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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakuu


Nice update! Thanks for thepm :)

loved how they went from pro's to kids in a matter of minutes

thanks... Masti gang zyada Der tak serious nahi ho skate na... Sorry i'm not that good wid Hindi.. 😊
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Posting a new part… thanks to all my regular readers…

"hua kya tha? " arjun asked the constable who was present there. " sir, marne ale ka naam Govind Mehta. Mr.Rawte aur Mr.Mehta partners hua karte the until Mr.Mehta moved out of the partnership. Vo yaha shayad kisi important baat discuss karne aaye the. Ek local ne ek gunshot hote hue suna tha aur usne police ko inform kia. "

Arj: "what was the situation here?"

Constable: " Mr.Mehta was lying in a pool of blood, a gunshot to his chest. Mr.Rawte was lying unconscious over there with the gun in his hand. Lagta hain haathapahi hui aur goli accidentally chali aur Mr.Rawte pair phisalke gir gaye. Unke sir mein chot tha. Uss table se takrakar."

Arjun: " liza, saare evidences nikalo. Blood spatter, finger prints , etc. you heard the constable. Ab check karke batao ke evidences kya kehte hain"

He should get some clues from the house. He thought and started observing every nook and corner of the house. There was nothing unusual no forced entry, nothing out of place , nothing that suggests a third person was involved. But he knew his dad was innocent. Suryakanth Rawte was short tempered but never someone who picks fights unnecessarily. Not someone who does anything stupid when he gets angry. Mr.Rawte's brain never betrayed him helping him get to a wise solution even when he is angry. Him ,picking a fight, killing someone with a gun , that defied logic.

Yes, arjun knew his dad in and out. They were not in good terms but they never hated each other. Arjun's granddad passed away when Mr.Rawte was of very small age. Mr.Rawte had to take up the responsibility of the whole family at a very young age. Thanks to his intellect and hard work he was one of the leading business tycoons of now.

Arjun had always admired his dad and the way he worked. Arjun had lost his mother at a very young age. His dad was always busy. because he knew how much passionate his dad was towards his work. And arjun was of the opinion that everything comes secondary when it comes to your passion. But father-son had their own private time during Sundays. They cooked, played cricket, played psp, and made most of the 24 hrs that they got to spend together after a hectic week.

They were friends but everything changed that one day when arjun told his dad about his future plans. Arjun had always dreamt of being a police officer just like his granddad. He thought his dad would wholeheartedly agree with his decision because his dad never had any problem with anything he did. But he got it wrong. Mr.Rawte dismissed the idea the very instant he presented it. Arjun tried convincing his dad but in vain. Arjun was very angry seeing that his dad is not giving him a chance to live his dream. Arjun had never complained when his dad had ignored him because of his work because he knew how much passionate his dad was towards his work. And arjun was of the opinion that everything comes secondary when it comes to your passion. So it was total injustice towards him not to let him follow his passion.

But , suryakanth rawte, as the name suggests was arjun's dad in everything. If he had decided on something then no one can change his decision. Arjun was shattered seeing his dad , his role model being so unfair. And in the spur of the moment he left his house, his dad, his everything.

"Arjun… sameer tumhe bula rahe hain." Sakshi's call broke his chain of thoughts. "haan , aa raha hoom" he replied.

" arjun , are you alright? Maine tumhe kitna pukkara?" asked sakshi in a worried tone. She was worried tone. He had almost lost his father today. And the feeling of losing of a loved one was not unknown to sakshi. "main theek hoom. I was a little bit too much concentrated in an evidence. Isiliye shayad suna nahi." Arjun replied calmly , neither his voice nor his face showing his inner turmoil and walked away in rathore's direction leaving sakshi behind.

"mujhe pata hain tum theek nahi ho. Aur ho bhi nahi sakthe , because you love your dad so much. I have read it from the fear in your eyes when you heard that your dad was injured." Thought sakshi looking at his retreating figure.

They returned from rawte mansion after doing a first round investigation. It was well past midnight and everyone was busy with their own work. Arjun sat in his usual position staring at the facts board analyzing each and every evidence.

Sakshi was passing by and saw arjun sitting there immersed in the facts board. She saw that arjun hadn't done anything other than sit in his place looking at the board after he has returned from rawte mansion. Which also meant that he didn't have his dinner as well. she knew that he will never accept anything offered by her. There was only one solution.

Arjun had been observing the facts board for quite a long time. He turned around to get a file to crosscheck an info and that is when he saw it. There on the table was his favorite cutting chai with a pink note sticking on the glass. "pink note, Miss Sakshi anand" he thought. The note read

" Haan , maine hi laaya hain vo cutting chai. Ab us cutting chai aise glare math karo jaise tum ujhe karte ho. Afterall it's cutting chai. Aur raat ki 3 baje cutting chai lane ki difficulty tum kya jaane arjun babu… itna bhi difficult nahi hain if you have a thermos flask. Meri bakwaas to chalti rahegi tum chai thanda mat hone do . a hot chai to cool your brain. Vo kya hain na those frown in your forehead cheek cheek ke keh rahi thi "kuch to choot raha hain," . aur tumhe pata hain na ek cup cutting chai hi iski solution hain. Ab yeh peeyo aur case solve karo.. simple…

Sakshi

Note: agar chillane ke liye mujhe search kar rahe ho toh don't bother. Main yaha door ke pass hi hu"

Unknown to him a smile had crept up his face. He was actually longing cutting chai. Whatever sakshi did wrong she was never wrong about his timings for cutting chai. Thankfully he was sitting with his back facing the door so the smile was easily hidden. He turned around and saw sakshi standing with her cheeky smile. He just shook his head and turned around sipping his cutting chai.

She was expecting him to shout at her but instead he didn't even react." Cutting chai can do wonders" thought sakshi as she moved t her desk to complete her work. Well she was right cutting chai can actually do wonders. Can it possibly bring two extremely opposite people together .. let's wait and watch



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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
That was fantastic...👍🏼
Arjun & his cutting chai...ufff...😉
But Sakshi is also no less..
Most unpredictable girl ...& her unpredictable ways to make Arjun smile...😆
Awesome efforts ...👏
Continue soon...😛
Thank u for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
loved the update
specially the last part...
it was so soo sooo sweet
excellent 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
hahahah Arjun and his cutting chai :D
Soo miss Sakshi Anand wont stop bugging him, well that is good for me xD, hope Arjun is able to cleanse his dad's name soon!
Loved the update :)
Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Love the update,hehe just love the cute and funny note sakshi left for arjun..it also shows sakshi concern for him,and maybe love also in the future😉,just loove the way the story is proceeding,continue soon👏🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
wow read both the update s in one go...

beautifull updates

dat creepy shekhavat needed a biig SYS session from arjun...par shree ne bhi ache se samjhaya usse...vah mere sher ...tu toh bada ho gaya...

continue soon

nd yeah cutting chai can do loads of wonders specially if concerned abt Arjun...

plz pm me th nxt parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
nyc update 👏
Sakshi ki -sabse badi sotan to CUTTING CHAI hai😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
thanks for your comments.. really a great return gift for my hard work...😊 next chapter in the post below..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

😊A NEW CHAPTER.. THANKS EVERYONE WHO HAS LIKED AND COMMENTED ON MY PREVIOUS UPDATES..

Everyone was sitting in the conference room discussing about the case. Lisa entered the room with completed reports.

"sir, forensic reports are ready." She said to rathore. Rathore urged her to continue.

Lisa: "sir' death gunshot se hui hain. The gun was shot at close range , there was gun powder residue on the wound. Aur haan sir, Mr.Rawte was wearing gloves when he was found. Gloves mein kuch cleaning liquids ke traces milein. Shayad Mr.Mehta ke aane se pehle ghar clean kar rahe the. Door ke handles par bhi same traces mile hain which means Mr.Rawte gloves bina utaare hi door khola tha. Aur us gloves mai bhi gun shot residue the. Lekin sir ek baat ajeeb lagi."

Arjun: " kya?"

Lisa: " sir gun mein se koyi bhi fingerprints nahi mile. Mr.Rawte ka nahi milenge , obviously,kyunki voh gloves pehene the but…."

Rathore: " Mr.Mehta ka toh milna chahiye if there had been a fight and the gunshot was accidental."

Lisa: " yes sir. That seemed strange to me."

Just then shree entered the conference carrying his lap. "sir vo crime scenes ke photos mile hain." Said shree and started displaying it on the screen.

"footprints!" arjun said suddenly startling everyone. Sakshi kept her hands overher heart which was beating crazily. "yeh arjun bhi naa. Aise logon ko darata kyun hain. Thode dheere se bhi bol sakthe the." Thought sakshi. " shree , vo pichle photo dikhao… aur voh right corner pe zoom karo." Arjun said pointing at the picture.

As shree showed them the zoomed in image they understood what arjun meant. On the photos of the crime scene some partial footprints were seen. The footprints would have missed anyone else's eyes, but Arjun was Arjun .

" lekin sir hum jab vahan gaye the. Tab tho voh vaha nahi the" asked aisha clearly confused. She was damn sure that those footprints were not there. She was a keen observer and usually nothing escapes her eyes.

Arjun: " look carefully aisha. Voh footprints pani se hain. Shayad jab tak hum pahuch gaye the water would have evaporated."

" Leaving behind no traces. Isiliye tumne kuch nahi dekha. So relax. Tumhaari galati nahi hain" Rathore said passing her an assuring smile." Lisa yeh footprints ke bare mein kya kehna hain"

Lisa :" sir yeh footprints definitely Mr.Rawte and Mr.Mehta ke nahi hain. I'm damn sure about this."

Sakshi: " are you sure lisa?"

Lisa :"yup, damn sure."

" iska matlab hain ki a third person was there." Said aisha summing up what they have got so far. And that indeed was great news since it brought a whole new perspective to the case. And from the clues there was a ray of hope for them to prove that Mr.Rawte was innocent. All thanks to arjun's super powerful observation skills.

Rathore sensed the changing atmosphere and said calmly, " don't get your hopes high guys. Yaha kaafi cheese abhi bhi unexplained he.. like gun residue on Mr.Rawte's gloves, gun in his hand, etc." But he was also feeling happy for his friend.

" haan sameer , bohat kuch choot raha hain na?" said sakshi trying to lighten the situation glancing at arjun. As usual others passed "iski toh gayi" glances at each other hearing sakshi and arjun ignored her comments.

Rathod also smiled hearing sakshi but that is when he noticed that lisa was acting strange. He just raised his eyebrows asking her what was the problem she just gestured that she wants to tlk to him in private and not then. She was trying very hard to hide this conversation from others. rathore knew that something was definitely wrong. He assured her that he wiil talk to her asap. (writer's note : they are talking through gestures because lisa wants to talk to rathod about something important)

Someone else had been observing Lisa as well. Shree also had sensed that something was wrong with Lisa. He didn't see the conversation between the chief and the forensic expert, of course but he knew that something was troubling her. Everyone dispersed from the conference room to their desks to complete their duties. Shree was dying to know what was troubling liza but his ego wasn't allowing him to ask directly. And then sakshi came to his rescue. She had a try with coffee mugs for each and every one of them. She stopped infront of him and he took two cups from the tray.

Sakshi :" Oye shree, tumhaare liye sirf ek hi he"

Shree: " voh… main lab ki taraf hi jaa raha thaa. Toh maine socha ke liza ki cup main le loon. Main hi use de doonga. Tumhe takleef uthane ki zaroorath nahi."

" aaj mujhpar itna pyar kyun aa raha hain shree?" asked sakshi narrowing her eyes to which shree just rolled his eyes and walked off in lab's direction.

As he entered the lab he saw that liza was sitting there with her head on the head rest and eyes closed.

" mujhse pehle promotion lene ki puri planning kar rahi ho kya" asked shree trying to start a conversation. Liza opened her eyes and looked at him confused. " vo kya hain na maine suna ki tum raat bhar kaam kar rahi thi. Aise kaam karogi toh mujhse pehle promotion mil jaayegi naa." Said shree.

"aisa kuch nahi hain specky. Kisne kaha tumse ki maine raat bhar jagkar kaam ki hain? Aisa kuch bhi nahi hain " liza replied calmly.

" no tit for tat , iska matlab hain kuch toh choot raha hain.problem kya hain? Sleep deprivation nahi hain. Yeh to clear ho gaya" shree THOUGHT as he analysed what she just said, clearly confused about what was troubling her.

" just ek mild headache hain" liza said in a very slow voice. But shree had already heard that. " mild headache hain Medicines le li?" he continued seeing her nodding a no." medicines kyun nahi le rahe ho? Apna tabiyat ka khayal bhi rakho. Saara din microscope main ghuse rahte ho . ab is se toh eyes mein strain toh hoga hi na." he fretted as he placed the coffee mugs on the table and went to the cabinet to take out medicine. He took out a pain killer and came near liza. He said thrusting the pain killer on her hand "ab ye khalo. Head ache ho rahi hain aur chup chap baithi ho bina davai liye. Zyaada hain kya. Rathore sir se kehke leave lena hain?"

"itna bhi zyaada nahin hain specky. Bus chota sa head ache hain" liza said as she gulped down the tablet. Shree came forward and kept his palm on her forehead. "hmm, thoda sa temperature hain. Bahut zyada nahin. But tum thodi der keliye aaram karlo. No but's… jo kaha hain vahi karo" shree said clearly concerned for her.

Liza passed him a weak smile and closed her eyes resting her head on the head rest. Shree was about to take his hand from her forehead when she kept her hand over his. Shree cupped her forehead with his hands applying pressure relieving her of some pain.

They do fight like Tom and Jerry. They spend their free time devising new pranks at each other. But if you guys have watched Tom and Jerry you would have noticed that whenever jerry fell ill tom has taken care of jerry attentively. So that once jerry is alright they could fight again. That is the case with shree and liza as well. they needed each other to be alright so that they could fight with each other. Well, that is how they justify their concern for each other. But we know better, don't we?

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