||FF : The Reckoning || Ch 3 - Pg 14 Discontinued

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Awesome!

loved it...Arjun, a vampire...WOW!

Vampires were never so handsome and desirable!😉

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Awesome start... Arjun as Vampire... cool!! continue soon

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Priyanka

@A_Derry_Girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Vampire Arjun☺️

Awesome start, contd soon :D

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Drum roll starts !

I love it completely ...and yes Pavani i like the name very much !!Perfect choice 😃

A guilt ridden vampire is more Seksy and he joining ETF ahann !! Ayesha is there .and chotu too

Where is my beloved Shree and Sameer ??

U can write horror stuff i know ...😉

Lovely , wonderful ,different and as unique as you !!

my love for vampires will be increased now ..first Damon and Arjun ..

Sincere Regards

Partner

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Ahh di
dat was very interesting
pavani d name stole my heart
u rock it til nw di
n i knw u rock it..
grt stuff
very diff
n all d best
ps. i imagine u first den
rosh lol
love u di
tc
hugs..!!

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

YAY!!!! What a start dii!!! awesome..!!! PM kardoge please?? pretty please with a cherry on top?😛

Eessh.. Ye Maya to first line se hi dayan lagti hai! Ha well, next lines confirm it!!😆

Arjun Bhai... POSSESSED?! FR***ING H**L!! Boy.. Apne aap pe kabo rakho!! 😡

Gosh.. This MAYA is the TYPICAL Seductress vamp na.. Cant keep her hands Off the hotie!!😉

150?! That's... old!!😕

Pavani.. Hmm! Nyc name and the description is mashallah! 👏

Now now.. chestnut brown eyes.. Sounds familiar?!😃😉

Chotu-prey? As in Food...! Well... I can say that Jo bhi Vampire Chotu ka khoon piyega... osse Kafi saari alag alag cuisines ke taste aayenge!!!😆

Black Haired Aisha?! A Vampire too!! Wow!!😊

Love the name Aiyaana!!❤️

Edited by Arjunkibehen - 12 years ago

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Prerna

@daydreamer...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

nice update...

good suspense...

and i love this vampire arjun...

continue soon...😊

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Hey Tahi, my louuve..

That was absolutely brilliantly sketched..
Oh oh! Maya is the daayan, huh?! 😉 Nah.. she's way too evil for me to imagine DD in her shoes.. 😆

Btw, I had a sheepish grin on my face.. P(avani).. 😉😆 Lol, jokes apart, love the name.. It reeks of innocence and love.. 😃😳

Tch tch.. Arjun Ji.. He killed her.. 😲 She probably loved him and he did too.. But zaalim duniya and 'ek thi daayan' ki kripa... 😕

Wow, a guilt ridden and revenge-seeking Hotwa vampire is definitely hawt stuff! 😉😳

Moving on to the other lady, Aiyana.. Lovely name yet again.. 😃 Wish mine was well thought of as well.. Pah!

Okay, so she probably works for the ETF and has some connection with Hotwa.. [Janam-janmantar wala connection??!] 😉😆 Only time and you shall reveal..

Thanks so much.. And you really must update this one pretty soon..

P.S.: Hum bhi aapse, I love you dammit! ❤️ 😉

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..
Just came across it..
Arjun as vampire... he's awesome in any avatar
*drooling*
Arjun as ACP..
Great start..
Loved it..

that he is. 😉 Thanks! 😃

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...
Awesome chapter Tahi...

Loved it...

Arjun killed someone... Pavani... and then Pavani turns out to be Aiyana...

Right???

And thank you for keeping a new name,... I m free.. So i m gonna Imagine myself...
How sweet of me nah??

I know!!!

Waiting for Arjun to meet Aiyana!!