NEW SS: FORGIVE ME??? updated chapter-1 page-4 :) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aliya_begh


"riya aur sakshi ek he ff me"

Ya I was thinking the same Ustad g... Had the same reaction when I read the Character sketch :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz dear update soon and pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice title, cs, n prologue...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello!!!!
interesting...very interesting...!!!
Loved it...!!
The character sketch looks diff and prolouge is good...!!!!
Waiting for the next update...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome CS and prologue :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue soon
btw welcome to arjun forum

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aliya_begh


"riya aur sakshi ek he ff me"



had the same reaction😆🤣
what's gonna happen now?😕
happy that writers mentioned it's ariya😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow interesting start...
cs prologue is awsum... and the poem is lovely...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aliya_begh


"riya aur sakshi ek he ff me"


Main to yahi soch rahi hoon k dono chatter-boxes milengi to bechaara Arjun to paagal hi ho jayega!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Chapter-1

Hola Arjunians ;) hope ur all doing well :) sorry for the delay was relly busy wid work :) and here is the next part hope u'll enjoy :) and oopzy sorry batana tho bhul hi gaye

ek new entry

In ETF office :

Shree : kya yaar chotu abhi tak liza nahi aai

Sakshi: : uhun uhun lagta he kisi ko yaad kiya jara hein kyun specky sen liza ko miss kar rahe ho.. ju ju ju abhi tak ni ai ;)😆

Chotu : jab sath hote ho to chuhe billi ki tarah ladte he.. and ab jab wo nahi aai to uske liye tadap raha hein

Shree : Chotu tu to chup kar and Sakshi stop calling me specky , only liza can call me specky sen

the trio says: ahaaa!!!!

Aisha: Sakshi aab hamara shree hamara nahi raha 🤓

Chotu: haa aishaa wo ab hamara shreekanth sen nahi balki liza ki specky sen hai..🤪

shree : *blushing* kya yaar tum log bhi.. ab meri khichai karna band karo and usko patane ka idea do..

(liza enters)

Liza :hey guysss.. good morning and specky sen kisko patane ki idea chahiye? mujhe btao do minute me set karwa dungi akhir hum kab kaam ayenge..

shree: (in low voice) tumhare rehte hue or kisi ki kya jarurat he..

Liza : Kuch kaha tumne???

all others are grinning at him..

meanwhile aisha gets a call

(aisha: ok sure. i ll take care of it and ends the call)

sakshi asks whose call is it.. aisha is about tell but..

Comm. helloo team. good morning ..

everybody wishes him.

aisha: aap kyu yeha aaya sir.. u shuld have called me and i could have come to office na sir..

Comm: its ok aisha waise bhi usko introduce bhi karwana hai na.. hope u got the news..

Aisha: yes sir, just now i got a call about it.

Comm : okk aisha den i ll take leave from here. hope u take care of everything.

(comm leaves frm there)

Aisha : guys aaj se humari team mei ek new member aane wala hai.

Sakshi : wow new member maja ayega..

Aisha : Sakshi wo senior he humse.. and guys mene suna he bahut jyada strict he..unke samne galti karna matlab aapni job se hath chudana jesa hein.. acche acchon ki band baja di unhone..

Saakshi : hoga Aisha par Sakshi Anand k samne uski nahi chalegi ane do uss Khadus boss ko dekhlenge *winks*😉

Shree: wese naam kya hein unka..

Aisha : uska naam hai...

(there comes the voice from behind)

Shaleen..Shaleen Malhotra naam he mera..

everyone turns around to look the devilishly handsome cop eva...


In UK...

riya is on her way to airport..

Riya : hey bhagwan please meri help karna...😭

But suddenly the taxi stops with a screech...

Riya : what happened y u stopped the taxi.

Driver: sorry mam i think there is a problm with the engine.(driver gets down to check whtzz d problm )

Meanwhile riya become restless , she does'nt wana miss her flight. she gets out of the car and try to find the alternate.. but it was highway and no one was intrested to give lift to poor girl ( huh how can prople be so cruel itni sunder ladki highway me khadi he or koi madad bhi nahi kar raha ~_* )

finally an idea stuck her mind

Riya's POV : chal riya aab tujhe aapna jalwa dikhana hi padega nahi tho teri India jane ka to hello hi bye bye ho jana hein..😎

Precap : FIGHT FIGHT "Dishum Dishum"

Thats it for now :) w'll post the next part very soon
and ya chappals and tomatar are accepted 😆😆

With Lots of Love
Anamika $ Maya

Edited by crazyforarjun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice dear ... Aww Shreeman Shree g tou Sharma rahe the... And Sakhshi is so bubbly thank you for the update :)

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