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@IshqDewaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Oh wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I m just glad you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was looong update and I loved every bit of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: unishaz
nice part vampu dear.. Things r getting way too clearer now n i think u r coming to recent cases, isn't it?? Thanks for pm..

yes i am coming to recent cases!!
The story will progress as the show is moving so! 😛
thanks for comment!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Payal_156
hey anki hugs
super se bi upar wala update
so samjun ki ladai khatam krne liye riya cupid
very nice
lov it
sileent wala love amazing
last part lots of claps
lovely
thanks for d pm dear

hugs didu!!
Thanks for a sweet comment! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: zubiya92
Awesome update

Originally posted by: shah10
Awesome update

Originally posted by: Aabish_02
awesome update
love it
update next part soon
thanks for the pm

thanks for comment!

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

phle to big wala sorry for commenting so late...!!!😳😃

plz don't bite me😆

the update was superb as usual vampu...!!!

and you rocked girl..!!!

beautiful portray of riya's pov on both her bosses... bechari kaha fass gyi..!!
aahan cutting chai moment was awesome...!!!

both are thinking about each other..!!

aisha's pov was lovely...!!!

ye sameer bhi na..!!!bolta kyu nai apne dil ki baat..!!!

finally riya back to etf...!!! everyone were so happy yayy...!!!

and she helped in solving case...!!! but poor girl got hurt...

hmm so arjun felt something haan😉

woahh he complimented her...!!!😲

and her thoughts on arjun in the end...1!! awww..!! <3 <3 <3

loved them...!!!

continue soon...!!!

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

PART SEVENTEEN

'' Ri.. What happened''??? , aise chize phek kyun rahi hai!

'' Ri..bata na ?? Tu toh kabhi aise chize bigad ti nahi thi..
Ouchhh..kya yaar'' - said shree while riya threw the marker on him.

Chotu : Ree, aakhir hua kya hai?

At the same time Liza entered, and anothe marker hits her. She looked here and there and found shree was holding the marker.

Liza : tum nahi sudhroge specky!!
She threw back the marker on him.

Poor shree, he was tortured by two side.. One his best friend and another. Umm... Errr whatever? Dushman??? Or? Yea Liza..

Shree : mere sudherne ki baat mat karo! Pehele apni best friend se pucho!!

Liza then looked down, and there Riya was searching something and the whole thing that was inside the drawer is now outside scattered.

Aisha entered with Sameer and she was a little tensed, then she looked at the gang!
'' Gosh what they have made the coference room'' she thought. While Rathod glared at all of the four, and he gave a very weird look to riya.

She stood up, and all four of then stood in a line, as if babber sher will eat them now, but sher is confused, whom to eat first.

Rathod : kya ho raha hai ye sab! He asked formaly but raising his voice. And all of the four lowered down their gaze.

Then he looked at the condition of the room, all of them pointed their heads towards riya!

Rathod thought : '' seriously, Rawte ka itna bura asar pada hai riya pe ''.
Aisha : sir aapne kuch bola?
Rathod : nahi toh!!

Then in the end Arjun made his entry! He too was shocked at seeing the site in front of him, all the room was covered with papers, and markers!

And when he got to know , Riya did this. He was like, " Aaj isse hua kya hai? Kafi weird behave kar rahi hai!!"!

Rathod : i want this room clean!! Make it quick!!
He ordered them.
'' All 4 of you!''.
Then he left with Aisha.

Arjun stood there and glared at Her while she gave a look of, "meri koi galati nahi hai''.

He shook his head in disbelief and left the conference room.

After that all 3 of then glared at riya.

Liza & Chotu : maine toh kuch kiya bhi nahi hai!

Shree : aur maine kitne maar khaye hain!!

Riya : phir bhi tum logon ko saaf karna hi padega!!

Shree : meri kya galati hai!!

Riya : dekh li tumhari dosti shree. Jab tum koi gadbad karo toh hamari responsibility ban jati hai, ab maine kiya toh..
Chodo shree , mujhe tumse ye umeed nahi thi!!

Shree : kitna drama karti hai!!

Chotu : rii, arjun sir ke asar se na tu bilkul bigad gayi hai!!

Hearing this she blused but instantly cuts him and said, '' what?? Arjun sir ne kya kiya! ''.

Liza : wahi toh hum jan na chahate hain, unhone kya kiya?

Riya : shut up guys ! Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai!!

Liza : kuch toh chut raha hai, warna hygenic freak, aaj miss making room messy mood mai kaise!!

Riya : rahne do, ye unhi pe sit karta hai!

"U N H I P E '' ::: shree said.

Riya : tum logon se toh baat hi karna bekar hai!!

Chotu : haan haan hum toh hai hi bekar, ab toh tere sare matlab U n h i s e hain na! He teased her and she tried to escape from the palce.

The interaction between arjun and riya was never gone unnoticed the team. They are friends after all... They knows that, what is in her heart. It is just that Riya herself need to shout for herself that she loves him. Just that she will feel good . Everyone started laughing at her seeing her daydearming condition and she blushed. But she really did miss them. Her best friends, the teasings, their fun..everything is now set back to normal, she feels. She really enjoyed this time she shared with her friends.

Friends, then Aisha's name comes into her mind. Today she was a little tensed and irritated too. Riya knows the girl who is Aisha, from the very first day. As like ayesha , riya too was trying to mix-up with her. And she truely believes that they both will make a great bond as the bond she shared with shree -chotu-liza.

Her thoughts again broke when shree-chotu-liza engulfed her in a tight breath taking hug. They all are crazy for each other. And the trio murmered ' we missed you ', to which replied, ' I too missed you guys' and made them more close to her.

She now thought she didn't give much to them these days. Buth they are her life. She is nothing with out them.

Shree : waise Rii, tune ye nahi bataya ki tu dhund kya rahi thi?

Riya : nothing!! Bas aise hi kuch mil nahi raha tha!!

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Shree : chod tujh se puch ke koi faida nahi!!

Riya : pucho hi mat!!

Chotu : ab bas karo tum log, warna rathod sir firse aa jayenge!

Liza : hmm. Chalo ab sab paper work complete karo!! Mujhe bhi reports banane hain!

Riya : puja karle usse pehele!!

Shree : arre haan. Bhul gaya tha!! Aaj ganesha chaturthi hai!!

Riya asked Chotu to call, remaining team member. Aisha and rathod came back but Arjun didn't come.

Chotu : Ri, wo Arjun Sir..

Riya : wo nahi aayenge, hum puja suru karte hain.
She did the aarti and distributed prashad among all of them.

Aisha was in a hurry, and riya notice this. Same time Rathod gets a call from Rawte!

Rathod announced : guys ek case hai! We have to rush.

By hearing this Ayesha's face fefll and she was more tensed. Riya went to her and , assuring asked her, " pareshan ho aisha"?

Shree: don't worry Aisha uncle will be okay!
Aisha nodded her head.
Aisha : but mujhe in chuttion ki jarurat thi!

Rathod : don't worry Aisha, i will do whatever I could do!! He said in a hurry. But she felt relived. She herself was confused, again his mere words are so comforting. She kept her all thout aside and concentretad on the case. They left for the crime spot.

Arjun and riya in one SUV. She looked at him. It was the day , when he told her to leave ETF, due to incapability of shooting. But she is shocked with herself. Many things happened in between this years. First he asked her to leave ETF and now he himself want her by his side.

She was actually shocked when Rathod told her not to leave. It was the day , when she send the letter of resign to rathod from research desk. She was actually very angry on him and that day she decided to leave the department. '' What is the problem of this man". She was confused, what he wants actually. At times he was near her and another thime he repeled her. She never tried to feel the depth of his thoughts. He wanted her always safe and fine. And that was the moment she commits herself to hold onto him.

She remembered the day, in the shooting range with rathod.

FLASH BACK

Rathod came hurriedly towards her, as if he was very angry on her.

Riya : what happened sir!!

Rathod : ye kya mazaak hai riya.

Riya : kya sir?

Rathod : now you are even resigning from research desk. That was not our plan.

Riya : mazaak! Wo toh mere saath ho raha hai! Aakir unhe ki problem kya hai mujh se!!

Rathod : Phir se Rawte ne kuch kaha?

Riya remained silent.

Rathod : riya mai kuch puch raha hun tumse!

Riya : Sir, i don't know how much efficient I am, but remember one thing , I will never lose my dignity.

Those words made things clear that she was very serious. So rathod tried to calm her.

Rathod : come on riya. Tum janti ho usse!

Riya : nahi janti mai unhe!!

Rathod : toh phir uske kehne pe tum jaa kyun rahi ho! Fark nahi padta!!

Riya : nahi padta! She answered out of anger.

Rathod : usse padta hai!!
She got the second shock of her life.
First it was rathod who is sayig this, second.. She knows it affects him. But she have never thought that he would let anyone know that he is that much affected.

Rathod : he cares about you riya.

Riya : har baar mujhe unke saamne kamzor bana ke na sir! She answered in a stern voice.

Rathod : care karne ka matlab ye nahi hai riya, ke samne wala tumhe kamzor samajhta hai! Balki tumhare saath khade ho kar tumhe sahara deta hai!!

Riya : yahi toh nahi chahiye mujhe sir. Mujhe sahara nahi chahiye unka ! Saath chahiye..

Rathod : toh khadi ho jao na uske saath.

She was shocked again. She also have never thought that, she wil do any such conversation with rathod in anyways.

Riya : toh sir aap unki care nahi karte! She asked is a low and a little scared tone.

Rathod remained silent.

Riya : toh phir aap kyun nahi dete unka saath.

Rathod : riya mujhse behes mat karo!! Bas yahi kehne aaya tha, don't leave him.

Rathod : riya sun rahi ho na!

Riya : sir , sochungi!!

Rathod : riya samajh kyun nahi rahi ho!

Riya : samajh wo nahi rahe hain sir, so what I was in danger, wo bhi toh har pal khatre ka saamna karte hain. Mujhe bhi darr lagta hai!! Wo mere liye nahi rukte!
Toh phir kyun ??
Mujhe unki kamzori nahi ban na sir!!

Rathod : toh usse ye ehsaas dilao riya ki tum uske liye kya ho!!

Riya: aur aap???

Rathod : No riya not this. Saying this he left her in the shooting range.

At the same time arjun entered with the papers , and the coversation with rathod left the effect on her, and for a moment his one touch made her knees went weak. But in right time she retreated back, and also applied her fighting skills on her.

FLASHBACK ENDS

She smirked thinking that , she actually kicked him at the moment when he tried to kiss her.

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

She was happy that everything is sorted out . She made him realized that she is not his weakness. And still he is free. She never wanted bound him within her own feelings.

Still there problem but she believes the problems will also be sorted out.

She remembered everything about him..
Their first meeting, her attacking him, then her red clip, his slow steady walk on the goa beach, his unhygenic cutting chai, his returning the clip to her, his questioning on her ability. Ah she felt a little annoyed thinking that part.

Then his reaction, and anger when she poked in his personal life.. Well now there is nothing personal in between them. She is the only personal thing of his.
Then, his that smile when he take coffee which she made for him, his assuring her when she was hurt, his everytime bringing mineral water for her. And everytime putting the seat belt for her.. A strong blush formed on her cheeks . She screamed in her mind, " I LOVE YOU " . And he could better notice the blush on her cheeks.

He remained silent, but glared at her by turning her side. A very naughty idea popped in her mind and she made face stern.

Riya : kya aaj mere chehera pe kuch lag hai! Ya itne dino baad mera chehera itna interesting ho gaya hai!!

Arjun : wo tum! He said in absent mindly.

Riya : statistis ke hisab se, case solve karte waqt apna dimaag idhr udhar na laga kar agar case pe dhyaan doge to case solve hone ke chances 98% hote hain.

He was in complete shock. She did actually said this. He pulled the break so harsly that her torso almost hits the dashboard, but she supported herself by putting her hands.

Arjun : aur kabhi kabhi, seat belt khud bhi baand lena chahiye, statisticly , seat se niche girne ke chances 100% kam ho jate hain.
Samjhi ya Samjhun?

He smirked while she looked at him in utter disbelief.

She thought : he actually taunted me? No he cracked a joke! Huff!

He opened the door, didn't even waited for her and walked towards the crime spot.

Riya : MV : chal riya utar. Unhe kya typical boyfriends ki tarah soch ke rakha hai kya jo puppy ki tarah door open karne aayenge..

CRIME SPOT

Rathod was talking to Aisha.
Rathod : aisha tumhari chutti ki baat karli hai maine.. You can go now.
Aisha : thank you so much sir thank you very much.
Rathod : okay you should leave.
Aisha : hmm

Aisha was about to go when shree called rathod and informed him about the psycho killer. After hearing this aisha returned back and said, " No sir main iss case ko chod ke nahi jaa sakti ".

Rathod : par aisha..

Aisha : sir mere dada jada khus honge agar main iss case mai rahi aur apni duty nibhayi toh..

Rathod was so touched by her dedication to her work and he proudly said, " mujhe tumse yahi umeed thi ayesha."

here arjun looked at the duo and he too felt proud for being the part of the team.

TBC

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Shit again vampy started with her notes!

anyways jo bhi ho note dena toh mai nai chodungi 😲

oh okay, you must be thinking wht happened to me! Why so much pyaar ki barish! But arjun and riya themselves also need to feel the depth of their own feeing. 😳

one more thing, in next update i will try to put more senes of rathod and aisha.
I really missed them

never knw wht cvs wll do 🥱
but i will sure try add rathod and aisha onwards.

Do share you views regarding this part.

And my KBBs( tum logon ne aaj mujhe maarne plan banaya hai kya?🤢 kitnse speed se update dun! Mere mobile thodi meherbani karo yaar!😒aur mere haat pe bhi. ) remined to change to topic name, as suddenly i too realized that it is no more an OS 🤔🤣.

HIT THE LIKE BUTTON ON THE LAST POST OF THIS PART.

thank you

~ Vq😛

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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Du Du Du Du

@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

res !!! res!!!! res res res !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

edited

all KBBs are first to res😆😲 i didnt stalk VQ aai sappat🤣

unres buhahahahahahah😆😆😆

hmm...very interesting...riya throwing things? ye aadat kabse ho gayi?😕 and what she was searching? and rathore''s dialogue...ab tumhe to pata hi hain kitna bura asar pada hain rawte ka riya pe😉 riya the great hygein freak alone brought tyfoon in ETF conference room! what the hell she was possibly searching yaar???😲

and that shree chotu riya convo...aww UNHIPE...😆😆 cute. frnds know it all about our feelings, loved them. and hope riya also becm frnd with aisha like she is with shree chotu

and then puja...and aisha's father in hospital. loved how u mixed the case with FF perfect as usual👏⭐️

the rathore riya convo was good. sam wants riya to hold arjun, but himself not going. when he will reach out for arjun? hopefully soon...aisha and riya will help these two.

and the care, gesture arjun did for her make riya fall again in love with him everytime. that scene in suv and arjun's answer back...awesome😆 their own touch...her innocence and his own style.

and in last rathore aisha...good. i hope at least u show aisha rathore, they stopped showing in show,🤢

and thank god u changed the title...its a FF now⭐️

update soon, dnt make kbbs nag u

Edited by riyasarkar007 - 12 years ago