Arakshi OS: The Unfinished

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nishima_15jul

@nishima_15jul

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Guys

I'm new to posting at this Forum. Have been around for a while and love the way you guys literally live with these characters. I too am a big fan of the show and its characters. Have penned down something which you might like. It's inspired from all the FF and OS writers at this forum and is dedicated to them too :)

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Edited by nishima_15jul - 12 years ago

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome believe ,me i am speechless wow indeed a nice one...that is when we say poles apart but connected emotionally great job loved it alot

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing!!!!! dnt hv words to describe... WOW!!!!

do write more...

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Very well written 👏 Amazing you are! one of the finest work on Arakshi..undoubtedly. 👍🏼

And you used few lines from one of my personal fav songs 😳

"Maybe we got lost in translation, maybe I asked for too much,

And maybe this thing was a masterpiece 'til you tore it all up.

Running scared, I was there, I remember it all too well." 😉

I loved it.. You should definitely write more dear. 😃

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

WOW... I have no words..!! It was Beautiful...!!

Sometimes, we as people, don't realise the value of what we have...!! We only care about what we don't have or have lost!

And many times, knowingly or unknowingly, we hurt the person who thinks the world of us..! Break the trust which someone treasures... And when we realise, It might be 2 late!!

Awesome 1...Loved it!

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

verg nice and emotional os :)

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

awesum wrk
lov it
amazing wrk
nyc title
superb lines
do write more
speechless
wow..!!

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

its awesome...
loved your writing...
do write more...😊

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nishima_15jul

@nishima_15jul

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

@ littlebrat: I'm overwhelmed to see your reaction :) Thanks!

@ Leki: Thanks a lot for the encouragement. I would definitely come-up with more :)

@ despicable_me: The song is my personal favourite too. And it fitted well here! Thanks a lot. Will definitely come-up with more :)

@ Arjunkibehen: That is true. We believe more in what we've lost than what we have. Hope we learn soon. Thanks :)

@ supreet_dmg: Thanks :)

@ ...amanvirdi...: Thanks dear :)

@ Payal_156: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)

@ Seenavas: Thanks a lot. Will surely try more!

@ princess_pari: Thanks a lot dear :)

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priya

@priyaiam

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Awesome!!!
no words to describe
do write more

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