NEW ARNI OS: LAST WORDS...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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My result is out...though it wasn't quite upto my expectations but it wasn't too bad...after feeling depressed for quite some time i've decided to feel happy now and sharing my happiness with you people, i've decide to write this os...
this is the last convo of roshni and arjun as she's taking her last breaths...
it is in the form of poetry...hope you like it...

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

(Sikandar has stabbed Roshni, Arjun too is hurt a lot...Roshni is taking her last breaths...)

Arjun:

Leave me not to be tormented,
And if you must, take me with you.
Living without you would be worse than death,
Don't push me for a life that i'll rue.

(Tears are flowing down their cheeks as they struggle to feel each other for the last time...)

Roshni:

You are my strength, don't falter now,
My life isn't as precious as yours.
I'll be forever alive in your heart,
Every wound, however deep, time cures.

(Roshni is gasping for breath...and is finding it hard to speak...she is bleeding profusely...arjun is feeling helpless and distraught as he's unable to help her...)

Arjun:

I won't be cured, I'll be plagued by guilt,
Bound by the fetters of deep woes.
My heart will beat just for you,
Whether awake or while I repose.

My restless heart won't let me sleep,
Till I avenge your pain and tears,
A living corpse is what you leave behind,
Engulfed in darkness and surreal fears.


Roshni:

My love, I want you to know,
Happiness for you is my last desire.
I may not be there to caress your cheek,
But within you I'll live as hope's fire.

Your tears are too precious to waste on me,
Let my soul rest in peace, please.
Don't blame yourself, you're a gem,
Just don't let your life ever freeze.

A sweet memory is all I want to be,
But forget me if memories give you pain.
It is difficult, it will hurt, I know,
But there's no happiness without a little rain.

We always think our first love is perfect,
Till the second one enters our life,
And when it does, don't you dare think,
That you're betraying your dead wife.

The countdown has begun, I must leave,
Even though I want to but I can no longer stay.
Do give yourself a second chance,
I just can't see you this way.

Don't torment yourself for me,
For it will really tear my heart.
Remember the happiness that we shared,
Don't let the separation tear you apart.

With this I bid you farewell, my love,
Destiny's decree can't be overruled.
I know we shall never meet again,
But I die content that once upon your heart I ruled.


(roshni's eyes close forever and her heart stops beating...arjun goes into a sate of shock...for hours he keeps staring at her mesmerizing..but lifeless body...and then finally words find their way out along with tears of anguish.. )


Arjun:

Each day I'll try to take a step forward,
But my frozen state won't permit me.
I'll be all alone even in a crowd,
Even in daylight, only darkness I'll see.

There'll be a void within me that can't be filled,
However hard I might try.
Every time I'll strive for a new beginning,
Your memories will make me cry.

Wishing for your return is foolish, I know,
But then, this is a dream of my broken heart.
And though by all means I've let go,
Waking up remains the hardest part.

I can erase you from my mind,
Getting you out of my heart is another story.
And till I do that, I can't start over,
I'll remain stuck with ambiguity, guilt and worry.

But how do I forget someone,
Who gave me so much to remember?
How do I move on without the person,
Who was my life's essential member?

I've lost myself along with you, and this won't change,
I'll keep reflecting why life treated me in this cruel way..
They say sharing the pain lessens the burden,
But they're unaware that invisible tears are the hardest to wipe away.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


i've never tried anything like this before...hope you all like it...
pls hit the like button and give your comments if you like it...😊😊
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Piya_Malik thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wov!
heart touching

loved it😃 👏
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superb depiction of loosing
a person who's our life
its was really heart touching
loved it👏👏👏👏👏
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heart touching..
very nice...👏
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WOW!!!! perfect poetry and descriptions!!! 👏did u write it all by yourselg?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I m arni pankha yay
awesumly writen
beautiful
lov it
keep writing on arni
wow
so heart wrenching lines.
tears...!
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wow..
Superb dear..
Its so heart touching..
Nd great job..
Very well written 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

wov!

heart touching

loved it😃 👏


Originally posted by: rizwanaa

superb depiction of loosing
a person who's our life
its was really heart touching
loved it👏👏👏👏👏


Originally posted by: princess_pari

heart touching..
very nice...👏


Originally posted by: shreya09

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏



Originally posted by: Payal_156

I m arni pankha yay
awesumly writen
beautiful
lov it
keep writing on arni
wow
so heart wrenching lines.
tears...!


Originally posted by: aroojarain

wow..
Superb dear..
Its so heart touching..
Nd great job..
Very well written 👍🏼



Originally posted by: --ARIA--

WOW!!!! perfect poetry and descriptions!!! 👏did u write it all by yourselg?


thank you so much everyone...🤗🤗🤗🤗

@--ARIA-- yep...i wrote it myself...actually i write poems in my free time...so besides the ones that i wrote just now, i used modified forms of my previous poems as well...

i'm glad you all liked it...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Leki

Heart touching... well written



thank you so much everyone...🤗🤗🤗

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