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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: despicable_me


I don't love him, winter just wasn't my season 😉

oh why..thanks -___-

SM..hmm, currently no 😆 and yeah, he smokes


Ahh.. Tumhe samajhna mushkil hai! 😆

Currently no? 😆 Any why is that so? 😆

How do you know? 😕 Woh pic dekh ke?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ..Sneha..

Ahh.. Tumhe samajhna mushkil hai! 😆

Currently no? 😆 Any why is that so? 😆

How do you know? 😕 Woh pic dekh ke?


and his lips
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: zebbie0504


Write an OS where Arjun and Sameer Rathod have to go undercover for a case,and,too,dressed like a Tapori.
Also,do show the shocked and surprised expressions of the other team members.


There you go 🤢 Hail i-pod!

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Aisha and Saakshi stared at Chotu awkwardly. Aisha pointed him to turn around, Chotu did. Both Saakshi and Aisha shook their head, disappointed.

Neeh, he was too hulk-like for a tapori.


"Kya yaar!" Chotu slumped into a chair, pulling off the scarf, frustrated. Shree put an arm around Chotu, and said, "Meri bheem. Chod. Tapori log bhi insaan hote hai, hulk nehi." Chotu glared at him, pulling his hair out of the hairband.

Shree straightened up immediately and put up his hand in a submissive way and said, "Ek tang to already tuta hai, ab dusra bhi torega kya?"


"Not a bad idea." Liza grinned, walking into the conference room; Shree shot a dragger at her. She put a cup of steaming hot cutting chai on the table, getting a questioned look from Saakshi.

Noticing her look, Liza said, smirking, "Chai wale ne de gaya, I have nothing to do with it."


"Vaise yeh dono hai kaha?" Aisha asked, looking at the door. "Itna important case hai aur yeh dono gayab." She finished, everyone nodded.


As if they were waiting for a dramatic entry, as soon as the team had busied themselves with something, their chief and his second in command had made quite an entrance.


Aisha just had a sip from the water Saakshi had handed her and she spitted out. Unusual behavior drew attention of the others and they looked at the sight which made Miss stern yet sweet cop Aisha to behave so unlady like.


There they were... ETF chief, dressed in an orange fishnet vest and a floral printed shirt; knotted right above his new shiny purple belt. And his second in command, dressed in a red tight vest that says "I'm hot, forget me not" and similar floral printed shirt. He had a shiny orange polka dot belt on, to hold his loose yellow pant on its place.


The aviators were gone and replaced with some roadside sparkly sunglasses. Gun holders were replaced with metal jewelry and both of them had colorful scarf tied around their neck.


ACP Sameer Rathod and ACP Arjun Raute stood infront them, glaring at their team; dressed like.. Genuine taporis. Well, they looked genuine.


"Haila." Chotu was finally able to speak, still staring at them with mouth open wide. "Kya main jo dekh rahi hu who tum sab bhi dekh rahi ho?" Saakshi uttered.

Aisha pinched her and Saakshi yelped, terrified looking at Aisha's baffled face and then at the glaring faces of Arjun and Sameer.


Shree, too shocked to react, dripped Liza's finger into the cutting chai when she forwarded her hand for him to pinch. With a yelp, Liza came back to reality and snatched the glass out of Aisha's hand in impulse and splashed the water on Shree's face.


Horrified, shocked, wide-eyed; the team gaped at their bosses from head to toe.


Sameer was too embarrassed and Arjun, he was annoyed. Nautanki ki dukan, sabki sab, he rolled his eyes. Snapping his fingers, he growled, "Ap logo ka entertainment ho chukka toh ab chale?"


Khadoos. The team looked at each other, sighing. Something never changes.
Sameer and Arjun left in a Taxi and others followed them in SUV. Liza had insisted on coming too as she didn't want to miss the show.


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"subah subah khali peeli dimaag ka dahi nahi karne ka! wo bahen hogi teri, apun ki to saali hai...samjha kya? ki lagaaun kaan ke neeche?" Sameer, the tapori #1 said.


"behen k naam se hi mereko bachpan se allergy thi, isiliye toh apunki mai-baap ki akkhi aulad hu. Aur vaise bhi, sari larkiya log tereko bhai bulate hai. Rathod bhai! Haha." Arjun, The tapori #2, laughed at Sameers face.


"lagta hai tere kaan ke neeche ek bajane se bhi kuch hoga nahi. Theher ja tu abhi pappu bhai ko phone lagata main." tapori Sameer tried to scare but Arjun just smirked.


"yeh dono acting kar rahe hai ya sachmuch k shuru ho gaye?" Saakshi managed to speak between her uncontrollable laughter. "Who cares?" Liza said, giving a high-five to Aisha.


They had been following Sameer-Arjun from the SUV parked on the other side of the road. Their commotion was supposed to attract the suspected drug dealers who would lead them straight to the den.


Sameer 's remark came out from the sound system and the team roared into laughter again.


Sameer: [Pointing at Ayush, another officer disguised as a tapori] aye Jaggya, tapkane ka nahi re ise. Bas pair todh ke side me daal dene ka.. haath me bhi kuch nahi karne ka. Apun logo ki chawl ki sab ladki log ko bol Raute ko raakhi bandhne ka, kya??


Arjun : bol le beta bol le. teri kismat achchi hain aaj apun tarikh pe ja raha hain. [Straightening his scarf] abey court wali tarikh nahi date pe ja rela hai.
warna aaj hi tera game baja dalta murgichor.


Suppressing a laugh behind an angry faade, Sameer looked at his face. He didn't see the face of ACP Akdu Kharoos Raute but the face of his playful romeo best friend. Both remembering their old days, had a faint smile on their lips.


you know I miss ya in my life
and I kinda think I realise
that I was only lookin' out for me
instead of gettin' you the help that you need


Sameer: Saale..tune mereko murgichor bola? Chindi chor kahika!


Saying so, he lunged himself on Arjun according to the plan. And brilliant plan like the brilliant officers, one of the suspects did barged in and lead them straight to the den. Happiness sheered through them, seeing their plan working; both had almost high-fived each other like old times but stopped half-way.


Sighing, both drew their guns out from their hidden place and charged the drug dealers with Aisha, Chotu and other commandos; friendship long forgotten.


who do you think you are?
who do I think I am?
barely listening to my oldest
my oldest friend
Edited by despicable_me - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
OMG...
Tahi...
Thank you sooo very much for writing on my concept...
It was truly superb and amazing.
While reading this,i was really imagining Arjunwa and Rathodwa in that getup and role...
Gosh...
I was totally lost in the story...
Thank u so much...
Dialogues were damn Dhasu and Dhinchak,in Chotu's language.
Loved it...
Love u...
*mmwah*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Challenge #1 by Payaliya (Teen teen challenge diya mereko😡)

"Arjun and Shree brothers and how Shree handles Arjun after Roshni's death"


Okay..so I have no clue if I had written how you wanted but when I'd imagined the situation, I could only come up with this Sorry!

It's mainly from Shree's point of view. So yeah, padho!

and hail i-pod, for you have helped me penning it down between the meetings and right under the nose of my fat boss! 🤪

and happy mothers day 😆

-Tahi 😎

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"Li
fe has to end,' she said. 'Love doesn't."


"Kaka, bhai ne phirse khana nehi khaya?"


"Nehi Shree baba." Kaka replied, giving a sad look at Shree. Shree sighed and took the plate. Kaka took his laptop bag as he made his way to his elder brother's room.


'Bhai?" Shree called out, knocking on the door. Getting no response like always, he turned the doorknob and entered into the dark room. Switching on the lights, he found his brother crawled on a corner of the room with a picture frame in his hand which had a picture of her.


Roshni Bhabhi.


Or his bhabhimaa as he'd like to call her.


Maa, yes, that's what she was.


The day shree was born, his mother died, leaving him with his elder brother and father. Father, he'd snare; got married within 3 months, hoping his newly wedded would take care of the newborn and Arjun. But he was wrong.


An ecstatic 6 years old took on the role of a mother and father all together. With the help of kaka, Arjun raised his baby brother alone and they moved away, far away from their father and his wife when Arjun was 19.
And they were happy in their own little world.


Then came Roshni.. like a flick, she fitted in right away, filling up the gap they had. Shree was on cloud nine the day she had officially came to this house.. as his bhabi and maa.


The mother he had yearned for but never voiced out loud as it'd sadden his brother. Little did he know, his brother could see right through him but couldn't do anything about it. Sometimes life mocks you right on your face and you stay still, not knowing what to do.


Arjun could see the gleam on Shree's face when Roshni came into this house permanently. Finally giving his baby brother what he earned for, he felt at peace and bliss.


But destiny was cruel. So cruel.


And she was snatched away..just like that! Leaving Shree motherless once again.


And Arjun? He had become lifeless.


Shree sat down on the floor, balancing the plate; next to Arjun who refused to acknowledge his presence. His eyes were locked on her face; and shree felt a lump on his throat.


Shree could see her roaming around the house, laughing n teasing him..sometimes chasing him when he had pulled a prank on her or Arjun. Her giggle when they had plotted something against Arjun and that winning smile when Arjun did fall prey to their plan.


That loving pat on the back or the cold to be careful, Shree missed it all.
No one is ever prepared to lose their dear ones and when it happens, you find so much you wished you'd said or done when they were here with you, just as Shree was today.


Maybe if they had listened to her not to pursue the sikander case, she'd be still here, talking to him, leasing him with Liza and pulling Arjun's leg.


He would give anything for a couple of moments with her again... to see her smile... to hear her voice... to hug her and know once again the feeling of a mother's love.


There will always be a part of you that misses her. You'll see something that reminds you of her and want to tell her about it, only to realize she's not there anymore. Then you'll feel her loss all over again.


It is easy to feel the hurt and the pain when the wound of a lost loved one is fresh. But as time starts to heal all wounds, the healing process begins and you forget the pain that was just here..but never the person.

If something touches the scar that was left behind, it is easy for that wound to be reopened again.


And he didn't want Arjun to do it to himself again and again. But he was helpless too.

He lost a caring friend and mother but Arjun, he had lost his love, life-partner and soulmate.


But Shree knew, Roshni would never like Arjun in this state. She must be hurting wherever she was and scolding Shree for not taking care of him.


But what he could do? He had tried everything in past few days. Arjun hardly responded, didn't eat, and didn't sleep just wishing to die. But he was bound by her promise and couldn't take him life like he wanted to.
Shree had tried talking to him, being funny, talk about work or get him to work but nothing made Arjun respond.


"Bhai, khana khalo" finally finding his voice back, Shree rather pleaded. No response.


Leaving the plate on the ground, Shree looked at her picture and said, "Remember how you raised me? Kaise maine aapke ungli pakar k chalna sikha.. jab bhi girr jaata ttha, aap jhattse utha lete tthe. Phir jab chot lagne ki darr se maine cycle nehi chalana chaha toh apne kaise mera samjhe ya samjhau kiya tha?" Shree chuckled amidst the tears that threatened to fall.


"Jab maa-papa ki kami mehsoos hui, you were there bhai. And you gave me my mother back. Roshni bhabi sirf mere bhabhi hi nehi, meri maa bhi tthi. Aur aaj phirse main anath ho gayi."


Sensing no response from Arjun, Shree stood up and walked towards the door and stopped. "Aap humesha se mere dad tthe and now I need my dad more than ever. I need you bhai, your baccha needs you." Shree croaked, and then left.


Arjun stared at his retreating back as the tears he'd summed up inside him had made their way out; Arjun wiped them away. Roshni would never forgive him seeing her favorite baccha dealing with all this alone.. and neither would he.


He needed to revive, for his baby brother needed him.


And for he needed to bring justice to her.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

OMG...
Tahi...
Thank you sooo very much for writing on my concept...
It was truly superb and amazing.
While reading this,i was really imagining Arjunwa and Rathodwa in that getup and role...
Gosh...
I was totally lost in the story...
Thank u so much...
Dialogues were damn Dhasu and Dhinchak,in Chotu's language.
Loved it...
Love u...
*mmwah*


Oh stop it you 😳 Itna bhi khaas nehi tha 😆
And I should thank you 😃 Thanks love 😳 mwaah 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Payal...
Yaar...
Tumhare concept aur Tahi ki writing style ne mujhe rula diya.
It was very emotional...
Aisi Bhabimaa aur Bhai sab chote bhai ya behen ko mile.
*crying*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: despicable_me



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Oh stop it you😳Itna bhi khaas nehi tha😆</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">And I should thank you😃Thanks love😳mwaah😉</font>



it was really very khaas,Tahi.
I mean it seriously.
The way you portrayed it,was damn dhasu and dhinchak.
Apun ne bola hai,toh tereko manne ka hai,samjhe ya samjhhau?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
@Anika di awesum chalenge
treat to read my both bros as tapooris
@tahi di apko me kya kahu !!?
ekdum mast
omg team nautanki
🤣
Bhaiya ko bhaiya ni kahu to kya kahu !!?
last scene was best..
hi5
thank u di
nyc lines..!!

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