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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Ur 2nd chalenge
write a sequel os of dua fr me
princess_pari thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
payal didu ke grilling session๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ

wat if i cum to ur home~ always welcomed didu... i will be sooo happy๐Ÿ˜ƒ

wat if u becum prime minister for a day~ lolz... me in politics... desh ka satyanash hoga๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
well... if i become PM, then i would do something which would ensure the efficient working of government towards welfare of people and take steps towards eradication of corruption.


wat if u becum etf chief for a day lol~ it would be like... wow... (think n edit later)

wat if i say i hate u~i know you wont. main aapki pari hun naa...๐Ÿ˜ณ

a sng for me~ dhunki... pata nahin kyun...

wat u dnt like in me~as for now, nothing๐Ÿ˜Š

ur fav cartoon character~ i left watching cartoons quiet early๐Ÿ˜› but i like jerry

why u dnt like sik~is there any reason needed for any arjunian to hate him?!!!๐Ÿ˜ก
invisible villian


wat is d height of crazines fr u~hehee... you are asking this crazy thing about height of crazyness...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† i cant decide didu...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


wat u want to change in arjun forum~nothing... its the best forum for me...๐Ÿ˜Š

describe urself~ me... lemme think...
oki...extremely talkative, naughty, sometimes introvert, sometimes extrovert... love creativity, thodi...naa, bohut zyada paagal๐Ÿ˜† rowdy at times๐Ÿ˜‰ people close to me say its quiet difficult to know me(i wonder why?!) ab...khud ki aur kitni tareef karun didu?!๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Ur 2nd chalenge
write a sequel os of dua fr me


done... miljayega...

and yeah. aapke comments mere stories pe nahin aaya...no matter praise karo ya daanto...
nahin aaya to main aapse baat nahin karungi.
sys?!!!!!

aap silent reader mode pe matt jao na didu...
Payal_156 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Yup i knw pari
i m out of my silent mode
pm me d idea of os of dua...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
52 kilos waali... aisha...lol
(riya MV: aagayi chudail khoon choosne. Iss gadhe ko koi aur nahin mila kya?)
arj-gadha
nahiii!!!!!!!
bechare arjun ki watt laga gai
dusrath bana diya
3-3 maharani...lol
sakshi.chipkali...rofl
riya-rosh ek...R ka asar...lol
We used to tell lovers suffer from disease loveria, isme na, macchar nahin kaat te...insaan insaan ko kaat ta hai..."
hehehehehe


loved it dear๐Ÿ˜Š
its amazing๐Ÿ‘
maza aa gaya padh ke!๐Ÿ˜‰


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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Hey dear.
Congratulations.

My challeng is please make an ariya romantic ff or os including sasha too.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Ok, i'm sure you've already had enough with questions, so here's my challenge๐Ÿ˜‰"

Write two OS actually๐Ÿ˜† on :

1) Shree and Liza: Liza keep pestering Shree, Shree hates her or at least thinks he does, till one day something happens( your choice?) and he confesses to her๐Ÿ˜ณ

2) Arjun and ( Riya, Sakshi or whoever you want): Both on a case, and then suddenly the female out of anger confesses to Arjun, and Arjun confused, scolds her, girl goes missing, Arjun look for her and realises his feelings๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i was away from home for two days all of a sudden... so could not fulfill challenges...

i ll post the stories by Sunday eve as tmro morn my clg starts...

hope you forgive me...๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Congratulations Pari!! keep it up love

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
didu... sorry for being late...
here is your story...
Dua sequel OS...
~~~

"Shree, koi aisa karta hai kya? Agar tumhe kuch hojaata to??" screamed Arjun at Shree who stood rooted to his spot.

"sir wo..." he was unsure what he had to deduce from the expressions of his senior.

He was literally spitting fire from his eyes.

His glare was making Shree weak in his knees.

Arjun took a few steps ahead and Shree went equal steps back.

It was not everyday event not to be at the receiving end of Arjun raute but today Shree felt it was something different.

He could see some unknown fear in arjun's eyes, unknown emotions...

"what if we had lost you Shree?!"

That one simple question threw Shree off guard.

**********

"bhaisa... bhaisa dekhiye na, main apne college mein first aayi hun."

Roshni, clad in traditional rajasthani lehanga, odhani leaving a trail behind as she ran all round the corridors with the paper.

"arre waah roshni... ab to Mumbai mein aage ki padhai pakki..."

Sameer lifted her from ground and twirled her round, their laughter reverberating the whole house.

Their parents stood watching happiness of the brother and sister.

**********

"hum wo hai jo desh ke liye jaan de de..."

"Arjun bas kar na ye filmy dialogue..."

"arre sam... film ka dialogue nahin hai ye. Dil se keh raha hun. Har roz bhagwan se yahin dua maangta hun ki agar meri jaan waqt se pehle jaaye, to wo bekaar nahin jaana chahiye. Jaate waqt meri ye zindagi desh ke kaam aana chahiye..."

"arre yaar... tu na aisi baatein kehke mujhe, the sameer rathod ko emotional kar deta hai... chup kar naa..."

"haha... aaj chup ho jaata hun sam... par tab matt kehna jab main hamesha ke liye chup ho jaaunga..."

Those were the glorious days when the two were in their training academy.

***********

"Arjun... meet my little sister roshni... roshni ye arjun hai. Mera sabse accha dost hai ye."

Sameer patted Arjun on his back and hugged him sideways.

He saw from corner of his eyes that Arjun was lost... lost in the beauty of his sister.

And she, she was blushing...

He grinned mentally at the sight of all-the-time-in-control Arjun Raute lost in something or someone.

It was not always he was into someone and nor his sister.

The mere thought of his sister and his best friend together made him happy.

He knew Arjun was a nice guy and his sister would always be happy with him.

***********

Sameer was running with arjun's mobile in his hand.

Arjun was yelling sam's name and ran as fast as his legs could take him.

He finally managed to pull sam and tried to pry out the mobile phone in his hand.

"sam, phone *huph* mujhe dede..."

"nahin saale... tu ne mujhse ye baat chupayi ki tu roshni se..."

Arjun with all his might hugged sameer and whispered in his ears

"mana matt karna sam... I love her with all my heart and soul...can I marry her?!"

"tu ye mujhse pooch raha hai? Meri behan se kaha?"

"nahin baba... meri premika ka ek bhai hai. Khadoos types you know?! Agar usme mujhe maar diya to? Isiliye found it safe to ask brother first. Kya kehte ho? Doge apni behan ka haath mujhe?"

"haan saale.."

"jija..."

Sameer punched his gut and Arjun mock punched his nose and both together broke into uncontrollable laughter.

***********

His sister was in that traditional rajasthani bridal attire.

She looked eternal, glowing like a goddess in arjun's love.

he saw her smile at Arjun shyly when he openly winked at her.

Arjun... his best friend...

It was not hidden from him the small secret of Arjun roshni...

They were madly in love. They were like what they say-two bodies, one soul.

Sameer smiled through his tears seeing his sister walking with Arjun around the holy fire.

His heart swelled with pride.

Arjun glanced and smiled at sameer...

************

"par Arjun, roshni..."

"wo samjhegi sameer... bas usse zyada details matt dena..."

With that Arjun hugged him and left for his mission.

Sameer knew Arjun was an able officer. But brother in him, a friend in him was worried.

He assured roshni to reveal them as couple in media.

************

"what the hell?!!! Ye kaise hua dammit?!!?!!! Wo meri choti behan hai samjhe?! Aur tum log usko protect nahin kar paaye?"

He left to delhi with rest team.

Roshni was kidnapped. His baby sister...

************

He drove the car like a maniac. He wanted his sister and friend back safe and sound.

He just then received a call.

He saw Arjun dumping sikander and roshni seating in passenger and Arjun sitting in driving seat.

Why would not he understand? The bomb diffuse squad was on their way...

"sameer...aaj mera aur tumhara saath khatm hua...sorry main roshni ko bhi nahin baccha pa raha hun... ho sake to maaf kardo hume...jaate jaate sikander ko bhi hum saath le jaa rahe hai...usse jeene koi haq nahin hai...alvida..."

Those words spoken by Arjun stabbed his heart like thousand knives, twisting and turning, draining blood out of him.

Sameer saw Arjun speeding the car and not many ten feet far ot blew into flames, carcasses thrown out. he knew he had lost two most important people in his life.

His best friend and his sister.

"NOOO..." sameer screamed loudly.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"sameer... sameer aankhein kholo... please sameer..."

Aisha was terrified to see sameer writhing on the sofa, screaming loudly.

She was watching him sleeping. He refused to rest after preparing for the pooja and sat on sofa with Aisha, Shree and chotu. At some point of time, exhaustion claimed him and he drifted into uneasy sleep. She knew he was having flashbacks in his dreams.

"Aisha... Arjun aur roshni... main unhe nahin baccha paaya..."

He dug his face in his palms and cried.

This was the day the all-in-control-chief lost his control.

It was Arjun roshni's second barsi and the flood gates of memories opened.

Aisha hugged him tightly and rubbed his back, tears brimming in her own eyes.

Shree and chotu too had tears in their eyes.

"humne bas ye dua maanga tha unse ki undonon ko humare saath hameasha khush rakhna, unhe saath rakhna. Wo dono saath to hai par..."

Shree broke into tears.

"Sameer bhaiyya...shree bhaiyya... agar aap log iase royenge to aaqif ko abhi accha nahin lagega..."

Sameer and others lifted their head to see an 18 year old shriya, who was rescued by Arjun.

"aaj unki barsi hai. Iska matlab ye nahin hai ki hum roye. Ye un donon ko bilkul accha nahin lagega. Aap log jaake taoyaar ho jaayiye. Pandit ji aate hi honge.

Aaj hi ke din hamare ghar se do log desh ke liye shaheed hue hai. Please... if you cry it will be like showing disrespect to them... please bhaiyya... bhabhi please..."

The misery in their eyes was replaced by pride and determination. Sameer wiped his tears and patted shriya's head.

"dua se kaun aaya hai?"

"sab..."

Sameer smiled and went to change.

It was two years Arjun and roshni left the world, left their beloved in deep loss.

It was the day when Arjun left his best friend and roshni her brother for ever.

It was two years they saw them everywhere around them, every place, every corner...

ETFians, had founded an organization called 'DUA' in the memories of Arjun and roshni. They helped the abused people, who tortured under the evil hands and gave them a new hope.

Shriya took the entire responsibility on her shoulder along with continuing the studies.

Their dua was now for those people who were working for their nation and also for those who suffered under the evil.


Dard mein, dard mein, dard mein
Nikle dilon se, dua, dua
Marhame, marhame, marhame
Rakh de dilon ki, dua, dua
Niraasha dale
Khile jo kyaari mein dil ki zameen ki dua
Diaasha poori kare jo bhi zindagi mein kami thi, dua

Andhere tarse, khuda ke ghar se
Ujaale na kyun barse
Guzaare kaise, saza ke jaise
Din namo ke lagey arse
Sab sajde de, sajde de
Dua karo

Kabhi bina baaton ko bhi khole bina honthon ko bhi
Awaaz do aaj, do aaj awaaz do, aaj do
Dil pe sahi dil mein nahi
Dono dil ki chuno toh bhi
Awaaz do aaj, do aaj awaaz do

Andhere tarse, khuda ke ghar se
Ujaale na kyun barse
Guzaare kaise, saza ke jaise
Din namo ke lagey arse
Sab sajde de, sajde de
Dua karo

Dard mein, dard mein
Nikle dilon se, dua, dua



their memories would never be erased from their heart. they were part of their every dua.


Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago

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