FF-choodiyan (removed)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: cuteariya
dear iss ka & if destiny ka update kab milegi? 🥺 🥺

soon ..i am working on it

Quote

kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: srividhya68
Superb update
Love it

thank u so much dear

😉

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Needhi

@Needhi_naughty

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

continue soon..

love ARIYA bond..

good to know that arjun is feeling something for riya...

Quote

rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Its tooo good. with each update i am falling in love more and more with this story😃

So the seed of love has paved in Arjun's heart. I hope he doesnt hold back.

I must say Riya's concept of collecting choodiyan is really good. its unique and refreshing.

this story gives me a sweet ache in my heart. its sad, but innocent story of an innocent girl.

Thanks for giving me a chance to read such a beautiful story dear

Quote

Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

*unres*
wow...
Awesome and beautiful update.
Loved it a lot...
The way u have written and expressed Arjun's inner thoughts about his feelings for Riya was beautiful...
Finally,ACP sahab pyaar mein parh gaye...
Flashbacks were good.
Riya ki bracelt mili hai Arjun ko...
He is going to meet Riya tomorrow...
Sameer bhai really worried for Riya and her Life..
Bhai is really lucky to have Pirva bhabi by his side,who is so understanding,caring and loving...
Purva ko andaza horaha hai ki Arjun will be a good husband for Riya...
Eh leh..
ChoRee baithke macchar mar rahe hai aur Shree ki shayari.. Ahahaha...
Loved the whole update a lot...
Precap is amazing...
Continue sooonishhh...
Thanks for the pm.

Edited by ...anika... - 11 years ago

Quote

IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

it was nice i just dont understand the flashback it was too short when riya faints what happens i think u edited that part lollzz.z... ney nice i liked the way arjun was handling and knowing his feeling and saakshi plzz uske thoughts par break lagao ney i think purva knows what arjun is feeling ryt now

Quote

Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

nice yaar

loved it

vrrry beautifully written

thnx 4 pm

cont soon

Quote

cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

awesome update

riya is all over in arjun's mind & heart😉

finally arjun accept he love riya

but he was abt sameer reaction also

sameer worried for riya💔💔

purba is so understanding & lovly

sameer urba's convo was emotional 😭

choree part was really funny😆😆

shree ne machado pe bhi sayeri bana dala🤣🤣

aisha still console sakshi abt arjun

plz continue

Quote

teja21

@teja21

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

awesome update dear

i didnt expect arjun to realise his feelings so soon

wat to know wat arjun will do now

shree ki poems😆

liked sameer & purva convo

waiting fr more

& i want more of ariya dear

thanx fr d pm

continue soon pls

Quote

Suryatapa sengupta

@1993.ssg

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Superb update. Love it. Arjun is in love with Riya. Arjun afraid what will sam think after knowing his feeling for Riya. Sam is getting tense about Riya's future. I think Purva knows that Arjun has a feeling for Riya. Love Shree Chotu segment. Love Sakshi Ayesha convo. Superb banner. Thanks for the pm. Pls continue soon.

Quote

1 ... 11 12 13 14 15

FF-choodiyan (removed) - Page 13

Related Topics

Explore Topics