad rkhna Mere jaane ke baad bhool mat jaana vrna Chandermukhi ki trh tumhe draaungi ab smjhe ya smjhau...


Yours Riya Mukherjee


After Reading the letter Chotu had tear in his eyes he remove the tears and thanked riya and smiles and says ik dum yedi hai.. and went to shree's desk... He saw Shree reading the letter He stops there for a while there...








So its the letter for chotu... hope its up to the mark... and you like it...
sorry agar kuch bhool gyi hun aur kuch glt likha ho sorry for any mistakes...


waiting for the response...😃




Edited by ila_tanwar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome.
i am just feeling crying.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
aww this made me emotional😭😭 riya was a grrt frnd aur jaate jaate bhi wo sab ka khyal akhne ki hi bat kar rahi thi...such a nice girl usko ETF kya hum sab bhi kabhi nahi bhool sakte...
awesum very nice update ila😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
asoon rukne ka naam hi leh rahe hai,

i could actually feel chotu reading riya's letter..


fab update..


and for ur concepts..

👏


thanks for pm

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