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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

yeah seriously 😡

nope not making it OS! Kal last part post karungi 😉

oh ! Thank u that picked up the right thing about riya 😃

u wll see wht her reaction and also who is riya mukharjee? 😉

obviously! KBBs hai hi mere and u my behna! Mention toh banta hai
😛🤗n lobb pms bhi🤣

post kr de meri maa i am dying😳

waiting to see who is riya mukherjee😉

kr kr mention kr or popularity increase kr humari 🤣

lobb pms😆😉

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Sleep was never near her at the moment. She wanted to feel this feeling!! Being near him..

Since she never know that , if she could see, it is only because of him who did all this thing!! She did ask Ananyaa before about this ,but Ananyaa never spilled anything. Annyaa literally blackmailed her emotionaly and Riya have no choice , she had to shut her voice. And at that time she also didn't wanted to disappoint her di, her sister, the woman who never left her hand in any condition!! The woman who beared her every anger, her every trauma..

Riya never felt sad of not being capable of eye sight. The thing that hurt is, her losing her most adorable people of her life.. Her mom and dad.. Somehow she herself felt that she was the reason of her parents death!! But it was Ananyaa , who stood by her side and made riya realize that , she was never the reason of it!!

Ananyaa is the woman who made her being self independent. Riya never wanted riya will sit idle seeking sympathy of others. She still remembers her words, " I won't walk ahead you.. Also I won't walk behind you.. You walk , i will walk along with you".

And then another person, the person who is never out of her mind, since 8 months!

That one moment with him made her brain unstable!! She felt the physical hurt when that man strangled her..

And she was also not angry at him, for the shouting on her at public place.. She was okay with it. It is his duty to save people and also it is his duty to correct , if someone / something is wrong!

Riya was feeling guilty when he was ranting about the responsibility of any citizen and she cursed herself, why she wasn't able to recognise the situation!! She is capable for sensing those things.. But why her sense didn't worked that day!! Why his presense affected her much!!

That day she silently took his every word, as she herself was guilty. She never wanted his anger to be cool down, but he became calm after seeing that, she is a blind person!! And Riya, the girl never wanted anyone's sympathy!

At first sight arjun actually was showing sympathy to her, but after meeting her in her house , this feeling of sympathy is also vanished!

Riya didn't listen his any word that day, but when she comes to know that arjun is actually feeling guilty she forgave him . And she also accepted the first step towards their relation.. The relation of friendship!

She used to spent her times with him in every weekend! His funny talks.. His soothing and calm words and most importantly his presense left a great impact on her. She then started sharing her feelings with him, and as a true friend arjun never disappointed her.. Days passed but riya found that Arjun is being protective.. She knew that he cares for her but after that she felt him being over protective for her.. And she never liked this.. And the day when he proposed her , she rejected him! She never wanted to with someone who make her idle and more over again she felt he is showing sympathy! She wanted to become independent.

Her inner insecurity was also one more reason she rejected him.

But she never felt the same after he left! It hurted her much when she ranned towards the beach sight and scanned the scars of the writings of his proposal!
She she did miss his presense, she did miss his soothing talks.. She did miss the soothing sensation of the air after he left! And then she realized that she too is magnetically falling for him. Still she was not ready for him.. But lately she realized that he only loves her.. Not less than this feeling.. Or not more than this feeling.. That was the day when she felt the same sensation in the air which intoxicated her. And she wanted to scream , that she is in love.. But before she could take one step , the sensation faded away and left her frustrated!

And now, she is here with him in this hospital room. How he is here she never know but the deepest corner of her heart screamed, he is here for her! And a smile crept upon her face unknowingly..

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

The little dryness of her throat intereupts her chains of thoughts and her hand aimlessly scanned for the drop of life. Her hand hits the wooden table near her bed and he woke up,And found her scanning for water. At first sight he stood up and took steps for helping her but in an instant of second he took the back step and marched towards the door, stood there and watched her struggling for water.. He too knows that she could feel him so he let her do what she wanted to do ever. He didn't helped her, just waited there.. And walked out of the room when he saw the lump on her throat and some droplets sticking to her lushy lips..

While going out he found Sam and Ananyaa were busy in some talks, that they didn't even realized Arjun was there. He coughed to grab their attention and Ananyaa looked at Arjun while Sam was shamelessly staring at Ananyaa. Ananyaa found Sam looking at her and she felt uncomfortable infront of Arjun..

Arjun called his name he responed with word including 'ji', and that surprised arjun and he shouted 'Samm!!'
and he jerked out of his dreamy trance while Ananyaa was trying to supress her smile. But both arjun and sam never missed the change in color on her face.

Now sam to coughed and to cotnrol the situation, arjun asked formaly, " Tumhe yaha aane ki kya jaryrat thi ..main hu na yaha"?

And she replied she couldn't stay away from riya so arjun let her go to riya's room.

She walked away and sam was again staring at him. Arjun snapped his finger in front of his eyes while sameer just only shoed his shining 32s.
Arjun narrowed his eyes, and he turned his head..arjun walked to other side and browed his eyes while he nodded in no!!
Now arjun glared at him and sam slightly curved his lips in irritation then nodded in a yess. The crimson color is truely visible on his face with lowered gaze..

Arjun literally jumped on him and engulfed him in a hug but instantly parted from him for the sake of sisters of the hospital.

Sameer and Arjun left the hospital for any emergency and here Ananyaa stayed with riya.

The doctor have adivised to persist the band for more than two weeks so riya , ananyaa and arjun , sam were being very impatient!!

Till the 4th day , Arjun used to visit silently in the hospital and and also making riya comfortable with the boring annoying place.

5th day

it was the same time when he used to come.. But where is he today.. The nervousness and uneasiness and anticiaption is truely evident from her face . That was not gone unnoticed by Ananyaa and she concluded that riya is missng him.. The same hopeful lifeless pale face she saw again , which she had seen 3 months ago when Arjun stopped coming there.

The same face waiting for someone.. And anayaa is immensly happy that riya realized her true feelings.. But she too was curious to know where is Arjun???

She tried Arjun's number but that was unreachable and then she tried to contact sam , he too didn't responded! She looked at her watch, its too late so she thought she will talk to them later!!

Next morning..
ETF office

Sam found a girl sitting inside his cabin and here Ayesha, Liza and Sakshi were starning at him in completely disbelief!! And his expression turned out horrible!!

And he nervously spoke," What"??
He could see Sakshi's expression changing and her face turning red! While Ayesha and Liza were smirking!
" Arre hua kya hai"? He asked while liza and ayesha answered, " sir aapki girlfriend wait kar rahi hai ander..
And sameer was like.. " meri girlfriend.."??

Sakshi- sach batao ye tumhari girlfriend hi hai na? Sakshi asked him glaring at him and Sam gulped down a lump of saliva!

Sam- ab ye kaun hai jo yaha aayi hai? He said while placing hand on his head and ayesha answered, " Pata nahi kahan se hai.. Ab ye toh aap hi bologe na kaha kaha account khol ke rakha hai aapne..".

Liza was laughing like a mad while Sakshi's anger reaching high.. He couldn't match the eye of the chirpy crime reporter of ETF who instantly fallen for him. But sakshi too was confused, if it is the true feeling or crush.. Still she is angry. And Sam pleaded Aisha for help , aisha supressed her laugh and tried to calm her down while they heard the voice, " Arre sameer tum aa gaye kitna intezaar karwaya?" okay i need to talk to you!! About arjun and riya.

They all turned their head , sam recogised ananyaa there..
Sam- Ananyaa..he said very lovingly and then he realized the people around him and said, " Aa..na..nyaa," tu..tum yaha..
He said looking at both ananyaa and sakshi while ananyaa gave a confused and sakshi gave both of them hard glare..

Ananyaa- haan wo riya, arjun ke... He didn't let her complete and dragged her inside his cabin and slammed the door!

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Inside the room

Sam- ye tumne kyun kaha ki tum meri gf ho??
Ananyaa- sorry but tumhare officers mujhe aane hi nahi dete the! Thts why!

Sam- okay wo sab chodo.. Ye batao riya ko kya hua?

Ananyaa- pyaar!

Sam- what!

Ana- haan , she is being very desperiate for arjun.. And hai kaha ye arjun!!

Sam- ops sorry, i shoud inform you.. Wo arjun ek case ke liye gaya hai and two weeks ke baad hi lautega!!

Ananyaa- oh toh phir riya ko kitna jada wait karna padega na! She said and winked at him.

Sam- karna toh padega.. Aakhir arjun ne bhi toh intezaar kiya hai! He too winked at her! But someone was peeping inside he never knw through the glass and she got the shock when he saw sam winking at the girl in-front of him. Somehoe ayesha and liza managed to calm her and make her stable!

Arjun was travelling but his phone is in no coverage area so he thought to try later! But he too was badly missing her!

Almost 15 days passed but he didn't even called her.. As the coverage area! Now his anger is evident from his working style and end up kicking the culprits of the case!! Some how he managed to call Ananyaa via a PCO which was hopefullly working!

It was the same time and Ananyaa's phone buzzed , and she was sitting beside riyad! Ananyaa picked up the call but the other end never spoke anything! She repeated hello, hello!! But none answered! So she was about to cut the call while riya asked in anticipation, " Who is it!" and she said, nth a blank call just'' , but riya asked for the call and she holds the phone near her ears! The same feeling she felt after 15 days.. His calm sensation soothing her sense! His increasing heart beat is speaking volumes which she could here ! Same with him! Its been a long he have talked with her and and it is been very long he satyed away without looking at her face.

Ananyaa was smirking inside while riya was lost in the phone and she didn't even heard the chukle of her elder sister!

After how much time she cuts the call and ananyaa asked, " kuch bataya''??
She answered, '' Blank call tha di!'' and said, '' mujhe nind aa ahi hai''!

Ananyaa- aaj badi jaldi nind aa gayi.. Abhi toh sirf raath ke 1 baje hai..
Riya- di mujhe sone do..! Subhe uthna bhi hai na!
Ananyaa stood up and kissed her forhead and covered her with the blanket and made herself comfortable on the couch!

She was happy, atleast he called her.. She have seen the helplessness of her younger sister who is in madly in love!

And she hoped a better and more wonderful future of her princess with her prince charm!

5 Days Later

She was standing at the terrece of he home and was enjoying the view of the sunset, the singing birds and the soothing air! The world looks more beautiful when she saw those wonders through her eye sight!
But somethig is missing! The the calming sensation of the air is missing! And she turned her head ! At the same time a screetching sound caught her attention and she closed her eyes..

And she felt she is in heaven..
Yes the same sensation of the air is back to calm her and sooth her! She shut her eyes tightly and breathed heavily to calm herself! Then turned her head!

She found a man sitting on the slightly wet sand , at the point where the sea and horizone is parted evidently!

A heary smile crept upon her face and she made her way down stairs. She opened her gate and looked here and there he was the only man sitting on the deserted beach.. Her heart rate increased even more. A black SUV caught her attention and she again smiled..

She took slowly took steps and stood behind the man sitting on the beach!

Then she bent down on her knees and closed his eyes with her right hand palm and took his left hand with her, and then holds his index finger and made some pattern on the wet sand!!

Her chin was on his shoulder and her hair caressing his cheek!

Her palm on his eyes and his lack of reaction somehow irritated her!

He holds her left hand and pulled a little and now her back is supported by his knee while he looked into her eyes!!

And he spoke, " Missed me''?
She nodded and said, " a lottt!!''

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Arjun looked into her eyes and she eyed him to look at the pattern she made on the wet sand...

But he never broke the eye contact and said in a calm voice , '' I don't need to see that riya!! '' i was very sure , this time you can't reject me!! Because NOW I AM PERFECT FOR YOU!! She shut his mouth by placing her finger and said, '' NO, ARJUN I AM PERFECT FOR YOU''.

Later arjun looked at the pattern and spoke," hmm practice makes a man perfect ''! And chukled..
While the colour change is truely evident from her face.

They don't need any words.. Any commitmentss.. Any hope . They are complete now!!

That one night in hospital made him realized that, she too is a independent girl and she have the rights on her life and she have to stand for herself.. Without any support.. Which she was doing for how many years.. And he made himself clear that he will only love her, will care for her keeping aside the over protectiveness!!

On the other side.. When she struggled for water, she too felt his presence there, and a small prediction she did that he will help her.. But he never did that!! And made her more happy!!

She was confirmed that he is not any more over protecting or showing any sympathy!

Her heart said to capture the love he is showeing on her!! And that was the moment her heart said, " no i could not deny my heart anymore"!!

..

He embraced her and made her close to his heart and let the silence speak more volume for the two madly in love couple..

Another two people too was watching this union of the duo plastering a hearty smile on their face..

There was never the intimacy in their relation.. The relation only starts from heart and ends with another heart.. Desire?? No!! Never.. There was never a place for this thing in their relation..
But yes their only desire was love which only could make them calm for ever!!

They have the whole life for knowing eachother!! Now he just only faded away the darkness . . .

Now he have to show her, the life with sparkling rays .. Means the happiness and the love which he wanted to share with the someone special he loved.. And the special he adored..

This time the wild ocean was too calm.. The waves never dared to wipe away the symbol of the eternal love!!

❤️

THE END

** NOTE**
( wht a boring vampy😆 )
thank you so so so much for the comments and likes.
🤗
I think this the firs time I am completeing any work in this speed!😆

as many of you have guessed the reasons of her rejecting him was right! The way i expressed in the story! 😳
hope i havn't disappointed anyone🤢😭 with this simple story😒

do share your views regarding this update😳

will come with another simple one.. 😉 if got time😃

again thank you my lovely readers😃.

PS
1
so i am being predictable to my KBBs😉
kuch sochne ka padi!!😆

2

No silent reading..
There is nothing guttery here! SYS??
Why hiding ?😳

****
thank you❤️
unpredictable vampy

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

it was awesome update vampu.

so finally riya confessed her feeling.

i am speechless no words to describe.

continue soon.

and thanx for pm.

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Wonderful update dr.

Exceptionally well written update dr.

Riya's POV was mind blowing.

She is right that everyone should be indepentent.

Glad that Arjun got her point in time.

OMG Sam was so lost in Ananya that he didn't recognised Arjun's voice until he shouted. That was hilarious.

That Ananya-Sam-Saakshi segment was quite funny.

That phone call n Ariya silent convo was beautiful.

The confession in the end was so adorable.

Sweet n cute ending!!!!!!!

Thanx 4 pm dr.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

res

unres though i am 4rth bt i am the first to unres as i hv to go sleep

vampy first let me laugh for u knw what 🤣🤣🤣🤣 the girl i love love...sameer? omg this is too much 🤣

ok then...so riya will be for 15 days in hospital...arjun changed slowly. no protectiveness, no showing sympathy, treating her like equaly.

then riya also love him, bt due to her blindness nt saying that...hmm so i was right in that😉 nice...well u and i unpredictble so i hd to open ur raaz😆 and hey u steal my unpredictable wala title nt fair🤣

ok then...sam and anu? i mean...okkk...and then arjun gone? poor ri...ab bhugto like hotwa did for 3 months😆 and that phn call...love really dnt need words, does it? just sound of heartbeat and breath is enough to sense ur presence😳

then,...anu went to ETF and that scene...nt fair u separate my sasha😡bt what happned afterwards was 🤣🤣 no comnts over it as i dont want to ruin ur thread😆

then riya's eyes were open...and aww she thinks now she is perfect for him! hmm...and those last lines...love is like ocean, vast and eternal! true in every sense.

and ur note 🤣 well members are all over age i guess, so commnting on gutter and silent reading suddh desi romance😆 bt u keep writing heart touching pieces like this one😳

with lots of love...

RI aka BB😉

ps i hve one request i want sang hoon tere season 3

Edited by riyasarkar007 - 12 years ago

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

awesome ending vampu.. U rocked it.. Thanks for pms..

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

It was awesome
loved the part where arjun hugs sam
loved riya confession
finally they are together
It was mind blowing story
loved it so much
thanks for pm

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