Arakshi OS: Broken on the inside (pt3UPDATED Pg 6) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was just superb,would really like to read more from you,please do continue soon😛👏
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Very Nice OS.. Well Written.. Continue Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited my comment on page 2 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah!! Superb intro!! I loved ur writing!
Plz pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Awesome. ...

Loved it...

This might even be the real reason...

Continue soon...

Do PM me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful...plsss continue soon
I so want to know what is the reason why Saakshi did what she did
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start do continue ... well i guess arjun is a person who is hurt by sakshi's lie coz somehow he acknowledge her...somehow...and it irkec him within ...

i hope he would undo the damage he did to her ... well its vice versa as well😆

continue soon and pm me if its possible

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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all, I would like to thank you guys for liking the first part of my OS. It means a lot to me :) !!!
So here's the second part, keep reading to find out what happens next :).

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As Arjun approached his car, in the parking lot, he was surprised to see Rathore leaning against his car with hands crossed across his chest.

Arjun: "Rathore'. Tum Yahan?"

Rathore: "Rawte, mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni thi'..Sakshi ke bare mein'"

Arjun got extremely enraged at the mention of Sakshi's name.

Arjun: " Mujhe Sakshi ke bare mein jaan ne ki nahi koi dilgust hai, nahi zaroori hai Rathore."

Saying so, he opened the door of his car and was just about to get in, when something which Rathore said stopped him.

Rathore: Sakshi ne tum se jhoot nahin bola Rawte. Wo dard mein sach mein thi, par usne isliye sahi chalne ki natak ki, taaki'.. taaki tum aapne aap par aur guilt ka bhoj na dale.

Arjun was taken aback, he didn't know how to react. Sakshi hadn't lied!? And what did Rathore mean by "aur guilt"?

But he continued listening'

Rathore: "Aur me "aur guilt" islye keh raha hun kyunki'..(at this point he turned his back towards Arjun), Sakshi Roshni ke baare me jaanti he, Rawte'.Wo yeh bhi jaanti hai ki uske saat kya hua tha'."

At the mention of Roshni's name, Arjun's mind got inundated with strong emotions. Yes, he missed Roshni a lot. Anything that reminded him of her, even the mere mention of her name, pained him immensely .And yes, he had always felt a huge pang of guilt, because he had always held himself responsible for her death. So, before Rathore could say another word, Arjun jumped into his car, slammed the door shut and drove away. Rathore was not surprised by this behaviour of Arjun, in fact, he had expected it. He knew Arjun had gone into a dark dungeon of pain, misery and lonliness after Roshni's death. He could not pull him out of the dungeon, because her death had saddened him too. And out of anger he had blamed Arjun for her death, but deep down inside, he knew Arjun was not to be blamed. He also knew that Arjun had been blaming himself, every single second, minute and day of his life.

Rathore could not tell Arjun everything about Sakshi, but he also wanted him to discover for himself, who she really was. Thinking so, Rathore left to do some work in the office.

As he was driving, Arjun's mind raced with a million thoughts. For the first time, ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte had been wrong in his judgement. So, Sakshi had been in pain after all. She had put on a brave act, not to derive his attention, but to benefit him. She had not want herself to add weight to Arjun's already present, heavy load of guilt.

He recollected the words he had thrown on Sakshi's face, "I'm disgusted by you Miss Sakshi Anand, I'm disgusted." She had accepted his harsh words without a single word.

He knew, that he had to apologise to her, but his ego restrained him from doing so. But how did Sakshi know about Roshni? This question was still a big mystery. Had he waited back to listen to Rathore completely, he might have got his answer.

The next morning, everyone except Sakshi was present at the ETF office. Attempts were made to call her, but her cell phone was coming as unreachable. The whole team, including Arjun had been quite worried about her. But another case had come up to keep them busy.

The latest case they had to solve, was a bomb blast which had taken place in a crowded bus stop in Mumbai, where 50 people had been killed. As the team was doing more and more research on this incident, Arjun realised that the site of the blast was very near Sakshi's home. Now, Arjun started to get even more restless about Sakshi, he could not focus on the case...

Where was Sakshi? Was she ok?

To be continued...

Edited by Prettyaish123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res/unres.

Me first 😉
Update was awsome
Poor sakshi she was faking so that arjun think himself to be guilty
Sam really knws arjun ver well
Arjun is feeling guilty for roshnis death
Precap is scary
Do cont soon
Thanxx for the pm!!
Edited by princess2507 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res[/QUOTE

Ok, so I know I might sound pretty stupid, but what does Res mean??
People keep using it on this forum, and I have no idea what it means...Lol

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