Dil Chahta hai kya??? Part 4, 5 and 6 updated!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dis is a story written by ma frnd Chulbuli Annu exclusively for ACFA on ma request... Shez removed da current image o ETF members n gvn em a new image... shez included ACFA member's name as characters in da story... Am posting it here for u guys to read. Read n njoy n lemme no ur comments...

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Rathore ek girl k sath hotel me enter krta hai'..

Rathore : ye arjun bhi naa'.pta nhi kya kya krta rehta hai'.. pehle kisi se bulwaya k uska accident ho gya hai jb yahaan pahucha to manager se kehalwaya hai k wo mera ander intzarr kr rha hai'. Mere chakker me tum aur fas gyi'.

Hotel staff Person : this way sir..

Rathore : hmm'. (dono uske bataye raste pr jaate hai')

Staff Person : bs sir Arjun sir ander hi aapka wait kr rhe hai'(ye keh kr starff person chala jaata hai..)

Rathore : Yahaan ??????? pta nhi ye ladka kya krta rehta hai??? Usko pta hai k wo meri jaan hai iss baat ka fyda uthata hai..

Girl : mujhe lgta hai mujhe chalna chahiye'.agar usne hume sath dekh lia to???? Use bura lagega?????

Rathore : tumhi ne kaha tha k achanak se batane ka mazaa hi kuch aur hoga'syad wo achank syad aaj hai'.. chalo dekhte hai'ye arjun kr kya rha hai mere sath''..

(iss se pehle girl kuch keh paye rathore uska hath pakd kr ander le jaata hai'hall me kafi andera hai'.iss se pehle kuch samjh pate lights on hoti hai'.Rathore ka pura gang ek sath hai'.everyone shout)

Happy B'day To U'Happy B'day To U'.Happy B'day to Dear Sam'Happy B'day to u'..

(Sabse pehle arjun aakar rathore k gale lgta hai aur use b'day wish krta hai'then riya'.uske baad sare friends one by one rathore ko wish krte hai'.but koi bhi rathore k sath aayi girl ko hi hello tak nhi krta..sabhi usse ignore marte hai ya fir marne ki koshish krte hai'.)

Girl whisper in rathore ear

Girl : maine kaha tha naa'aaj sahi whqt nhi hai'fir kabhi'.

Rathore : mahol tumhe dekh kr garm to ho gya hai'aur iss se accha mauka nhi milega thanda karne ka..

Arjun to rathore and girl : tum dono apas me hi khusar phusar krte rahoge'ya fir btaoge k kya ho rha hai'

Riya to girl : tum????? Sam k sath'.????? Tum to college k baad achanak gyab hi ho gyi thi??? Aaj sam k sath uske b'day wale din'.

Rathore : guys'scholar(jo girl rathore k sath hai uski taraf ishara krte huye) tum logo ko kuch batana chahti hai'.(rathore ki gang se ek girl bolti hai')

[My Note : Scholar uss girl ka pet name hai jo college me sabne use dia tha]

Ritika : Pr hum iski baat kyun sune'.hum me se koi iski shakal bhi nhi dekhna chahta..tum iski baat sun ne ko keh rhe ho sam

Rathore : aaj mera b'day hai'.wo jo keh rhi hai sun lo'uske baad hi cake cut karunga main

Ashwini : that's not fair sam'

Arjun(with smile) : agar sam keh rha hai to sun lo'.(arjun ko smile krte dekh'rathore aur scholar dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai')

Riya : ab ek dusre ko dekhna band karo dono'aao aur btao aisa kya batana hai'.(sare friends baith jaate hai'..group ek round me baith ta hai'.scholar aur rathore sath sath'.)

Barnali : ab to sab baith gye hai to shuru karo'ya mahurat nikalne k liye pandit ko bulaye ;)

(sare hasne lgte hai'rathore aur scholar ko chod kr')

Alekhya : to dono me se kaun batana start krega'.

(sabke dimag me yahi hai k syad sam aur scholar committed hai aur wo yahi batana chahte hai')

Scholar to rathore : kahaan se shuru karu?????

Rathore : main hi karta hu shuru '''(scholar haan me sar hilati hai..)

Rathore : guys'jaisa tum log sochte ho waise kuch nhi hai'.

Naina : tumhe kaise pta k hum kya soch rhe hai'aur aisa ya waisa jaisa bhi hai hume bhi to pta chale

Rathore : bolne dogi tab bolunga naa'. Mann nhi bharta naa tumhara meri khichai kiye bina'ab agar agya ho to main bolu'.(naina smiles krke haan me sar hilati hai')

Scholar : aise bta kr koi fyda nhi hai'.Arjun aur riya ki Basket ball matches se start krte hai

Riya : ek min hamare basket ball matches se matlab????

Shree : ek baar use bol lene do'swal pr swal kiye jaa rhe ho..(sab shree ki baat se agree krte hai..)

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Flashback start..Location basket ball court'.

(arjun aur rathore dono basket ball khel rhe hai..tabhi riya apni team k sath wahaan aati hai..)

Riya : tum dono k pass koi aur kam nhi hai kya????? Jb dekho basket ball court busy krke rakhte ho..kabhi padh bhi lia karo

Arjun : hamri padhai ki jab hume tension nhi hai to tum kyun leti ho

Riya : mujhe tumhari padhai ki nhi'.iss basketball court ki zarurat hai'meri puri girls team hai basketball ki'.aur college me tum dono k alwa me kisi ladke ko basket ball me interest nhi hai..to pls court khali kr do

Arjun : pr hum dono to hai naa'.

Riya : sirf tum dono k liye hum log practice naa kre..not possible

Arjun : waise bhi basketball ladkiyo ka khel nhi hai'

Rathore : not again'''..tum dono fir se ladna mat shuru kr dena'.agar tum logo ko ladna hai to main jaa rha hu'.(rathore wahan se chala jata hai')

Riya : ab akele to tum basketball khelne se rhe'to pls tum bhi jao'.(Arjun bina kuch kahe wahaan se chala jaata hai')

Flashback ends

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Riya : ye sab sabko pta hai'.ye sab batane se matlab?????????

Rathore : ab wo suno jo nhi pta'..

Scholar : kabhi tumne socha hai'achanak se arjun aur SDR (correction krte huye) Sam k aane k baad tumhari basket ball team me girls ki kami khatam ho gyi'.pehle jahaan tum girls ko manati rehti k team join kr lo..wrna college faculty girls team ko support krna band kr degi'

Riya surprisingly and shockingly : Oh my god'.matlab sam aur arjun k liye girls team me aayi thi'

Scholar : haan bahut badi wajah yahi thi' sabko pta tha' k arjun aur sam ko basketball ka kitna shauk'aur dono hi girls ko koi bhav nhi dete the'to girls k liye basketball court me hone ka koi na koi bahana to chahiye tha'..kyun Naina??????? (Naina achanak se puche gye question se ghabra jaati hai'.)

Naina : mujhse kya puch rhi ho???? mujhe kya pta ?????? oh hello aisa kuch nhi hai'.

Scholar : I know ab aisa kuch nhi hai'.pr pehle to tha na'.(pura group shocked ho jata hai'ye sun kr')

Naina : ok fine'.admitted'Mujhe Arjun psnd tha'mera matlab hai aaj bhi psnd hai pr ab waise nhi'.. arjun ko riya psnd thi'.aur unhi do logo ko sath hona chahiye jo ek dusre se pyar krte hai

Naina to Scholar : thanx'. Main kitni bhi naraz hu tumse..pr tumhari ye baat kabhi nhi bhul skti

Riya to Naina : I am sorry'mujhe kabhi aisa lga nhi'.(riya naina k gale lagti hai')

Everyone : aweee'..

Scholar : abhi kafi surprises baki hai..

Shree : aur sari sham bhi '. Waise naina ki pol to tumne khol di'ab ye btao' SDR se matlab????????

(Scholar rathore ko dekhti hai'.)

Arjun : SDR matlab'Sameer Damsingh Rathore''..right ??????????

Everyone : what???????

Rathore : kya what????? Mera naam hai ye''.. tum logo ne kabhi jan ne ki koshish nhi ki'.

Chotu : fir scholar ko kaise pta?????? Aur wo tumhe iss naam se kyun bulati hai

Scholar : guys..iske bare me hum baad me baat krenge'pehle jo bol rhi hu wo sun lete hai'.




PART 2

Shree wishper in chotu ear

Shree : nice move..kaise badal dia baat ko'.solid Sam aur iske bich kuch chal rha hai

Chotu : pta nhi re'College me to lgta tha k sari ladkiya arjun k piche pagal hai'.ye scholar bhi' aur ye naina..iska to kabhi lga hi nhi tha'.aur ye arjun ki itni badi diwani nikali' kuch bhi ho skta hai'.

Shree to scholar : aage bolo hum to aaj sun ne ko baithe hai'.

Scholar : riya tumhe bhi to arjun shuru se hi psnd tha'haan ye baat aur hai k iss baat ko realized krne me tumne kafi whqt le lia'

Riya : aisa kuch nhi hai'..jaisa tum keh rahi ho?????

Scholar : ab tum log kyun mujhe aisi baatein batane pr majbur kr rhe ho'jise tum log khud ek dusre se chupana chahte ho'''

Everyone shocked : matlab????

Scholar : matlab ye ' k tum log jitney dikhte ho na uthne bhi acche ho nhi'..aur shree'tum jo chotu k kaan me keh rhe the naa..maine suna'..mere pass tumhare liye bhi bahut kuch hai'.

Rima : matlab shree ki bhi koi story hai''..chakker kya hai sabki story hai'.aur hum se dost hai hume apas me pta naa ho kar tumhe sab kuch kaise pta hai'.

Rathore : Movies me hamesha hota hai..k dono sides dikhate hai'. Aur use dekh kr lgta hai k apni apni jagah hero aur heroine dono sahi hai'pr hero heroine ko nhi pta hota..aisa hi kuch hota hai'.

Scholar : anyways'mujhe to arjun aur riya k bare me sabko batana hai naa'to wahi batati hu''

Riya : No ways..tum sirf meri aur arjun ki poll nhi khologi'.ab to shree k bare me bhi btao'.

(sabhi scholar ko shree k bare me batane ka pressure dalte hai..)

Scholar : ritika aur shree koi arrange marriage nhi kr rhe hai'.. ye tum sabka wahem hai'. Shree ko ritika college k 1st day se hi psnd'aur ritika ka admission college me sport quota se hua tha'.to wo basketball team me thi'aur shree jise sport me interest nhi tha'..(ashwini complete the sentence )

Alekhya (surprisingly) : usne ritika ki wajah se team join ki''OMG''.. (scholar haan me sar hilati hai)

Ritika : guys aisa kuch nhi hai'. Aur tum scholar'tum aisa kaise keh skti ho'..tumne kabhi mujhe aur shree ko sath bhi nhi dekha hoga'tum aisa kaise keh skti ho'.

Scholar : haan ye sach hai..maine tumhe sath me nhi dekha'pr shree ki aankhon me tumhare liye pyar se pehle hi dikh gya tha'.

Everyone : ohhh

Scholar : aur confirm hua college chodne k baad'tum logo ko shruti yaad hai'..usi ne bataya

Ashwini : wo senior '.jiske record tumne break kiye the'.pr wo to tumse hate krti thi

Scholar : nhi aisa kuch nhi tha..'.use bs mujhse narazgi thi k maine uske record break kiye..but jab mere juniors ne mere records break kiye to wo samjh gyi k records break krne k liye hi hote hai'even maine apna training period ussi ki firm me pura kya???????

Shree : to ye sab tumhe wahan se pta chala'.tum rehne do'main khud hi batata hu'.yes scholar is right'mujhe ritika shuru se hi psnd thi'..isliye hi maine basketball team join ki thi'..aur hamari arrange marriage nhi hai'main apne parents ka iklauta child hu'.aur mere dad ek bahut bade businessman hai'.to jab maine unhe bataya aur kaise bhi krke mana lia'.but mere dad aur unka status'iske liye mere dad me apni company se ritika k father ki help ki unka business establish krne me'.aur shurti hi hamare sare business account handle krti thi'.to issi se shruti ne guess kia hoga'.

Scholar : shruti ne nhi'maine guess kia tha..aur sach bolu to ye ek andhere me teer tha'.mujhe lga hi tha..k tumhare dad achanak se aisi firm me kyun invest krenge jiska koi khas future nhi hai..fir jb firm k malik ka pta chala to mujhe confirm ho gya'. K ye sb tumhare dad nhi tum karwa rahe ho'.

Everyone : ohhh'.waah''''

Jenny : ritika ab tum bhi kuch bol lo..tumhare bare me hi baat ho rhi hai'.. tumhe apni safai me kuch nhi kehna hai kya???? Hum sab dost hai..pr hum logo k bare me ek dusre se zyada to scholar ko pta hai'

Ritika : main kya kahungi'. Mujhe bs itna pta hai k shree mujhe psnd krte hai' aur main shree pr trust krti hu'. Aur ye do baatein sari zindagi sath gujarne k liye kafi hai'.

(sare jhut muth ka khaste hai')

Ritika : stop it guys'ab tease krna band karo'*Blushing*

Alekhya : kya baat hai ritz'aaj to badi emotional aur romantic baatein kr rhi hai'.uhu uhu'

Scholar : alekhya'tumhe bhi to shree psnd hai'.ya tha???????tabi tum shree ki itni help krti thi????

Everyone : what???????

Alekhya (in anger) : tumhara naa dimag kharab hai'mujhe shree me kabhi interest nhi tha'..wo to shree Sam k sath rehta tha'.. aur sam ko impress krne k liye shree ki help krti thi'(alekhya gusse me apni pol khud hi khol deti hai..)

Everyone including rathore : what????????

Rathore : Maine kabhi tumhare bare me aisa nhi socha'.

Alekhya : pta hai mujhe'.aur zyada udo mat'.. wo college ki baat thi'. Aur tumhe mere to kya kisi k bare me aisa nhi socha'.wrna aaj kam se kam tumhari ek girl friend to hoti..aur hum tumhe tease kr skte'..

Scholar : shant ho jaa'alekhya ''sorry'but ye sach me tukka tha'main sach me confused thi'k tumhe shree psnd hai ya fir shree k bahane tum kisi aur ko impress kr rhi ho'

Shree though : iss scholar ko main nhi chodunga'itne time baad mili hai aur sabki poll kholne me lgi hai'iski poll to ka bhi pta lagana padega'abhi aur yahi'..iss se pucha to ye nhi btayegi'. Kuch aur hi krna padega'.Mujhse panga lena tumhe bahut bhari padhne wala hai scholar (shree apna laptop on krke baith jaata hai'.)

Ashwini : shree..kyun natak kr rha hai..ab to hume pta hai to tu ritika ka hath pakad kr baith skta hai'ye laptop on krke kyun baith gya ..

Shree : very funny'.main kuch important kr rha hu'wrna mere dad mujhe ghar me nhi ghusne denge..aur baatein mujhe kaano se sun ni hai'.to wo main sun rha hu''aur ritika ka hath pakadne k liye mujhe tum logo ki permission ki zarurat nhi hai'.

Everyone : ohhh

Scholar : to main arjun aur riya k bare me bol rhi thi'.(arjun aur riya ek dusre ko dekhte hai..) to main keh rhi thi..riya ko arjun aur arjun ko riya shuru se hi psnd the''aur iska thoda sa idea mujhe traditional day ki jab arrangement k liye kaha gya tab hua'..



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Aks13 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update.

whts th secret about ariya.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update...
wow ye scholar hi kon and how does she know all these secrets??
lol aate hi sbki poll khol di... 😆
aur ariya ki kis secret ki baat ho rai h??
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆😆😆

kya din aa gye hai mere

apni hi lihi story like kr rhi hu..😆😆

uff ye din bhagwan kisi ko naa dikhaye 😉

thanx ashwini for posting the story...

ab to darr lagne lga hai kahi apna hi secret naa daal du 🤣🤣

Edited by chulbuliannu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chulbuliannu

😆😆😆


kya din aa gye hai mere

apni hi lihi story like kr rhi hu..😆😆

uff ye din bhagwan kisi ko naa dikhaye 😉

thanx ashwini for posting the story...

ab to darr lagne lga hai kahi apna hi secret naa daal du 🤣🤣

Hey Annu u din like me posting ur story here??? U urself wanted to post it??? Am sry if it ws so... 😭 N adding ur secret is nt a bad idea... N thank u for adding a character in ma name... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShaleenMgal

Hey Annu u din like me posting ur story here??? U urself wanted to post it??? Am sry if it ws so... 😭 N adding ur secret is nt a bad idea... N thank u for adding a character in ma name... 😉


nhi nhi..galat le gyi tum 😆😆😆

tum hi karo post...🤣🤣 main bhi to story k maze lu...

aur mera secret...itni asani se nhi bahar aane dungi use chahe wo kitna hi nikalne ki koshish kare

aur tum hi krna post...my iss story k sirf maze lena chahti hu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Annu tumne post kyu nai ki?sharma aarahi thi kya😆
pahele siggies aur ab ff baap re mission rathod shuru hogaya🤣
i loved it..cntinue sn🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aliya_begh

Annu tumne post kyu nai ki?sharma aarahi thi kya😆
pahele siggies aur ab ff baap re mission rathod shuru hogaya🤣
i loved it..cntinue sn🤗




😆😆😆 aliya mujhe to sharm Mr. Khan se bhi naa aye...IF pr kya sharm aayegi...

Mission Rathore to already chalu hai...ab to kabhi bhi sucessful ho skta hai...🤣🤣



yahaan to ashwini hi continue kregi...main to bs maze lungi 😆😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chulbuliannu


nhi nhi..galat le gyi tum 😆😆😆

tum hi karo post...🤣🤣 main bhi to story k maze lu...

aur mera secret...itni asani se nhi bahar aane dungi use chahe wo kitna hi nikalne ki koshish kare

aur tum hi krna post...my iss story k sirf maze lena chahti hu

Thank u!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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not allowed..aur zyada thanx aur sorry bola to next bari tumhari hi hogi...poll kholne ki 🤣🤣

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