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okay technically i know i should update my ff raaz but this idea of an os was roaming around my mind for a long time. i will put the number of parts depending on the response. so here goes my first os.
YAARIYA

Shree and chotu stopped in front of a house and got out of their car. Shree said to chotu " chotu do u know why anjana called us so urgently?".chotu: shree, I really don't know why anjana called us here. She just told that there is something urgent that she needs to tell. They both looked worriedly at each other. By that time they reached the entrance of the house and rang the doorbell. It was opened by anjana. Anjana was chotu's 11:30wali whom chotu fell in love at first sight. After making several attempts he finally was able to introduce himself to her only to find out that she already knew everything about him. Anjana is a speech therapist at a hospital. As time progressed their relationship became stronger inspite of anjana having to move to lonavala to help out at a rehabilitation centre. But imagine chotu's surprise when anjana called in the early morning sounding agitated and demanding that he and shree come immediately to lonavala. Seeing chotu anjana immediately hugged him and broke down. Chotu started comforting her while shree looked on perplexed. After her tears stopped chotu took her to the living room while shree went to get some coffee for all of them. Chotu kneeled in front of anjana and asked " what happened anju? Why are u so upset?. Something happened or what ?" before anjana could say anything shree came in bringing 3 cups of coffee. Seeing them like that shree was embarrassed and chotu left anjana's hands. Trying to lighten the atmosphere shree said " what happened bhabhi? Why are u being so tensed. Bhabhi remember one thing. Never fear when chotu is here. He will break all the people's bones who trouble u. ya although it is different thing that he is really scared of insects but that is okay? Na bhabhi?". Hearing this chotu was going to bash shree but seeing anjana's laughter he calmed down. Then anjana told that she wants them to meet someone. They went to the rehabilitation centre for mute people. Everyone knew anjana over there and was waving and smiling at her while anjana also waved and smiled back. Finally they reached the terrace of that building. Standing on the terrace was a young girl who seemed lost in thought or just looking at the scenery. Anjana called out her name. hearing her name chotu and shree was shocked and when the girl turned her face to them and saw them she fainted.

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bebovirdi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey
nice update
continue soon
who's that girl? ?
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who is the girl? why she fainted? i loved sree saying chotu is scared of insects
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superb start...
shree chotu anjana scenes were lovely...
omg whose the girl?? and why she fainted???
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting prologue. pls update soon.

chotu ki 11.30 wali ka naam acha hain, anjaana
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Nyc 1 , continue soon..
Thx 4 Pm. 😊
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nice start...
continue soon😊
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Nice os. Please continue soon :)
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nice yar. Continue soon. Why i feel that girl is riya?
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okay guys her goes the second part. hope u enjoy it. and please comment and silent readers please hit the like button.
part 2

Seeing her faint they snapped out of their shock. Chotu carried her to the couch and laid her down. Shree went to get blanket while anjana went to get water and the doctor.chotu could simply stare at her face and noticed that her face seemed to have lost her charm. There were traces of tears on her face which showed that she had cried lots of times. By that time shree came back and could see chotu staring at her face. Shree's eyes filled with tears but he wiped it and put the blanket on her. Anjana came back with the doctor and a glass of water. The doctor sprinkled some water on her face and she opened her eyes. Seeing shree and chotu's worried face she smiled weakly. The doctor checked her and told that she was just fine but her bp was low so she should not take stress. When the doctor went away shree hugged her and chotu hugged both of them. Shree: aa, chotu leave,leave, I am stuck between the two of u and I am dying. Chotuchuckled and broke the hug. she slapped shree lightly. Chotu hugged her and broke down. Seeing his tears she also started crying. Shree beat his forehead and said " what yaar?. U all already started crying. Bhabhi be careful maybe at your wedding time he will cry at your bidaai even more than you. Everyone laughed. Anjana was really amazed seeing the friendship they had with each other. Chotu : u got saved today shree because of her. or I would'nt have left you. Shree : who is telling u to leave me now. Chotu'a hand went to remove his rubber band. Shree : okay, okay big guy I am just joking. Chill, u don't have to remove the rubber band. Smilingly chotu put his hand down. Looking at the girl, shree said " why are u so quiet. U are not even saying anything. Are u not happy to see us." The girl shook her head indicating a no. she looked helplessly at anjana. Anjana then took her a deep breathe and said " guys, she won't be able to speak." Chotu : why can't she speak?. Has something happened to her voice." Chotu and shree got scared thinking the same thing that what they were thinking does not come true. But anjana said confirming their worst fears " she has lost her voice."

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