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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
excited about the chapters
yeah yipeee
again 1st
nd dat dialogue ws the best
if u cnt change the groom...
its frm chashmebuddoor
if u cnt change the gal, change the gal
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
wow dear..
Lovd da title :)
nyc CS..
Great prologue..
Looking forward for da update..
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
lovely prologue...!!!!!
wating for the next update:)
PS:title looks nice...:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Thank you guys fr ur support..


Part- 1



shree- OMG!!!!!! riya ki shadiii..
Liza- what??????
Shree- haan yaar abhi abhi aisha ka phone aaya tha..
Liza- bola tha maine usse mat bhej ghar...
Ghar kya bheja , ab biddai pe utar gayi..
Shree- shut up!! Hume kuch karna hai.. Wo ye shadi nhi karna chahati hai..
Liza- toh tod dete hain..
Shree- peheli baar tere mooh se kuch accha sunne ko mil raha hai..
Liza- kya ?? Mai sirf riya ki care karti hoon ..

Ab chal nikalte hai..


7 days later
The wedding day.

Riya was sitting infront of the mirror..
The girl who always supports her was also there...yes she ws roshni..

Roshni called sam, her best friend sam..the prince of rajasthan...

N he have a plan fr the breaking of the wedding... He also included shree also..
And shree , he can do any thing for riya... His best buddy...



Aisha n liza enters her room..

Liza- dulha kaha hai??
Roshni- kya liza , yaha autopsy karne nahi aayi ho jo body kaha hai..aisa puch rahi ho..

Aisha- haan liza..mai toh uska ..

Roshni- aa gayi na apne encounter specialist roop mai..
Problem riya ki hai..


Suddenly they heard the sound of band...baja..crackers..

Riya's sister jiya comes to her room.

Jiya- riya di, baraat aa gayi..chalo dekhte hai..
Riya- no..
Jiya- rasam hai di, ...ladki na dulhe ko chup k dekhne ka..

Riya thought mai toh uska chehera tak nahi dekhna chahati..
Chup k dekhu , usk geograpgy mai mujhe koi intrest nahi hai..


Bt jiya drags her to the balcony..


It was the time for teeka rasam..
The groom was on the ghodi, clad in matching serwani with riya..
Riya's mother comes to him for aarti...
When riya's mother told him to uncover his face n he does tht..


'' whattt??????'
ye ...
Kaun hai..

Jiya was totaly shocked...

Liza- tumhari baatein sun kar kya usne plastic surgery karli..

Roshni- whattt?? Ye yaha!!!


Riya - haaye kitna handsome hai...lagta hai kisine galat photo bhej diya tha...

Roshni- nahi !!

Aisha- tum janti ho isse..kaun hai..

Roshni- ruko!
She dialed a number...

What the hell sam...ye arjun yaha ghodi pe kya kar raha hai??

Sam- shree ka idea tha!

If u can't change the groom, then change the groom...

Roshni- toh juno ...i mean wo yaha ..mumbai mai kaise..

Kahi dulhe k badle ghodi toh exchange nahi ho gayi..

Sam- nahi...ye plan hai..




Here arjun ws on the ghodi, n giving his smile tht one can see his batteesii...

Riya's mother get unconcious...
Riya- maa.

Riya runs down..

Riya hold her mother..

Same time rathod comes there alomg with shree n chotu..

Sam- ye kaun hai?? N ye tumse shadi karne wala hai...

Chotu- ha kaun hai ye..

Arjun- jumped down n walked in srk style...

Arjun- hii...my name is arjun..naam toh suna hi hoga..
Oh ye hai meri saasu ma, mai itna b handsome nahi hoon jo ye dekhte hi behosh ...
Waise dulhan kaha hai..

Liza , aisha, n roshni comes down..

Liza- whaat? Waiter ko puch rahe ho kya?? Dulhan yahi hai..


Then comes riya's in-laws..

The groom's mom- ye kaun hai?? Mera beta nhi hai..

Arjun- kya maa...dahej lene se mana kar diya toh aap mujhe beta maan ne se b inkaar kar rahe ho..


Groom's moth- ye kya keh rahe ho??

Riya's mother was gaining conciousness...

Arjun- maa, sautela hoon toh kya hua??


Riya's mother heard this n she again fainted...


Riya- mom...


Riya's father comes in..

Father- itna bada jhut...sautela beta b hai aapka...asli beta kaha hai aapka...
N ye ghodi pe kyu chada..

Arjun- aare uncle ! Bahya bhag gaye..

The groom's father- mr. Khurana-

nahi ye mera beta nhi hai...

Arjun- mai hoon...
Mr.khurana- nahi hai..

Mr.mukharjee- bas bahaut ho gaya..ye shadi nahi hogi..

Sam ws witnessing this all..
Sam - sahi kaha ..ye ladka rii se shadi nhi kar sakti...

Sam- chalo..chalo..chalo..
Shadi cancel..


Everyone left the place ..arjun also left..


Pre-
u wll get to knw how dis happened..



Note-
in this story..all are hatke frm their character.. N arjun wll join etf later..
Still he is rathod's best frnd n roshni's also..


Pls leave ur comments if u liked..

Thank you..

Will post next part so soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Part-1 b



2 hrs later


riya, roshni, liza, shree, aisha, rathod, n chotu were in riya's room..


Sam ws sitting in the middle of the room..n also bearing everyones hot glare ..

Sam - what?? Aise kyun dekh rahe ho??

Rosh- ye tumne kyun kiya?? Humne shadi todne ki baat ki thi..n u replaced dulha..that to juno..


Riya- yes sir.. Meri mom toh do baar faint ho gayi..

Liza- waise ye juno , i mean arjun hai kaun?

Shree- haan sir. Ye kaun hai..

Chotu- maine pehele kabhi nhi dekha..

Aisha- kya usse aapne bheja tha..

Gosh ..rapir fire start ho gaya..


Sam- wo mera bf..
Liza- boy frnd..

Rosh- liza... Chup raho..
Sam batao kya hai ye sab..

Sam- rosh..jab tumhara phone aaya n shree ne wo idea diya ..
Tabhi arjun mere ghar pe aaya tha..

Flashback-

sam ws inside his home..he was very tensed..kaise b kar k riya ki shadi tod ni hai...
Warna rosh meri haddi pasli tod degi..kisi ghodi se kam nhi..

His door bell starts ringing..
Rathod- ab kiski baaraat aa gayi yaha...

He goes n opens his door..

Arjun ws standing there in front of his door.

Arjun- kamine...dulhan banne ki tayari kar raha tha..

Rathod- nahi baraat nikalne ki..

Arjun- what??
Sam- aare andar aa na..grih prabes ki tayari kar raha hai kya..

Arjun- chal..

He came inside..
Arjun- ab bol..kuch pareshan lag raha tha..
Sam- haan yaar...roshni k best friend riya ki shadi hai...
Arjun- kaun rosh... Toh ..kya hua?
Sam- prob ye hai ki ..rii shadi nhi karna chahati hai..
Arjun- kyun?
Sam- wo pata nhi..
Bt pls yaar help me..warna rosh mujhe kachumar bana degi..
Arjun- tu ab b usse darta hai..
Sam- ab bhi kya..gussa dekha hai uska..thank god riya saath hai warna..
Arjun- kyun wo toh teri rossogulla thi na..ye theekhi mirchi kab ban gayi..
Sam- haan..bt ahar riya ko kuch hua na..she cares fr her vry much..
N i too..
Meri team member hai wo..

Arjun- toh mai kya karu..
Sam looked at him as if he was his prey..
Arjun- no...no sam..

Sam- haan tu..tu hi jayega...
Waise bhi aaj tak kisine tumhari face ki geography nhi dekha toh..

Arjun- ok..thick hai..bt gadbad hui na toh tu gay...

Sam- haan..bt tu yaha mumbai mai..
Arjun- chodo ..pehele tere riya n uss mirchi ko dekhte hai..

Flash back ends-


sam- phir arjun waha uss dulhe k ghar gaya, usse sedate kiya..
Do chaar punch bhi diye hai..bt ignore kar..koi usse ab pehchan nhi payega..

Phir arjun ne uski costume change kar li n wo ghodi pe baith gaya..
Oh god wo ghodi..
Puri raste arjun vibration mode pe tha...



Rosh- oh , toh ye baat hai.. Bt wo gaya kaha..

Sam- shadi tut gayi itna kafi nhi hai kya..ab usk haat paaon tudwaoge..

Rosh- nahi ..nahi..

Riya- thank you sir..
Bacha liya aap ne..
Warna uss..
Yuukkk

uss k naam b badi ajeeb hai..
Dhrityunjay dhanuchandra khurana..

Puri family ek naam pe aa jati hai..


Shree- finally teri shadi tut gayi ..
Huh..mai kitna paresha tha pata hai..

Riya- haan shree..thank you ..n to all..aap sab k wajah se mai bach gai..

Bt ab mom n papa ko kaun samjhayega...


Sam- mai kis baat ka chief hoon..

Aisha was lost in him,
aap toh best n best ho..
Chief kabhi iss patli kamar pe bhi toh dil phislao..

Liza- aisha kya bol rahi hai? Rathod sir sun lenge na..

Rosh- ok..ok..hum uncle se baat kar lenge..

Riya - thank you...

Chotu- bt ye aapk dost kaha hai..

Sam- pata nahi...
Ohh..shit.. I hope wo ghodi iska picha chod de..
Warna vibrate hote hote silent na ho jaye..

Wo yaha aaya kyun hai..ye b puchna hai..

Ok u guys go n rest..

Rathod comes to riya n peaked her forhead..
Khayal rakhna..
N comes to her ears,
warna teri mithi rossogulla mujhe zeher de degi..

Riya smiled at him.

Aisha wondered what made her smile..
Then riya looked at rosh..who seems at peace now for god sake after a long 7 days ...

Roshni comes to her n hugged her..
Then they have a gruop hug..

And they all leave..




Pre-
arjun-sakshi entry in their friend circle..n mission samjhao maa papa..


Pls gine me ur feedback..
I really need them..
Pls be with me..

Thank u.
Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
superb update and prologue...
omg arjun as fake dulha... chalo riya ki shadi to tuti... 😆
sam arjun convo was very funny... 🤣 and aisha ke thoughts heheh
precap is interesting...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Read both the updates in one go...
Loved it...
The comedy element was too good.
Arjun bali ka bakra ban gaya...
Everything was superb and damn hilarious...
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
great update :) loved it
so sam is the prince of rajasthan
omg they changed the groom to arjun 😆
arjun using srk's dialogue
arjun is so funny 😆
sam and arjun's conversation was very funny
Dhrityunjay dhanuchandra 🤣
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
ohh it was fabulous dear...
Love everyone in new layer...
Loved it...waiting for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
I love this! Cracked me up! 😆 😆

Nicely written vampy 😉

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