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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
I'm sure she is riya she lost her voice because of that bactria
very best friendship of trio
luvv it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
amazing start..i loved the concept dear...
the girl is riya kya???
update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
I am 100% sure that the girl is Riya...
OMG...
The girl lost her her voice.
So sad... ;(
loved the update...
Thanks for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Nice update dear.Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Aww so nice.I also think that the girl is riya 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
great update...
loved chotu and shree's concern and care for her... they were so happy to see her ...
omg the girl lost her voice :( whose she??
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3

After 2 days,

"okay, so u think that the drugs could be bought from ship under pretext of cosmetic goods" sameer said. He , arjun and aisha were discussing a case of drug trafficking where it was suspected that prominent owner's ship is being used to ship drugs and maybe weapons. Aisha : information is this only. But I have asked shree to double confirm it and chotu to speak to his informers. Arjun looked towards the glass screen. Aisha saw both arjun and sameer lost in thought. She understood what they were thinking. From morning they noticed shree and chotu acting really fidgety. They kept glancing at the watch,then at the time and then at each other. Sometimes chotu used to ask shree and shree used to shrug his shoulders. At his office shree tried to concentrate on the task assigned to him by aisha but he could'nt help but glance at the clock now then. Chotu had been gone for half an hour. Chotu : shree. He turned to see chotu smiling happily. Chotu moved to the side. Shree saw her standing behind chotu and smiling nervously. Shree went towards her and hugged her tightly. She also hugged back. Shree : ready?. She shook her head no. shree and chotu chuckled. They went towardsthe conference room. Aisha,arjun and sameer were still discussing the case.they three were checking the copies of the file which contained the information. Someone knocked. Assuming it was shree or chotu sameer shouted : come in. someone entered. Arjun got a whiff of the perfume which bought back the memories of the girl who tried to understand him but could'nt. Arjun shook his head clearing his head of her memories and said " have u got any information?". When no reply was heard he turned around. Seeing her standing behind him he got up shocked. Arjun whispered " Riya." Sameer's and aisha's head shot up after hearing what he said. Sameer saw riya standing in his office smiling at them with tears rolling down her face. Shree and chotu were standing behind her happy to catch their seniors surprised. Arjun again said "riya" as if he was in shock. Riya walked slowly towards arjun . she stopped in front of him and took his hand. Without breaking the eyelock she put his hand on her face and pressed her face into his hand to convince him that she was alive. Aisha seeing this snapped out of her shock and saw a smile come on arjun's face. His eyes filled up and he hugged her. if this was'nt an emotional reunion then chotu,shree,aisha and sameer's face would definitely dropped to the floor seeing arjun hugged riya. But they understood that even this fake stone-hearted person would show some emotion in such a situation. Feeling a hand on his shoulder arjun broke the hug to see that the hand belonged to sameer. At that moment they were not arjun rawte and sameer rathore ETF officers and colleagues but sameer and arjun who had just rejoiced the return of a comrade of theirs riya. Sameer hugged riya and riya broke down. Sameer eyes also filled up but he broke the hug and said to riya wiping her tears " on a happy occasion we should not waste our tears. It is useless." Riya smiled and wiped her tears. Aisha : where were u all this time riya? Everyone looked towards her. aisha suddenly became conscious knowing that she had just intruded on riya's private moment. But riya smiled. She looked towards shree and shree nodded saying " ya she is aisha." Aisha looked at shree and chotu confused. Chotu : what we had to tell her everything that happened after she…. He stopped. Riya then took out a notepad. And was going to write something when arjun said "wait riya, why are u writing? What happened?" riya looked at shree and chotu. Chotu took a deep breath and explained everything. How riya had developed an immunity towards the bacteria so the doctor's proclaimed her death in order to use her as an experiment.during such an experiment she lost her voice. She somehow managed to escape from that place and found that she was in lonavala. She was found by a person who took her to the rehabilitation centre. Anjana found her there and informed chotu. And they found her. riya using hand signals told shree and chotu that she will not be joining the ETF. They tried to convince but she still would'nt listen. So in the end they had to agree on the condition that she would come to meet them at the office. Arjun and sameer were all this time silent only. Aisha, shree,riya and chotu looked at them and became confused about what they were thinking. Arjun then looked at sameer and sameer nodded his head. Arjun : u are not leaving the ETF riya. Riya became shocked. She shook her head and signaled that how can she help when she is disabled. Sameer : people become disabled when they consider themselves disabled. We know that u think that u will not be able to help but u are still staying. End of the discussion. Arjun and sameer then walked out of the office. After they left shree and chotu were almost going to break into a victory dance but seeing riya's angry face they stopped. Shree : oh come on riya. Did u really think that akdoos will let u go" trying to appease her with the name she had given to their seniors. Riya signaled that she did'nt want to become a burden on them. Aisha put her hand on riya's shoulder. Riya looked at her with her eyes filled up. Aisha : u will never be a burden upon us. So what if u lost your voice. We are there. We will become your voice. Chotu and shree walked up to them and took riya's hand in theirs and said " riya we promised each other that we will be friend's for life. And friend's will come to help in all situations whether good or bad so why should we back out from the biggest problem. No we are not going to back out and we are not going to also. Don't worry riya we will find a solution to this problem. Riya then smiled and told that they were mad. Shree : obviously we are mad otherwise why would we be with a paagal like u. riya hit shree playfully. Chotu : arre, shree we are even in bigger problem now. Now we have got to hear the praises of both akdu and khadoos. Aisha : meaning?. And their nok-jhoks continued. From far away sameer and arjun looked at their laughing and sweet fights. Arjun : don't worry sameer, we will take care of riya. Sameer : I know u will. Arjun looked at sameer surprised. He saw a glimpse of his buddy sam. Sameer and arjun then went to their office before alone but now with a hope their friendship can be renewed.

i know that now riya is gone and sakshi has taken her place but among the os's i read i never saw an os which showed how shree and chotu would have found riya. so i did this os. hope u liked it. this is the end so please comment or hit the like button.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Very very very very Beautifully written.
I just loved it.
Shree and Chotu,are seriously,the best examples of best friends,from my and this OS's POV.
Absoloutely perfect.
Great ending.
Will miss this story.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
super duper update...
omg finally everyone knows that riya is alive...
loved shreetu's friendship with riya...
awww arjun hugged her... how sweet... and they are not letting her leave etf cool...
aisha shree chotu riya convo was lovely... they gonna support riya...and sam arjun scenes at the end were amazing...
awww story ended??? gonna miss it...
plz continue if you can ...
the story was awsum... loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
I loved the update :) very beutifully written. That is definantly what true freindship means... Standing by eachother through bad and good. Being each others support. I really liked the updates.

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