#@U R MY LUV JAAN#@(ARNI) ch1 PG2 11/5

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<font face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="4" color="#0000ff">###PROLOGUE###</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Damm God I just hate this word " love" :P . I can't understand why people fall in love; why they got attracted to some one; I think love is just a time pass n no one is serious about u.


Still I don't believe in love why I feel jealous when I saw couples hand in hand., hugging each other. Whatever why should I care ???


but jab bhi mein usse sakshi ke sath dekhti hoon to why I feel jealous :( . je baat mein nhi feel krti je baat mera stupid friend kehta hai sam.

is I'm in love. Ghosh how's that possible no no no agar usse maloom pargeya toh kya sochega vo mere bare mein ??? I'm totally confused now.


okk my sweet friend diary baki baate baad mein karpgi now I have to get some my beauty sleep lolzz bye "GOOD NIGHT" "SWEET DREAM" with me.
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<font color="#0000ff" face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="3">with this she keep her diary in her bag n get to bed for sleep. hoping for better tommorow.

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<font size="2" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#ff0000">okk guys this is my latest work hope u all like it.

character sketch will also be update tommorow u guys can guess although u guys are all gud in guesses on whom this story will be still upto that I'm also going to bed to get my Beauty sleep 😆 n dreams about my handsome dude; my would be hubby 😳
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573339 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the concept is interesting...
whose the girl who is writing the diary??
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Concept fascinating
Tht girl is Riya I am sure
Riya 's frnd Sam
Lovely update dr
Can't w8
Pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pls update jaldi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start,
I hope she will Riya,
continue soon,
I am not waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HERE U ALL GO WITH THE

CHARACTER SKETCH:
***ROSHNI KAPOOR: Bff of arjun n sameer, an art teacher in an orphanage

***ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE: ETF sec-in-com; Cool dude, brave, bold; in luv with...???😆

***ACP SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD: ETF Chief, bff of arjun n Roshni; single lollzzz😆

***Encounter Specialist Ankita Kapoor: Roshni's sister, no nonsence person, single 😆

***TECH. SHREEKANT SEN: same as show; bff of chotu n roshni; hate love relation with liza

***COMMANDO CHANDRAKANT PATIL: same as show; bff of shree n roshni; in love with aliya
***FOR. EXP. LIZA D'CRUZ: bff of roshni n aliya; hate love relation with shree
***RESEARCH SPE. ALIYA
KHAN:<3 chotu; bff of rosh n li

hope u all like it update part 1 by tommorow :😊

plz dear leave ur feedback




Edited by ...amanvirdi... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyy it's an arni SS :) so happy
amazing CS :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue very soon
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hey hey peeps 😆

me back but plz maaf kardo sakshi bhi hain esme. I know I forget to add her in CS sorry for that. ok come chapter 1.

@@@@CHAPTER 1 @@@@

In conference room:
arjun was sipping his cutting chai, sameer was observing him by the corner of his eyes. Choree were bzee with their partners means Shree n lappy 😆 , Chotu n food 😆 . sakshi n Ayesha were also sipping their coffee but their eyes were focused on duo: Sarjun.
Ayesha n sakshi feel it awkward why their chief has his eye on arjun not on his love Ayesha.
Sa: Ayesha, yeh Sameer arjun ko esse kuun dekh raha hai??? 😕
Ayesha: aab mujhe kya pta. 😡
Sakshi:: ik baat pucho Ayesha? ?
Ayesha: haan
Sakshi: yeh sameer ne tumhe kiss kiya hain kabhi??
Ayesha: no (shying) kyun kya huya??
Sakshi: o meri maa yeh sharmana chor kehi yeh na ho tu yaha apni suhaagraat ka program bana rehi ho or waha...
Ayesha: woh kya???
Sakshi: (hitting her head with her hand) o ho tujhe police officer kisne bana diya dimmaag toh tere pass door door tak nhi hain.
Ayesha: (loudly) shut up sakshi kya bakwaas kar rehi hoon, agar dimaag nhi hota toh tumhe abhi tak bardhast nhi kar rehi hoti
arjun chocked on his cutting chai n start coughing badly. watching his condition sam start patting his back. all other were observing this.
Ayesha feel that their is really something b/w them means DOSTANA.
Ayesha: (loudly) No!!!!!!!
everyone turn their gaze to her from arjun. Everyone was surprised what happen to her.
She ran out of the room with tears dripping from her eyes.
all were confused what happen to her but no one know. So as Saks was their with her they shift their gaze to her n she nod her head in no that she don't know the reason n also flash her 1000 volt smile. Arjun signal sam to go behind her n then what sam follow his order n now sakshi become more sure really simething is fishy.


Precap: no

yr tum sabhi etne intelligent ho idea lagao
😃 😆

I know isme arni ka koi scene nhi tha sorry for that. (
Kan pakarti hoon maaf kardo plz.

Abb llz comnt n like ka kasht bhi kardena:
**mujh par ik ehsaan kar mujh par sabhi ehsaan karna**
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice update :) loved it
chotu and shree are really always busy with their partners 😆
aisha thinks there is something going on between sam and arjun 😆
dostaana 😆
awww poor aisha was crying
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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