ARIYA-HAR PAL SANG HOON TERE LAST PART PG 41,42

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this work is based on the sunday episode..




and mostly depended on arjun's child hood side..




prologue...



every person has a weak side...




no matter how he hide it..





sometimes the side comes and stands in front of us..



its difficult to decide whether to fight the weak side and win it




over..




or



to lose urself for ever .. in the admist of darkness..




hope u all like it..





part 1 pg 3

part 2 pg 8

part 3 pg 13

part 4 pg 18

part 5 pg 23

part 6 pg 30

part 7 pg 35, 36

part 8 pg 41, 42


the end...
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Aks13 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept.
Looking frwrd to it.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the concept is very interesting...!!!
update soon...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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itne pyare response ke liye.. thank u so much..


hope meri story disappointing na ho..



Part 1





Another morning in etf..





Shree: aree aaj toh board ke result hai..




Chotu: mein kitna darr gaya tha jab result anee wala tha par phir





pass hogaya toh sukoon raha,,warna toh mere baba meri band





baja dete..




Ayesha: ooh.. hamara chotu pass ho gaya.. aree yeh arjun sir aur




riya abhi tak nahi aye..???





Shree: are Ayesha kuch toh daya karo bicharo par..




kuch hi mahine hue unke shaadi ko..





kal raat ko bhi toh dair hogai thi kaam ke chakkar mein.





romance ke liye time bhi chahiye na..




Chotu: aur phir arjun sir hai..




har cheese mein extreme' bechari ri thak jati hogi..





Ayesha: guys shut up'office hai yeh..





Shree: Ayesha tumhare aur rathore sir ke romantic moments yaad




aagaye kya?





Jao wooh office mein akele hi hai tumhare sameerrr thodi



yaadein refresh karke aoo..





Ayesha threw a file on shree..




arjun and riya came to office.. with arjun speaking something in





riya's ears and her turning red..




Shree: lo aa gaye love birds..





dekho toh ri kaise laal ho rahe hai.. esa kya kehte hai arjun sir..???





chotu: ek kaam kar poochle arjun sir se.. achche se samjhaenge..





shree: pagal nahi hoo jo aa bail mujhe mar wale kaam karoon..



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Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago
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Chotu: inko jitna time do kam hi padta hai..




office mein bhi romance nahi chutta..





Ariya: good morning..






Rathore enters with a very serious expression..






Team we have a case





Rathore was briefing them about the case..and all move to the






location..








All were monitoring the case and rathore and riya both sensed





that the case is going to be really tough for arjun…






they both knew about his childhood dream and his dad's hatred




about it..






Riya was observing arjun from the corner of her eyes every now







and then….






Rathore: riya aaj rawte ko tumhe sambhalna padega..







ek toofan utha uske andar pata nahi kya asar hoga in sabka rawte..







Riya:meine unhe sambhal lungi bhai par mujhe darr lag raha hai






kahin wooh khud ko hurt na kare..





aaj sirf unki hi meri kasauti hai..






bas mein arjun ko sambhal loon...





rathore: riya esa hi hoga.. ek baar rawte ke paas jao ..






he will feel good..








She went to arjun and placed her hand on his shoulder..








Riya: aap thik hai na?









Arjun: haa…





bas part 1 yahin tak..



achcha laga toh please like and comment...




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update loveit plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update dr but too short 😭 😭.

Loved Choree convo with Aisha.

Wow Ariya r already married.

Shree's bal wala dialogue was hilarious.

Loved Riya n Sam's convo.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it dear
its a treat to us to get your stories
thanks for a really sweet update
continue soon
waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
**edited**
amazing start
with ariya already married
shree-chotu n aisha convo was nice
loved to see sameer n riya's concern for arjun
hope riya handles his sorrows
thanks for pm
continue soon
Edited by rizwanaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update.
So ariya are married.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.

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