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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Lovely...poignant to the core!

Beautiful OS

and the title i could think was...isi ka naam zindagi!

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

superb work dr.

too much emotional.

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

superb one Simar

loved d concept

it ws beautifully written

but y one part ...write more

title k liye i was thinking ...n 1 line of a song came to my mind ..."Jee le Zara" ...

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Oh My GOD!!! IT was AWESOME!!! One of the BEST sories i've read!! Plzz continue it!

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

It was great..
Heart touching..
Arjun's feelings were beautifully potrayed..
Loved it..<3

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Sia

@satanslove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Amazing and wonderful..but i really dont need to say it ...😉

I know that watever u write wil be beautiful😃

P.S- Continue it

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago

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Sumbul Qaiser

@sumbulqaiser

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

i am totally speechless,
i have no words to say,
Very very well written,
The express of Arjun pain is nicely portrait ,
Hats off to you .
I really very nice.
I made me cry and haapy ending.
Keep Writing more on Ariya

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome

beginning till end true portrayal of emotions and human feelings

excellent OS

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Hey ...

That was wonderful :)

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

very well written...!!!

for u👏

The emotions were very well penned down by U...

totally in love with it...

👏👏👏

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