ss moving on in life is not so easy 16 apr updte

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Posted: 12 years ago
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moving on in life is not so easy



i am posting a new ss,with character sketch and first chapter. hope you enjoy it. please comment /hit the like button.


character sketch

sameer rathore' apne dad ka eklauta beta . loves music and wanna be a singer.no interest in studies, but have potential to be a topper.girls drool over him but not interested in any of them.charming, rich,has good looks but not spoiled. Value his friends and family the most. He lives in Mumbai , but his family is in jaisalmer.his best friend is aisha aka his rockstar.

Ayesha 'esha' kapoor'delhi girl , with a I care a damn attitude. Have a big bro, who is perfect in every way. Her parents are always so busy with their son that they ignore her. That's why her attitute is like that.she don't allow anyone to her life, as she thinks dear ones starts to control our life. Her dad and sameer's dad are chuddy- buddy. She has only one friend, sameer aka sam.

Roshni Sharma'maharastrian traditional girl. Love her family and want to do something for society.very simpla, sweet and wins hearts wherever she goes.

Arjun S. rawte-- flirtish. He has only one goal, jahan bhi jao, dost banao.make friends quickly and is always there for them. Want to do everything in life , from scuba diving to bike trip. Don't know what will he do in life. He meet roshni, and his life changed completely.

Chapter one

''How dare you to touch my car????'' As soon as she came out of the car she heard her brother's angry voice. Actually angry was a bit of understatement.he would be more happy if he kills her.

And there was reason. That sports car is worth of millions, its his father's gift and, on top of that, there was big spots of dust on it. He was angry as hell.

''its still ok, bhai.'' She made a tone with that bhai, and it annoyed him further.they both walked up to the main door, where their father was busy sitting on a couch with a file in his hand and their mother, saw them coming, and sighed.

''mom, see what she has done.'' Her brother complained like a 5 year old.

''esha, why you always irritate your brother? Apologise now.'' She ordered.

''whatever'' she gritted, rolling her eyes ,and sprinted towards her room.

She banged the door , and throw the keys away. Its always the same. Like he is the star of their eyes and I am nothing. This thought irritates her and she throw her sunglass on the bed.

And then the landline rang. She angrily press the button of loudspeaker, and shouted'' who the f'.''

''hey , rockstar.'' A cheerful voice shouted back . and instantly, she was happy.

Her only friend in this planet, sameer d. rathore.

''hey, whats up??''

''party'' he said in a happy tone.

''why?''

''hey, results are out. Now we can have fun freely. What about you? Not in a good mood, are you?'' his tone was worried.

''same old.leave it yaar. So which college?''she tried to distract herself.

''the coolest college in mumbai, royal college.'' His hapy tone was back.

''but the cut off mark'.'' Even before she was finished, he answered her.

''I know, I know. 95% nahi to no admission. But rockstar, why you always keep forgetting that our dads are rich, and there are management quota. Dad will pay them a good amount and I will be there.''

Of course.she sighed.

''I so wish you are here.it would be so much fun.'' He said, in a sad voice.

Bang. A fantastic idea came in her mind, and she smiled a crooked smile.'' That can be arranged.''

''are you visiting here?? Come, I will show all the places. We will do so much fun.'' He stopped abruptly and said in a hurried tone '' hey esha, my friends are here. I will call you back, ok?? Bye.''

''bye . have fun.'' She said, and he disconnected the call.

At lunch, she decided to execute her plan.but not before hearing all the plans for her future in which her point of view doesn't matter.

''I was thinking, we should send her abroad. What say? '' her mother suggested.

''excellent idea.'' Her brother exclaimed, wishing to send her right now.

''actually, I think, esha should do her graduations from here,delhi. we will send her to abroad for further studies.'' Her father said.

''but mrs. Khurana is sending her son'..''

And here it goes again.ayesha stopped listening. After a few moments, she said '' how about Mumbai , guys?''

Everyone looked at her like she has gone insane. Her father said in disbelief '' Mumbai? Are you serious?''

''sam's dad is sending him to royal college.i heard it's the best.'' She said in a small tone.

And it worked. Her parents looked determined,her brother eyed her suspiciously. she muttered '' bulls eye.''

And after 2 days, she was ready to leave for Mumbai.but surprise surprise, it is a road trip. After 1000s complains and lectures about how unsafe and suicidal it was. But she made up her mind, there was no stopping her. None could.

She started the engine, and said to herself in the mirror

''mumbai, here I come.''



ok , guys it was chapter one. pls comment/hit the like button. and there is no riya in this ss. sorry. try to enjoy it, and please comment. jute, chappal aur compliments, sab mujhe qubool haišŸ˜†.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
nice CS..
Great start..
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
awesome start :) loved it
so sam and aisha are best friends :)
and omg arjun is a flirt
love sam and aisha's friendship
looking forward to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start...
cs is lovely...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@devil thankuuu will continue soon

@arianaa thankuuu

@fatima, hmm surprise abhi suru huya hain mere dost.

@payal u think its different??? thankuuu.

@arooj thankuuu

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys, phir se aap logon ka dimag khane ke liye i am here, or mujhe comments ke saath saath jutey, chappal aur tamatar bhi qubool hai !!šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


ok, here is nxt chapter. pls comment/ hit the like button.



It takes two days to reach Mumbai via road trip.on the 2nd day of her journey, esha found a girl wanting lift.she stopped the car.

''hey, please, can you give me a lift to Mumbai? Please please help me.'' The girl nearly prayed.

''whoa, its ok, you don't have to beg so much.come on in.'' esha offered.

The girl was about to get inside, but stopped, ''what if you are a thug?'

' ''what????'' was esha's instant reaction.

''aaj kal iss raste par bohot saare loot maari ke news mil rahi hain. What if you are one of them?'' asked the girl.

Esha was amused rather than irritated. She said ''babes, just look at me.my car is worth millions.my things are all branded and imported.and certainly a thug don't a have a newest ipad which came out only 2 days earlier?'' .the girl was convinced and looked at her sheepishly.

''now stop this all and get inside.'' She offered, and the girl was more than relieved.

Esha started the car, and so did the chatterbox.

''I am really sorry.actually, main pagal ho gayi thi. Pehle bus gayi, then mujhe itni bhukh lagi hain ki dimaag kaam karna band kr diya.'' She said. Esha handed her over a lays packet.without any hesitation, she took it and started to ate it. She said''thank you.i really needed something.''

''by the way, tum kahan se drive kar rahi ho?'' asked that girl.

''from delhi.'' She answered, and didn't unnoticed the girl's wide eyed reaction.

''wow, but that was really dangerous, is nt it? I mean highways are not safe for girls at late night.'' She said in a low voice, but she heard esha's chuckle and again her eyes went wide.

''I have a hockey stick, a chain, a pepper spray, some food in the back, and moreover, this car can run really fast.i think now I am safe.'' She paused and asked, '' by the way, tum kahan se aa rahi ho?''

That girl jumped to narrate her story. '' don't ask, I went to a nature club camp.it was so boaring, and when we were coming back, the bus broke down.i had to walk for hours and there was no car to take lift, but some men who were looking weirdly at me.''concluded she. Then again she jumped, ''silly me, I didn't say my name. hi, roshni Sharma.'' She offered her hand for a handshake.

''ayesha, ayesha kapoor.'' Esha shook her hand.

''waise mumbai mein kahan ja rahi ho?'' she asked

''maine iss saal royal college mein admission liya hain…'' she didn't even complete when again this girl jumped.

''what????? Royal????? Are you serious????? Wow, that will be so cool. My first friend, even before reaching in college,not bad, rosh.'' She praised herself.

''friend? Seriously?' esha thought in her mind silently. ''so you are also going there?'' she asked, knowing the answer already.

''yes.so cool na? we will hang out at college, bunk class and will go to movies, what say?'' she asked.

''abhi se future ki planning.'' Again esha thought in her mind. She smirked a little.

The trip went quick.this girl really had energy. She can talk for eternity. She told esha about her maa-papa, her little bro, her other relatives.may be she had told it all.

They reached nearly at midnight. After reaching Mumbai, roshni showed her the way.esha dropped her at home.

''thank you sooo much. '' shouted roshni . esha came out of the car, stretching herself after a long trip.roshni's parents also came out of their house hearing the car's sound.

''beta….'' Sprinted her mother at her, and scolded her about not contacting them.she told them all.

''and maa, inhone meri madad ki.'' She introduced esha to her family. they all thanked her for bringing her home.she was the star of their eyes.

''actually, uncle, aunty, roshni, I should leave, raat bohot ho rahi hain. But could show me which way is this address??'' she showed them an address on her ipad.

''beta, yeh yahan se 30mins ki duri par hai, par beta, kal chale jana.aaj raat yahin par ruk jao.'' Offered rosh's father.

Everyone agreed with her, and rosh was more than happy. After saying no for a many times, she had to gave in. she cursed herself for not trusting the GPS system in her car and showing them the address.she really don't like to bother others.

She slept with roshni In her room. And the night passed too soon.

Next morning, her eyes opened by some noises rather than by the sound of a alarmclock.

She came out, and saw that nearly half the locality came to check out her car.some genius were akso lecturing others about the speed, the engine. Some clicked photos. The car was worthy of checking, it was a black bugatti veyron.








A boy of 16 ran to esha.he asked her ''aap di ke friend ho, hain na?''

Not knowing what to say, she stood silently.the boy didn't even wanted answers. He said,'' mujhe apne car keys do na, main chalaunga.''

Esha was shocked.this baby will drive that thing!!!! She was scared of what could happen to him.

''what's your age?'' she asked

''agle mahine 16 ka ho jaunga.'' He said proudly.

''jab 18 ke ho jaoge, tab chala lena.'' She said.

''di, that's not fair.'' She stopped.there much something in that tone. There was apnapan, and manmaani too.

''to agle mahine, under parental supervision.'' She said, and the boy hugged her. And then kissed her in cheeks.

''thank you di.you are the best.'' And ran inside the house, leaving a shocked Ayesha behind.

still alive?????😲😲 šŸ˜†


now galti karli hain to saja bhi bhukto. comment / hit the like button.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
nice update :) loved it
loved aisha and roshni's conversation
So roshni goes to the same college as aisha
aisha and roshni are so adorable :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice story loved it plz pm me the next time u update thanks

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