Arakshi/Riya OS:- Just Like Them

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

it was indeed remarkably beautiful ... completely narrating love in true sense...,each and every line was soul capturing ...just awesome... well done... different concept but written in a very nice way... 👏

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

hi Akangkshya...🤗...well do u know how tough ur name is...😆

it is like tounge twister name😆...just kiding 😉...

well👏👏👏...for the unique concept👏...mein to teri fann bann gayi😆...ur everywok is unique in itself👏👏...

so riya is naraator 😃...miss u riya😃...

haye hamara arjun......kaisa dikhata hoga budhape mein😉😆...i can still drool on him😆...and sakshi haiyla totaly changed😆...uss boddhi ko bulaon ...loved this arjun n sakshi😃...

well as u said this is not love story this the real love we see...in real lives😃...i only rememeber my mom n dad...they are just live arakshi😆...

and as riya as naraator loved her...but when u said that arjun died because sakshi died😭😭😭...can't accept it...

but a beautifull work...now update ur other work as well...😉 sys?😉

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

very beautiful Mithu...
tumhari dada dadi ko meri taraf se salam...
mere Nana Nani me bhi kuch aisa hi pyaar tha;
Nani jatatee nahi thi
aur Nana samaj te nahi the.
par yahi ASLI luvstory hai.
bin jataye bin samjaye...
bas beinteha mohabbat karna...

Arjun in Dhoti?? Iwud luv 2 c that. 😉
P.S Wat is GS??

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

P.S...
Akangkshya? Matlab wish.
meri ek wish poori karogi pileej??
Iss beautiful si story k liye ek beautiful sa banner banao na... Pileej.

*only if u r free.*
*no pressure*

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awe...Mithu this is a beautiful story, and so heartwarming and it's based on your own personal relationship with your grandparents.

I loved your tribute to Riya, she definitely deserved it. I know many think that we have forgotten her just because we have move forward and today you proved that in big way. No one can ever take that magic away Mithu.

Loved Arjun and Sakshi's silent love, and yeah love is not always seen and you showed that beautifully in your story.

Thanks for sharing this with us. I loved it.

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

oh Aku...i cnt blame anu nd neha...as aftr reading it even i had tears in my eyes...tough i always pretend to b a strong nd tough gal...

u r so blessed to have such grandparents nd we r so lucky to read such a beautiful tale of eternal love from u. who says dat love dsnt exist in arng marriages...my Mom nd Dad had an arrange marriage...bt for me they r th most perfect couple i've ever seen...the love they still cherish even after 28 yrs of their marriage is jst like a first true love of a teenager

Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 12 years ago

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wt an update yaar
it was a such a treat wala update
Arjun and sakshi as dada and dadi so awesome
Riya POV was fantastic
old is always gold
really ur lucky to have such a dada and dadi ur very blessed i think
ending was so awesome dr

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome os
loved your story so much
thanks for pm

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princess2507

@princess2507

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Awsome mithu

Wat a wonderful story of arjun and sakshi

It made me cry
Love is more important in life doesnt matter if its love Marriage or arrange marriage
Wat a fab love story
Riyas part was also somewhat sad!!

Just read ur note
But truly ur grandparents were realy a god gifted and i m glad that we got an opportunity to read it!!!

Thanks a lot for shwing us the new side of luv

Edited by princess2507 - 12 years ago

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Beautiful update..
It was brilliantly written..
Yup..our grand parents are really our role model..
Such a Love story is really hard to find..
Great OS..