*ArIyA TwO ShOt*A Walk To Remember.!Last part pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
page 5 done

where's the update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
M sooo happy to read ur alll comments my deariez...
M sooo sorry to update late...its still on process...
Examz sir pr hain but Ariya ka bukhar utar hi nhi rha...m so sorry...
Wil give u update sooon
Edited by Pisces_Gurl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
lovely!!!!👏
yipee Arjun and Riya frnds!!!!
Loved the beach scenes a lot...it was damn cute!!!!!
haath milke chalna wow romantic...
office scenes pe toh mar jaawa!!!
hmm they both aware of each other feelings!!!!!
waiting for the next update...!!!
ab jaaldi jaaldi update karo na plz!!!
aur ariya ka bhuka kabhi utar ne mat dena haha😆
just kidding:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Hey All..So sorry for the late update...
But I am back now...
So here the next and last update...
Hope soo You'll love it too like the first one..

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The team were looking at the couple with their eyes n mouth open wide..they look at their faces n their eyes moved down to their entwined hands..Arjun n Riya sensed it..Riya quickly withdrew her hand frm his n goes to their friends mumbling a sweet Good Morning to all of them..Aruun also moved to his usual seat greeting them Good Morning..Both sat on their chair but sensed that the team is still standing...
"Ap sab bhi bath skty ho"Said Riya "Tum sab bhi baith sekty ho"Said Arjun...But both said at the same time..Thats broe the team's stream of thoughts n Ariya share an eyelock..Sameer unusual to himself came towards Arjun n grabbed the seat near to him..Liza was also present at the conference room..Riya was sitting in the middle,with Shree Liza at her right side n Ayesha n Chotu on her left side..well both Arjun n Riya know what coming next...

Arjun-Riya Interrogation...(Separately Ofcourse.😆)

Arjun(to Sam still looking down at the file)"Jaldi pooch jo puchna hai warna tere pait main dard hoga."..sam smirked at this...😆

Riya can sense her friends playful smirk on thier face a naugh glance at her...She looked up at her n abt to question but Ayesha said
"Riya ksa guzra weekend...??..before Riya answered Shree questioned her..
"Humary sath movie dekhny to chali nahi.Bore hi guzra hoga na...!"
"Nahi bht maza aya kal"Riya blurted out and next moment she regret it...

Sam"Weekend ksa guzra.??.Kahin gya tha bahir?"
Arjun"Hmm acha guzra..Han gya tha bahir"..
Sam(sounding curios but some had an idea)Achaa...!!Kahan?"

Chotu"Hmmm but maza aya kal..kiun???Kis k sath gai thi???"
Liza"And kahan gai thi."...
Riyaa hesitantly told them"Walk pe gayi thi..On the beach."

Arjun"Walk pe gya tha..On the beach."
Sam"Kis k sath!!?"

Shree,Chotu,Liz,Ayesha"Hmm walk pe..per kis k sath??

Arjun"Riya k sath"The moment he said he recieved an I-knew-it look frm him n a naughty smirk playing on his lips

Riya"Arjun Sir k sath"...The moment she said ahe recieved a long..."Ooo acha.."by them

Sam"So Do you proposed her..?"He was very eager to hear that good newz but to his bad luck

Arjun(amused by his eagerness)"Nope..not yet..But soon I'll"

Ayesha,Liza,Chotu,Shree together"Did he proposed u?...All were waiting for the good newz but to their disappointment.

Riya"Nope.He didn't..But I guess soon He will"..She smiled.

Arjun was quite amused...Well he knew very well the same time of questions will b asked by the other four to her...So he decided to get the full stop to it so he said out loud..
"Hmari interrogation kerny se better hai k hum case k bary main discuss keren.Right."
All sat up straight facing him..
Shree asked innocently "Sir per abhi tk koi case to(He didn't complete juat then Rathore's fone rand..wel definitely indicating a case..he attends the call n then hun up after hearin n turned to team)..agaya..caseagaya.."..Shree completed n gulped..Everyone tried to control their laughter...and they got busy in case.
Next 2-3 days passed with hectic n tired cases..Arjun N Riya didn't get tym to spend with each other...Once a day,they were all busy finding any clue abt the case...Just the 'chai wala' entered to the conference room with Arjun's usual cutting chai...Well how much they got busy in cases Riya never forget to order his cutting chai...An idea came up in her mind...when the boy was going out Arjun called him frm behind n whispered sumthing in his ears...The boy smioed n gives a thumps up to him'hojayga-saab'...The team looked the duo confused..But Arjun ignored n got busy again...
A little later...Someone knock at her cabin...Riya was busy finding some clues in computer...she said come in to the person..Just then the boy entered with a cutting chai for her..Riya looked at her shocked thinking that she didn't order.She never oredered in office..But she remember who could done that...As if answering her unspoken question..."Arjun sahab ne kaha tha k ap ko cutting chai de doon."she smiled n took the sip..n asked further"Aur kuch bhi kaha unhon ne"
"Han unhon ne kaha k ksi ko bina kuch btaye chupke se leker aoun ap k liye chai"the boy Answered happily..n continued"Aur main chupke se leaya"
.Riya just smiled at the little boy n he went..She picked up her phone texted him"Thankx for the chaye Arjun ir..I guess i really needed it than coffee"

"I know that..Btw You Welcome...:)"..Riya was suprised by his answer n smiled..Later that evening they gone for the field work..Finally they were able to catch the criminal..In process of catching him Riya ran too fast that she sprained her ankle..The others were quick to grab the criminal n he was arrested.
Rya was sitting at the frnt seat of the SUV with the door opened.Shree was kneeld down to her checking her foot but she was sadamant like a kid scolding him not to twist it badly to which Shree was eally annoyed..
"Yaar to ek bar check to kerny de mujhy..Promise kuch nahi hoga.."
"Nhi Shree I know bht dard hoga..bus to relief spray laga dety theek hojyga.."
"Oh God..!!Tujhy sach main etf officer kis ne banaya hia..bachon ki tarah zidd ker rhi hai.."
"Shree tu..!
!"Before she can complete her sentence she heard her voice.."Sahi keh rha hia Shre..tum bachon ki tarah zidd ke rhi ho"Saying that he came near them n motioned Shree o go he will handle her..Shree just gives him a thumps up n went..
Arjun turnedto Riya who handling her hurt foot in hand n observing it.He removed her hold pn it n touched her foot..The moment he touched her she felt shiver in he body n butterflies in her stomach..Shee so hated the fact he has such an effect on her..Arjun sensed her uncomfortablity but didn't leave her..He was about to twist her ankle when he screamed
"No pleasee.!!"He looked up et her innocent face n smiled..This maked Riya angry..
"Aap ko mujhy ese takleef main dekh k hasi arhi hia kia?"Sh said angrily..Arjun just nodded n shook his head in disblief.The girl who swallowed the bacteria without thinking somethink else than the safety of nation..The girl who almost died bcoz of it is just sitting ryte infont of him fearing bcoz of the pain in foot..He again smiled and leaned closer to her ear..The closeness create havoc inside her.She soo wanted to hug him ryte their but she controlled when she heared hm whispering sumthing
"Riya..!!Mere sath walk pe nahi jana kia?
"
She was just lost in him nodded in agreement n the next moment he heared her scream n he winked at her..She was looking at her shocked n in disbelief..Actually when Arjun came nearer to her he was still holding her sprained ankle and after the nod frm he twisted it n she screamed..She then moved her foot riht to left n the pain was gone..She said thanx to him..And then all headed to the office...

Next Day.


As there was no case given to them bcoz of the the tiring n tought case yesterday they were just tasked to cmplete all the paper work to submit it to Rathore...The work was finished at 5..Arjun n Riya was heading to beach for a walk...Riya was lost in her own world didn't realize that Arjun moved the car more ahead than the parkin..She came out of her la la lan when car hit the brakes..Arjun go out of the car n mved to her side.He held her hand in his started to walk ahead to the beach.It was all lonely..Nobody was there..Silence was spread everywhere..The peaple look really.At that tym only Arjun n Riya was at that sde of the beach..It was a weekday so not much cowd was present their So Riya thought why he bring her here in soo silence n lonely place..Not handling more of her curiousity She asked Arjun who was silently observing her confused expressions n exactly knew what question was coming next to him...
"Sir hum itna aagy kiun agaye..I mean wahan itna crowd to nahi tha to phir.?
"Hmm mujhy thori shanti chaiye thi.Wahan crowd zyada nahi tha but shor to utna he tha..n besides this..Tum to yahan per bhi mere sath ho..Esa ho to nahi skta k jahan tum ho wahan shanti ho..Aab thora mere bary main khayal kero na ..Mere kaan(ears) k bary mian khayal kero..kahin is k
pardy phat na jayen.."He said with a wink teasing her..He got off her hand while saying that..It took sme minutes for Riya what he said to her...Her eyes widened in shock to understand that he is actually calling her a chatterbox who cannot keep quiet..And the next moment she saw that he is runing away form her laughing like a maniac..And she started chasing him cursing him...
"Arjun Sirr...!!Main ap ko chorungi nahi...Ap ese kese keh skty hin mere bary main"She scremed loudly while running after him."
"Choro gi tab na jab mujhy pakrogi Miss Chatterbox urf Miss
Statictics.."He said laughingly runnig at the corner of the water...The were running like small kids splashing water on each other tym to tym..Who can say that that a boy n snd s girl are one of the best ETF officer playing running her n there like small kidss...
Riya had enough of running.She was breathing heavily for running like this so she just leaned down to her kneels sat there catchin her breath n called ou to hm.
"Ok..Sir..I Give up.
"She said amidst her heavy breath..he came to her n said jokingly.
"
Kia Riya..?Itnhy se thak gayi tum Huh..!!"He held out his hand to have hers so she can stand up properly n they can have walk..But She has different plans...She hold his hands..When he was about to pick her up she pulled him down to fall..But sumthing unexpected happened..Arjun fel down on top of Riya..This all happens soo sudden that he didn't ealize whats happeng..The reality strike to boh of them when their lips brushed each other accidently after Arjun falling on top of Riya..They were surprised..Riya felt chill ran down her spine n she shivered..She wanted to feel her ryte their.Aarjun's state was no different..After years he was actually feeling the feminine touch on his body..He was speechless that tym.He just urged to kiss her soo inviting pink lips..And he do listened his heart..He cupped her face with on hand n other hand went to her back holding her rightly..Riya clenched his collar for support..She felt so weak under his touch..She tilted her head a little upward giving him access..Seeing the response from her He placed his lips on hers.They were loving the effect of their first kiss ever..He rubbed his lips on her smoothly not wanting to rush..After few secs she started responding back to him..They shared gentle kiss which was soon turned to wild n passionate..None wanted to break the moment but they released each other to catch the breath..And in a spur of momen Arjun rolled her.n now Riya was on top him rested her head on his chest listening his heartbeat where her name was already taken..Thaye both closed the eyes relishing the moment just passed right now.They were lying on then wet sand not wanted to move anywhere ryte now.After sometime Arjun broke the silence n said
"I LOVE YOU RIYA..!!Alottt"
..He said placing a kiss on her forehead..She amiled..She was on cloud nine..After soo long wait ..seems ages to her..She finally heard those three magica words..She was so happy..But try to tease him
"I know..Just tell me something new"She said sarcastically..Hmmm so she wants to hear something new..Well lets go ahead if You want to tease me..He thought...
"Riya is ka jawab yeh nahi hai.
."He said acting to b serious.."I want to hear the same for you."
"Not so soon dear."She said geting up from her hold n n sat opposite to him..He also sat up straight to face her..
"Acha theek hai..If you are not interested then its okie..You know I m Arjun Suryakant Raute..Bahot si mil jayengi mujhy..You remembered that Latika Rai..The famous singer..Wo to shuru se hi mujhpe try ker rhi thi.Iguess is tym to call her up then.."He said hat purposefully bcoz the last thing she would imagine for him to b with someone else..He clearly saw the terrible angry n tensed face of her durin that case wen that girl came closer to him,,N That actuallt did the trick...
The next moment he found himself under her.She was on top of him grabbing his collar looking straight in his eyes.
"Khabardar jo mere ilawa ksi aur k bary mian socha bhi to..."And with that she crashed her lips on his wanting to prove that tey both love each other only..After the initial shocl Arjun responded back wth eual passion..They broke the kiss and Riya looked upto him n said cupping his face..
"I Love You Arjun..Very much..More than anything else.Main ap k bina nahi reh skti..Please don't ever leave me.."She said with teary eyes..Arjun was overwhelmed by such love depicting in her eyes..He wiped her tears n kissed her forehead..
"I will never leave you Riya..How can I..?You are the reason to live for me..I love you too.."..
And they smiled genuinely..Their eyes showering love n care for eac other...The two become one..At the view of sunset..An the next day will be the beginning to their new life...This was the best day in thier life this walk on the beach..

A Walk To Remember..!!😊

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Wow...I finished it at last...

Now I want long long comments alsooo plzzz

Thanx for liking it...

Pms will b sent out later..😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww... So cute!! The beach witnessed their union.. The kiss was so sweet!! Just PERFECT!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
no words

interogation scene was awesome

shree ki toh dono hi band bajaate hain 😆

kiss scene was passionate
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Beautiful...
Interrogation scene was awesome.
Beach wala Love was damn sweet and romantic.
Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
that was such an amazing ending :) loved it
love how everyone was so shocked 😆
loved arjun's dialogue "jaldi pooch jo puchna hai warna tere pait main dard hoga" 😆
the interrogation scene was just too good :)
awww arjun ordered cutting chai for riya
poor riya sprained her ankle
riya is really a kid 😆
love the way arjun twisted her ankle and loves riya's condiiton on that time :)
he took her to the beach again
and love how they were chasing each other
Miss Chatterbox urf Miss Statistics 😆
arjun fell on top of riya
their kiss was so romantic ❤️
last part was so cute
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Amazing OS very well written,
Nice , try to write more on Ariya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Awww this was so cute and beautiful <3
loved it!!!

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