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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
awesome concept
omg such a funny update🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
hehe riya🤣🤣🤣 poor arjun🤣🤣🤣
he thinks his total family is crazy... loved his description for everybody🤣🤣🤣
liked this funny arjun so much🤣🤣🤣
can't stop laughing yaar🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
cont soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Arjun ki mental family!!!🤣🤣
loved the way Arjun described everybody😆
wah wah fashion photographer in Vegas, with all the hot models..kya baat hai Arjun ji😉
what thee!! First meeting mai he he spit water on her🤣🤣
lovely ..do contd soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
@sissy today dear

@arooj will pm u glad u liked it

@sri thnxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
@piya glad u liked it

@sumbul will update soon

@BD ami ajkei update krbo dear

@sara will update soon

@mad OMG...mujhe sirf ROFL emo dikhe tumhare comment mein...itna funny tha kya?

glad u liked it.

@blazing will update soon glad u liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

thanks everyone for commenting and liking this story's 1st part...now i am sure that we all are crazy


here is the new update...do have a look😳


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''lower your gun.'' My best friend along with his fiance cum my sister entered into scene. She was shocked with all this thing, and that bast**d was smirking.he was amused and I was punched. Now he is so dead!

''but sir this….'' A guard said something but he cut him.

''he is our new officer. not some criminal.'' He said. The guards looked at each other and lowered their guns. They mumbled me and all a sorry and left the room.

I looked at my ex best friend with angry glares, and was more angry to see his smirk in return. Then I turned to the girl who punched me, and instantly my all anger vanished. She was so scared, like a kitten.hmm..nice name….kitten. her horrified expression made me want to laugh out loud.

''why did you call guards?'' that bas***d ask her, trying very hard to suppress his laughter. I want to punch him , strangle him in this very moment.

''err….sir….umm…..i am really sorry. I thought he is some ….. umm….actually I didn't see him earlier in here…so…'' she mumbled, not meeting his eyes, and I was trying more to not laugh. And I noticed another thing, her err….umm….err….. LOL!!!!

''you should have ask him.'' He said her, and she went more in shell. I was not liking it that he was intimidating her .after all this punching and yelling, I still don't wanted to trouble her.i glared at my sister, telling her with my eyes to make her fiance behave. She cleared her throat.

''you should change your cloth. Its fully wet.'' She said. My kitten was relieved and thankful, and went out of the cabin, sprinting. Ok…what? Kitten? My? Her punch was affecting me too much I suppose.

She went outside, and that bast**d burst into laughter. He hold his stomach ,sat on the chair, and laughed his heart out. I went to punch him.

''you….'' Before I can do anything, my sister hold me.

''you are bleeding.this can wait. And please, will you behave yourself? You are the head of here.'' The last part was for him and he instantly stopped laughing, but still smirking.

She took out the first aid box, and cleared the blood. I kept glaring at him, and he was unaffected.

''she can punch quite well, is not it?'' he started and again burst into laughter. I continued to fume and both me and my sister glared to him.

''hey…don't give me that look.'' He said to us both .he shut up, and again after some time, asked me.

''how did she get wet? Don't tell me you threw water on her.'' He said in disbelieve.

''err….umm….'' what the…. I am behaving like her! '' actually I spit water on her.''

The room was fully silent, and suddenly, both him and my sister burst into laughter .they gave hi5 to each other. She supported herself on my chair, and laugh her heart out .i also could not help but join them.

'' so, are we forgiven?'' he asked after sometime .my sister was back in the work of nursing me.

''still not.'' I said.

''oh, come on….try this. I am sure you will like in here.'' He argued.

''why cant you guys understand? Its not my thing. My thing is more like ….'' He cut me off.

''I know , I know….models and flirting….''

''exactly.'' I finished.

''ok, stay here till you receive your joining letter, ok?'' he proposed. I rolled my eyes.

''bro, you don't want to stay with us? With family?'' here start my sister's emotional drama. She has got this gene from my mom, I am damn sure!

''you are doing what you want, I am doing what I want. And you know photography is the only work I am good at.'' I explained.

''but you are good in this thing too. Remember we both gave this exam? You were 2nd topper …. If you joined academy then, you would have been a terrific officer.'' She argued.

''one person is good at many things. You were also good at playing piano. So why did you leave that?'' I argued back, and she opened her mouth to say something. I cut her.

''look, the whole family is behind me as I didn't have any plan for career. Now I have. So please, no arguments in here, alright? I am here till I receive my joining letter, and then I am off to Vegas .you guys used your influence to include me in team, and I appreciate it. But you have not asked me, right?''

I looked at them both, and their faces fell. I sighed and said in a soft voice.

''guys, understand, its not my thing .and its not I am running or something. I will be here for some time, but not forever.'' I concluded.

''why you are so hell bent on leave?'' my best friend asked me. I rolled my eyes.

''its not I have some allergy to stay here. Its just…'' I searched for words.'' I have no reason to stay here. And I mean solid reason, not just my family and friends.''

''and if you found it?'' he asked and my sister looked at me with hopes.

''let it come first, ok?'' I answered. While my sister was sad, he was looking hopeful. Don't know what is playing in his mind.

Whatever, the point is it's the first day at my working place, I was punched and mesmerized by a supermodel type girl ,I was about to get shot by guards, I forgot to strangle my best friend, my sister was sad already after hearing my plan. And I am eagerly waiting for my letter to arrive .fingers crossed!

So, after nursing myself, my best friend and my sister went busy to discuss over a case of some murder.i made myself busy in iphone 5…the coolest gazette till now.at that time, 2 guys entered the room.one was curly haired, with specks ,had a genius type look, and the other, big ,tall guy, with great physique, and a kind look.they both nodded to them and looked at me questioningly.

''he is our new team member and 2nd in command.'' He replied.

If I had water in my mouth, I was about to spit again.what dafuq? 2nd in command? Oh no…means more work.

They both looked at me with respect and I smiled a little, when all I wanted to do is to kill him.

They both settled down and introduced themselves ., the big guy was chotu (irony ) and other was Shree.the genius guy asked me with too much awe in voice.

''where were you before this? I mean which department?''

''err….umm…'' oh great! Her affect! I mumbled for exact words…..which department? Modeling and flirting? Yeah right….

''actually…'' before I answer, my kitten girl entered and I was saved.wow….nice timing .i gave her a thanks in my head.

She settled down, and kept her eyes in a file in her head .oh, so she was ashamed to meet me? Hmm…

Then entered 2 girls more. One was long curly hair, with very modern dress, one shouldered top and hot pants with legins, with much makeup in eyes and deep shade of lip color…actually dressed for a party not for work, eyes full of mischievousness…and the other, dressed in a salwar suit, with minimal makeup and spark in face.their eyes automatically fell on me.

The salwar girl introduced herself, Saakshi, followed by her cousin sister, party dressed girl, name Liza.one thing was pretty interesting, the genius specky guy blushed when the party dressed girl wink at him.hmm….. I came to know that the party girl is forensic head, and the Salwar girl is ex journalist. I didn't understand…whats the point of bringing a journalist in a team? Never mind…none of my business.

We all settled down, and they went to discuss the case they were working .my sister gave us info about the progress they had till now, while paced around the table.they all discussed about the possible killer, and listened with zero interest, was more busy in phone.suddenly, my phone was snatched.

''what daf…..'' I was about to swore, but realized it is India and people swore here under their breath, not openly. I glared at my sister who was holding my phone.

''you are disturbing in my briefing.'' She said and put the phone in her jean's pocket. I slummed my palm in table angrily.she stopped and then continued to give update.and I had no choice but to listen.

Apparently, it was some murder of a student, actually it looked more like a suicide attempt, jumped from 4th floor of a hostel.her parents also informed that there was no reason of her to attempt suicide, so the team were believing that it can be a murder. They interrogated her friends, teachers, and all said that she was going through a tough time, so suicide might be a possibility.also there was traces of drugs in her blood, so may be someone had drugged her and then pushed her from building.

''sir…'' my kitten…what the…not again…. Whats with my kitten thing? I mentally cursed myself.

''sir, there are 78% case where the student attempt suicide because of their some personal issues, and 34% succeed in doing so.so may be this girl had also…''

Another thing added to my frustration.she was talking about percentage? I hate it.its one of the main reason of my not joining father's work.now I have to hear this percentage shit in here? I need a anger management course ASAP.i clutched my palm again in anger.

''may be…but we had to look in all aspect.'' My best friend and now my boss answered. Before someone else could say anything I said

''it is definitely a murder.''

Everyone looked at me shockingly, and my …..oh god….not again…..percentage girl looked at me with utter disbelief, not believing any of my word. The 5 other person, my sister, the 2 guys and 2 girls looked at me with awe. The only good reaction I get from my best friend turned boss, looked at me with pride and questions.

''the girl was drugged.'' I got up from my chair and went towards the board where all the details of the murder with pictures were written. ''so definitely someone had drugged her.''

''may be she herself used it…'' again my kitten…..and again "my kitten" thing.uff….its irritating me now!

''she herself used it?'' I asked turning at her amusedly.

''err….umm…'' again that thing….i am understanding this girl more with each passing second.

''may be…'' she said, biting her lips with tension. Another interesting observation.

''so she don't be scared when jumping?'' I asked her with sarcasm….and tried very hard not to laugh. I bet she was feeling like an idiot.

''so whats your point?'' my sister ruined my mood.

''victim herself cant arrange any drug. She is underage, and …'' I paused and looked at the team, ''without any prescription, its almost impossible to arrange. So there had to another person, and in this case, our killer.''

''maybe she had arranged it with the help of any senior?'' my kitten had not yet gave up….and now I gave up trying not to tell her "my kitten".

''its more easier to jump straight from building than arranging drugs with someone's help and explain that person the reason.'' I explained. The whole team was convinced and she looked down with disappointment. Aww…my kitten….what the…..i am behaving like a girl? What is this girl doing to me? Am I getting nuts? Yeah exactly this one. I sat on my chair and watched as the whole team discussed with this new aspect about drugs. And I busied myself to observe my kitten.

She followed each of member's POV, and copied it in her diary. Diary….green diary…and wait…is that pink pen?...hmm….another interesting point. And now I noticed, she has also a pink clip attached to her hair, holding her hair locks in their place .so girly! Of course, because she is a girl….idiot!

Suddenly, there was a knock in the glass door, and a man, mid 50 maybe, entered with tray of tea and coffee, and a water bottle? Why is that?

He entered and gave each of them their beverage.and looked at me apologetically.

''its ok. '' I said and took the water bottle , and drank it till the water is half.when I stopped and looked at him, he was looking at my kitten apologetically.

''what?'' I was confused, while my kitten was irritated.

''actually sir, '' the genius guy answered, ''the water bottle was for her. She always drinks from sealed water bottle.''

I felt a sudden anger….this guy know her so much, and I don't? so unfair. And to add more fuel, kitten was smiling at him.arghhh!!!!

''so, have it.'' I offered her my half filled bottle, and she looked at it with disgust.

''she don't like to eat or drink from other.'' Again her characteristic feature coming from HIM! I glared at him and forced a smile. ''thank you for the information.''

He gulped and went back to his ipad, while the other were confused and my friend turned boss looked at me smirking.

After some time, we all were out of the boring, big, air conditioned office and in a SUV. My friend did a good work after messing things up from me, he split the teams. And thankfully, kitten was with me, and there was no other extras, or to be more precise HIM!

Its really weird, I am hating this guy even before I know him. And why? Because his more knowledge about her than me. But its natural, she is with him before I come….

What? She is with him?...no no….means only working with him. Only working. Just working…nothing else.and this is enough reason to hate him….

Whats wrong with me? Am I getting mad? I need a drink…as soon as possible. I have to get out of here….it must be the jet lag….

But I cant leave her alone….with HIM!...ah, not again…..i am definitely getting mad!

I concentrated hard on driving, and she was looking at me like there are 2 heads on my body in place of 1 ! then she shrugged, and started the radio.she was enjoying a romantic hindi song, and I was irritated again.

Really? stupid romantic song? Who listens to that? Ah…of course….my kitten for sure.

But I hate it… stupid songs….how on earth one guy can fall in love with one girl only and spend his whole life with her only? And the words….i will die without you, your dream my aim of life, I will bring stars for you,I can drown in your eyes….and more crap. Really? I mean seriously? How on earth one can drown in one's eyes? And spend his entire life with one girl only? There is so much exciting thing than wasting your whole life with one girl.i bet this stupid love songs have a certain amount of responsibilities for divorce and break ups. If I was the president of India, I would have banned this things.

I looked at the radio, and then kitten irritatedly . She was enjoying this crap…and I was not saying anything .i was busy to observe her pleasure and smile .how cute she was looking. And one thing I must say, she looks fabulous in formal. Her earlier dress before I spit water on her, her green shirt and jeans, and now her black shirt and deep blue jeans…very good. And her open hair, adding more beauty.

Get a grip on your mind, will you? Stop checking her out like she is the first girl you are looking at? I mentally shouted at my heart, but my eyes refused to move an inch from her.

What am I getting myself into?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
amazing update :) loved it
rathore was smirking at arjun 😆
poor riya was really so scared
and awww didn't want to trouble her more
rathore was laughing at arjun 😆
wow arjun was the 2nd topper in this exam
arjun is 2nd in command nice
sakshi and liza are cousins
awww shree was blushing when liza winked at him
arjun hates percentages 😆
and he calls riya as my kitten interesting
love the way arjun was giving his opinion about the case
awww arjun noticed her pink clip
and took her water bottle and he was angry when that guy was telling about riya's habit
glad rathore paired arjun with riya
arjun was actually checking her out
hope arjun soon gets his reason to stay
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
BB this piece of your driving me crazy ..
I mean ab tak kahan tha ye..
Fr sure you are gajni, itna accha concept ab tak chupa ke rakha tha.
His mind pov is awesomely writtn and this is damn hillarious.
Sam was laughing at his condition..ha ha..
So good to be ex best friend..lol..
And her drama queen sis..
Its the effect of gene fr sure..🤣
and then kitten, no his kitten..hmm ab arjun ko reason mil jayega ..
Poor she was scared and he don't want to trouble her..interesting
And he sharp in solving cases.
2nd topper bhi tha..
That funny , the iphone 5 and its connection with india..
Ha ha..lol..
Aisha is strict in duty, she should be.
And then em..errr.
What?? Its her effect on him..interesting. And he wanna kill sam just becoz he knew her..
He was observing her pink pen and green diary and clip..
Nt so fair Rj . Abhi se itni possessive
And then her water bottel..ha ha..
She such a hygenic freak babes..
Tum bhi aise ho kya riya?? I mean my BB.

They both are in same suv. Its gona interesting..
The hell romantic songs.. And his pov abt love and lovers, hilarious.
What else you expect apart from this from a fashion photographer that to frm vegas..
Damn he is checking out her..
Nazron ko sambhalo arjun.. Kahi aage suv kahi thok na do..
Kyun ki nazar hati toh durghatana ghati..lol..
Ha ha..
BB looking forward to read more..
And loved this flirtcious seksy arjun.

Thanks fr pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Awesome update.
Thangod sasha come there and save arjun from guards.
Aww rathore smriking at arjun.
Riya is very sacred for arjun.
And arjun called riya my kitten.
And he angry on shree because he know everything about riya.
Sam pairs ariya.
And arjun is memerising her.
Hope he get a reason to stay in etf.
And he fall for riya first.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
haha..bhaiyya ko maine kabhi aise imagine hi nahin kiya maine...
lol..
sam ex friend...😆
aisha snatched his phone👏
riya...😆😆kitten🤣
bhaiyya 2nd topper...
case solve karne mein sharp to hai...
lovely part...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Awesome update... Arjun completely lost in his kitten... intresting... Sasha lol continue soon

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