SS: Mitwa... Ishq Pe Zor Nahi

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Prologue:

Agar hum kisi ko apne jaan se bhi zyada chahte hai,aur,agar hume ehsaas hota hai ki koi bari musibat aane wali hai humare mohabbat pe,toh hum jee jaan laga dete hai usski rakhsha keliye.

Par,agar uss pyaar hi agar aap pe vishwas na kare,toh,kya hoga?
Kya hoga,agar aap apne pyaar keliye jaan kurbaan karde?

Janne keliye,bane rahiye iss kahani ke saath.

Index:
Prologue: Pg1
ch 1: Pg1
ch 2: Pg3
ch 3: Pg4
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ch 1
"Arjun,aap please wahaan mat jaiye.Woh jagah bohut hi khatarnak hai.Meri baat samjhne ki koshish kijiye," explained a teary Zebbie.

"Zebbie,uss jagah pe purey team ka jana zaruri hai.Waha illegal arms ki exchange hoti hai,aur,humein woh rokhna hai.Tum baat ko samajhne ki koshish karo.Khud ek police officer hoke aisi baat kehrahi hai.Mujhe sharam aati hai tumhe apna kehte hue," Arjun,shouted at Zebbie,in anger.

Zebbie was shocked after what she heard from Arjun's mouth.She couldnt digest it.

"Stop it,Rj.Hosh mein toh ho tum?",asked Ashika,Arjun's younger sister.

"Sam,ab tumhi batao inn sabko.Main toh Zebbie ko samjhate samjhate thak chuka hu," said an irritated Arjun.

Sameer Rathod couldnt understand what he should do.He was now in a fix.
Before Sameer could speak,Zebbie started her talk.

"Kyun,Arjun? Aap itna bara risk kyun lerahe ho? Aap jante hai na,ki,agar aapko ek choti si kharoch aati hai,toh,aapka dard mujhe hota hai.," Zebbie said.

Arjun couldnt take it.He shouted at the top of his voice.
"Bas.Enough is enough..Aur,Zebbie.Tum lagti kya ho meri,huh? Maine pehle bhi kahan tha aur aaj bhi kehraha hu,DOOR RAHO MUJHSE. Mujhe tumhari yahaan hone se chir hoti hai.I just cant bear your presence.Just go away.,"an angry Arjun told to Zebbie.

Zebbie was shocked to the core.She couldnt take it anymore.She held his arms and turned him towards her.

"Aap saf saf yeh kyun nahi kehdete hai ki aapko mujhse chir hai?Aap mujhe nahi chahte hai apni zindagi mein.Aapko mere hone ya na hone se farak nahi parhta.Yeh bhi kehdijiye,ki,aapko future mein farak nahi parega,main jeeyu ya maru," said a heart broken Zebbie.

That was it.
Arjun turned her around and gave Zebbie a tight slap.She fell down and blood oozed out of her mouth.
Ashika and Rathod were shocked at his behaviour.Zebbie couldnt believe it.
Rathod(shouting at Arjun): Arjun.. Hosh mein toh ho tum? What did you just do? Zebbie pe kyun haath uthaya tumne? Atleast,uski puri baat toh sunlete tum?
Ashika: Chhi,Rj. Shame on you.Kuch der pehle hi tumne kaha na,ki,Zebbie ko apna kehne mein tumhe sharam aati hai,now.mujhe bhi sharam aati hai tumhe apna Big B kehte huye.Disgusting. How dare you do that to her? She loves you,Damn It? Uske paas koi toh reason hai tumhe na jaane dene ki.Bina puche hi uski saza suna di.
Arjun(very irritated): Dekh,Aashi.. Tum nahi samjhogi.Tum police officer nahi ho na,isiliye.
Ashika: Great... Mana ki main police officer nahi hu,usse pehle,main ik insaan hu.Aur,tum kaise insaan hoge?Tumhare andar dil nahi patthar hai.Tum insaan nahi ho,Arjun,sirf aur sirf ek aam police officer ho.
Arjun(angry at Ashika): Shut up,Aashi.Ek aur lafz nahi.
Ashika: Kyun,ACP Arjun Rawte? Bura laga sach sunke? Bura kyun nahi lagega,huh? Tumhari ehli aur aakhri pehchaan pe ungli jo uthayi hai.Kyun,gussa aaraha hai? Haath uthaoge mujhpe,jaise tumne Zebbie ke upar uthaya hai? And,mind you,ACP Arjun Rawte,agar ek aur shabd bhi suna na,toh,tumhare upar apne fiancee ko assault karne ke case mein suspension order jaari karwane mein mujhe zara bhi der nahi lagegi,samjhe ya main samjhau?
Zebbie,not able to take it anymore,took her bag and ran out of the house.
Ashika: Ruko,Zebbie. Stop.
Zebbie doesnt listen to anyone.She sat in her SUV and drove it off in a full speed.
Ashika calls Rohan,her husband.
Ashika: Rohan...
Rohan: Haan,Ashu.Bolo,kya hua? Aur tum itna haph kyun rahi ho?
Ashika(worried and tensed): Rohan,Arjun ne gusse ke aarh mein Zebbie ko bohut anab shanab boldia aur ek chata bhi mara hai.Please tum idhar aao.Mujhe Zebbie ke paas jana hai.
Rohan: Kya??? Arjun aise kaise karsakta hai.She is his fiancee,Damn It. Wait... Tum wahi ruko.Main aata hu.Tum Aashka ko kaho ki Zebbie ki phone trace kare.
Ashika: Ok.
Ashika disconnects the call.
Ashika calls Aashka.
Ashika: Aashka,ACP Ashika bol rahi hu.Bohut bari musibat aayi hai.Tum jaldi se jaldi Zebbie ke phone ko trace karo aur exact location mujhe batana.U have 15 minutes only.
Aashka: Yes,Ma'am.
(Ashika Rawte,Arjun's sister,is a police officer,and,Arjun knows that,But,Arjun doesnt know that Ashika has been promoted to the ACP rank.Ashika's husband,is also an ACP of the Anti Terrorist Cell).

Here,Arjun slumps down and clamps his face with his hands.
Sameer Rathod,Arjun's best friend,could sense his tension.
Sameer kept his hand on Arjun's shoulder.
Rathod: Arjun,tu kyun humesha uss bechari ko daat ta rehta hai? Woh tujhse pyaar karti hai.
Arjun: Janta hu,ki,woh mujhse bohut zyada pyaar karti hai,aur,Main bhi pyaar karta hu usse,magar,main usse kabhi bhi ussi tarha ka pyaar nahi karpaunga jaise main Roshni se karta thha.Kya karu main? Har waqt mujhe uski baatein ya harkato se Roshni ki yaad aati hai.
Rathod:Toh,iska matlab yeh hota hai ki tu usse thapppar marega,huh?Tu toh aisa kabhi nahi thha,Arjun.Tu toh aurat logo ki bohut izzat karta thha.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting prologue...!!!
continue soon...!! waiting for the update...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice... looking forward 2 reading it... update soon...

plz could u pm me as well...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept dr zee...
me to res update soon..
N plz make ur index other wise i m Confuse..
n whenever i need to read story i found easily ..pllzzz
Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept..
prologue seems interesting...
update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting Intro .. looking fprward !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice concept continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab
lov it re
happy holi
me gulal se rangi hui lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update di.

Arjun hamesa aap ko dard kyun deta hai?

Iss baar bhi..

The title of the story is really appropriate. Just awesome.

And arjun's sister she is just outstanding...
Arjun doesn't know abt her promotion...
And wer is zebbie..
How could he slapped her..
Pyaar karta hai..aur dard bhi deta hai..

I hope uska pyaar usk dard se upar ho..
Warna khud kabhi pyaar k layak nahi rahega..

Thanks fr pm..

N i miss u..
Aap ne kal baat bhi nahi ki..
Any prob di.. Ya aap busy ho..

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