NEW ARAKSHI SS- CHAHOON MAI YAA NAA

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Hey Arjunians!!🤗 i m back with a stupid creation of mine.😆 Yaa yaa I know u got bored with me😭... but I cannot stop the ideas doing revolutions, rotations, saumersaults and cartwheels in my mind!!😆 So just thought ki ye waala bhi padhwa lete hain!!CHARACTER SKETCH IS SAME AS MY PREVIOUS STORY! BUT THE STORY IS COMPLETELY DIFFERENT!!
Please give it a try!!🤗
Basically an Arakshi story, but also contains Shriza and Raesha!!😉
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CHARACTER SKETCH:


Arjun Suryakant Rawte- Tough, no-nonsense cop, who liked the nonsense of only three people in his entire life- his wife, Roshni, his friend, Sam urf Sameer Rathod, and his ex colleague Riya- All of whom he has lost tragically. Now his only aim in life is to avenge Sikander, the murderer of Roshni, and to win back his friend Sam, whom he had lost due to some, or rather too many, misunderstandings. Completely disapproving of Sakshi, who tries to make fun out of every tragic situation. Second-in-command of ETF.

Sameer Damsingh Rathod- A rough and tough cop, Rajput by birth, who is hard on the outer but very sensible and soft on the inner side. He was once the best friend of Arjun, but had broken his friendship due to misunderstandings. He deeply cares about his friend but hesitates to show it. Has a special bond with his colleague Ayesha. Chief of ETF.

Ayesha Kapoor – She is a strong and sensible female cop, who wants to hold a special position in this male dominated world. She has a haunting past which she never allows to be revealed. She holds a special respect for Arjun and a hidden love for Rathod. Always tries to cover up the mistakes of her colleagues.

Shreekanth Sen urf Shree - The techie guy of ETF. He can do anything from hacking phones to take up a disguise as a drug addicted student. Provides a lot of help to his team whenever he can, but never demands credit for his work. He had a special camaraderie with Chotu and Riya. After Riya's death he was completely shattered, but still held himself together to serve for the ETF. On the surface dislikes Liza a lot, but has a hidden feeling for her.

Chandrakant Patil urf Chotu – The muscle man of ETF, who provides physical strength to the team. He is an unusual combination of brains and brawns. . He had a special camaraderie with Shree and Riya. After Riya's death he was completely shattered, but still, like Shree, held himself together to serve for the ETF. He loves dogs and likes to take care of them.

Liza D'Cruz – The forensic expert of ETF. She is the medical backbone of the team. There is a reason- her dangerous past- because of which she can look upon the most gruesome murders, and handle it like a piece of cake. Loves to taunt Shree, still loves him a lot and waiting for the right time to tell him. Good friends with Ayesha and Sakshi.

Sakshi Anand – The newest addition to the team. She is very chirping and tries to elevate the mood by her funny jokes. Although she looks very immature, she is very experienced in the field of emotions and relationships as well as criminology. She knows that Arjun hates her, but thinks it to be his character to be rude to everyone. Very curious about his past.

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PART- I
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'' I promise you Shree. Mai Arjun ke chehre par wo hansi waapas le kar aaungi. Ye aadmi ek din zaroor hansega.''

This was her promise. Not only to Shree, but also to herself.

She had seen many a sad faces in her life span of 22 years. And to tell the truth, she had even made most of them smile. Frown was something Sakshi never got used to. Whenever she ''encountered'' such people, she put all her life and soul to showcase a grin on their faces. But Arjun was a different case. He was not one to easily, oh forget that word!. He was not one to open up to anyone at any cost. His eyes held volumes of pain and anger, and what more, maybe guilt?, and his face, a permanent glare. This was what had caught her attention, when she first met him. He looked to her as an empty shell, with nothing inside. Yes, as she had worked with him, she found out more to this strange man. He was a man of excellent wits and knowledge, but exceptionally short temper. This was proved to her when he had thrown the criminal of their present cases in order to start the process of justice then and there itself.

But of course, this never allowed Sakshi to lower the respect she held for him. She agreed that he needs to control himself sometimes, but there was something, God knows what, in her heart, which made her feel for the emotionless man. And this exactly was what made her take up her new case- MISSION '' make Arjun Rawte smile''

Present:

The case was finished, the criminal was caught, and the victim's body had been handed over to her family. That left only the paperwork. And as Ayesha was on emergency leave- her only sister was in hospital due to a major heart attack- that left only Shree, Chotu and Sakshi to do the work.

''Kya yaar Chotu. Theek se kar naa. Ab issme bhi gadbad ho gayi to Rathore sir humara chehra gadbad kar denge.'' Shree scowled. He was a bit too frustrated with the heavy work. They had to fill the case details for two murders! Ah. This heavy work!!

''Riya ek cup coffee laana please…'' the sentence had left his mouth, and now Shree realized what he had said. Immediately tears came to his eyes and even Chotu's.

The ever attentive Sakshi too had heard this. By now she knew who Riya was. She was a real hero of the country. That exactly was how Sakshi felt. She had heard a lot of stories of her innocent acts, her hygiene-freak nature, and finally her sacrifice for the greater good. And the most surprising thing for her was, even THE Arjun Suryakant Rawte- had cried after her death. And this made Sakshi sure that she must have had a great impact on this tough cop.

''Shree, Chotu, sambhalo yaar apne aap ko. Socho Riya ko kitna bura lagta hoga tum logon ko rote hue dekh kar'', She tried to console both of them.

''You are right Sakshi.'' This was the first time Chotu spoke. But for Shree, it was a damage too big to handle. He went out of the conference room, straight to the computer room, his personal favorite area in the new office.

As soon as he entered the door, he broke down on the floor. Riya was his best friend straight from the day he had joined the training academy. And her loss was something which Shree had struggled too much to take in. Tears made way from his eyes, as fast as the flow of a river.

Suddenly, he felt a hand on his shoulder. He saw up, to see that it was his arch enemy- Liza.

''Liza, please chali jao yahaan se. Mai mazaak ke mood me nahi hun.''

''Shree, mai mazaak nahin karne aayi hun.'' It was the first time that she had called him anything other than Specky. Her voice had a very soft, feminine touch. And Shree couldn't believe his analysis, that it sounded good from her mouth.

''Shree, dekho yaar, mai jaanti hun ki tum Riya ko bahut miss kar rahe ho. But rone ka koi faayda nahin. Jo jaa chuke unhe yaad kar rone se sirf unhein aur humein dono ko dukh hi pahunchta hai. Life mein aage badho. To Riya ki aatma ko bhi shaanti milegi.''

Shree was astonished. The always chirpy, irritating Liza, had said something which had dried up his tears. He completely agreed with what she had said. And, involuntarily he hugged her. A friends wala hug. After a few seconds, they broke apart and started towards their work areas.

But Shree stopped her-" By the way Liza, ye tujhe hua kya thaa?''

"Kuch nahin, Shree" Liza was back to the chattering and blabbering mode "wo, kya hai na mujhe koi to chahiye jo mujhe har weekend Disco lekar jaaye, wo bhi bina 'silly boyfriend' questions puche. Secondly, ETF mein do serious officers- urf Rathod sir aur Arjun sir- hi kafi hain. Samjhe ya….??'' She gave him a wide smile.

And Shree returned the smile to his former enemy, now don't know what, maybe friends??

Edited by --ARIA-- - 12 years ago
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Woohoo I m first to comment on this story ... Hey dear this is the nice concept ... I loved it ... I liked the CS ... Wow Sakhshi Arjun ke face pe smile leke aayegi... I m waiting for that... Aww Shree was missing Riya... Poor Shree 😭 But Sakhshi is sweet kaise woh Shree ko honsla de rahi thi... I hope Aysha ki sister jalad theek ho jayegi... Thanks for this story dear ... And Usdat g (Aliya) concept of the story is mindblowing dear ... Plz-2 update soon and Plz pm me the next part 😊 And thanks Aria 👏
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Aru...can i cal u dis !!?
amazing start
mision yay
superb cs
aww shreetu..
waiting!!
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Originally posted by: Payal_156

Aru...can i cal u dis !!?
amazing start
mision yay
superb cs
aww shreetu..
waiting!!

Yuppp...it izz a nyc name😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aapke pm se pahle hi read ka li thi

nice
loved it😉
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Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

aapke pm se pahle hi read ka li thi


nice
loved it😉

Thank u!!!😛
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Originally posted by: unishaz

nice yar.. Continue..

😉
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Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Awesome start...


Very nice..!!

Thank u DII😛

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