||Tear Drop In An Ocean|| - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
very beautifuly written Lickz!! 😊😃
i cud feel it!
I am imagining Arjun n Me maybe?🤣
Lol!!
Its Ariya 4 me.

P.S Lickz ki bachchi!!
dara dia meko!
maine socha tera bhi koi story chori hua hoga!!
😡
cry emoticon mat dia kar.
it dsnt suit ya...😉
P.S Tujhse emotional wala expect ni kia tha...
but madam,
i am impresd!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
oh god it was so heart touching
i too cried
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
OMG!!! Liki u need to stop doing that..My god gurl..U made me cry...Im still wiping my tears!!! Yaa u made me a cryingg baby...Hatss off to u gurl...U knw how to entertain ur readers..U mke u laugh,smile,smirk,get lost in romantic momentz n make us cry..!!!! I knw u all may think me as a crazzyy Shaleen Deewani bt Im in luv wid him n u all may found it a lil weird but...I imagined myself n Arjun...Yaa Yaa laugh all u wantt..!!!! Bt seriouslyy..I felt lyk im an innocent gurl,an eyewitness in one of d cases whre we met n got to knw ech other frm where we fell in luv which leads on...And im telling u liki...U literally made my heart wrench n cry in d last part!! The mere part of My n Arjun's Seperation made me cry...Enuf wid bein Senti..Awesomeee Update liki...Thanxx 4 pm! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
truly amazing. Felt the emotion. Love it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
first time emotional
wow
made me speechless
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
OMG liki what an emotional updat yaar!!! rula diya tune 😭😭😭

I had never thought in mie life u will be writing an emotional update yaar 😳

Urs are always mostly funny and based on love story... This was totally diifferent frm all ur other writing and u not what todays this os has becme mie fav osthen all ur other os 😳

Gr8 wrk dr!!!

Nicely portraye the felling of that girl and boy 😳

Of course i imagined it to be arakshi only 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
very emotional story 😭
i felt like every emotion was hitting me like i was standing right there in the story watching both of them as their hearts broke 🥺
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
😭😭...

"bhula dena muhje, hai alvida tuhje, tuhje jeena hai, mera bheena" ashiqui 2... this song is sooo apt for the OS babydolll!!!!
amazing OS & concept... should write more emotional stuff🤔.. and for me i imagine arakshi ofc😃

short comment ke liye sorry, have to go offline now😕... thanks for pm🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
wow dear wat an emotional update...
it's ur first attempt n its just amazing...
loved it...
beautifully written...
i must say plz try to continue dis one or may be another emotional story...
u r quite good at it...
thnks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
wow.. For the first time you wrote so well.. Hats off girl.. Good work
could imagine everything just happening in front of my eyes..

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