OS: Tumne Jo Thama Mera Haath(last part-pg4)NOTE pg5

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: BDCTG

Aare...aare... Kavs darling, gid gayi...!!

Kahi chot-wot to nehi laagi??

Emm...nehi, bathroom me bandh nehi thi... Parr shower ke niche adha ghanta taak zarur khadi thi!!

Hee...hee...lol!

iska matlab bathroom writer ka khitab bilkul sahi hai tumhare liye...

lol

mithai ...pichale baar nahi baat saki thi na

Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago

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Sabia Khan

@BDCTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

iska matlab bathroom writer ka khitab bilkul sahi hai tumhare liye...

lol

mithai ...pichale baar nahi baat saki thi na

yummmyy...!!
Waah...waah... Mehnat se kamayi hui khetab ke sath sath tumhari mithai bhi bohot swadisht hai Kavs darling!!
Aab, baat baad me, pehle mujhe khane do...

Edited by BDCTG - 12 years ago

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

OMG...

Take a bow from me...

My God...

This was the best OS i have read so far...

Wow...

It was so beautiful and pure.

The way u expressed emotions of Arjun was so beautiful and amazing...

So,Arjun was telling the story to Priya and Jannat...

Nothing can get better than this...

Sach mein,Truth is stranger than Fiction...

I loved it...

Ending was really very beautiful...

Loved it...

Will miss the story...

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Sabia Khan

@BDCTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: zebbie0504
OMG...

Take a bow from me...

My God...

This was the best OS i have read so far...

Wow...

It was so beautiful and pure.

The way u expressed emotions of Arjun was so beautiful and amazing...

So,Arjun was telling the story to Priya and Jannat...

Nothing can get better than this...

Sach mein,Truth is stranger than Fiction...

I loved it...

Ending was really very beautiful...

Loved it...

Will miss the story...

Aare yaar zebbie darling... Aise maat bolo yaar...!
You r putting me in embarresment!
All the cradit goes to the readers like you darling...
Mai to kuch bhi nehi hu!

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DesiiiDivaaa

@DesiiiDivaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome...liked the twist😊

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

that was such a lovely ending :) loved it

felt so bad seeing arjun like that

arjun was waiting for her

and even she was looking at him the whole day and was crying

omg that girl was riya :)

so arjun wasn't sitting in front of roshni's house

awww riya is his wife :)

last scene was so cute

thanks for the pm

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

WOah!!!! Kya ending thi yaar!!! DHAMAAKEDAAR!!!

AWESOME!!! LOVED it!

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Unres my coment on pg5
superb wrk dear..!

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Sabia Khan

@BDCTG

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Unres
jor ka jhatka joro se lga..!
awesum storyline
lov it
yup litle bit upset
bt its ok..
jannat kamal...
arjun bro amazing!
ariya rocks
arni ( for me dey r like my idol couple )
lovely sabi
grt wrk..!!