Challenge OS : Rang barse... Holi spl.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi di,
this is for u di
it will as casual case of etf n arjun's exellent mind will work.

Rang barse :

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the day before holi: 5 .30 pm

A man was standing at the shore of the juhu beach facing the shore.
Two other mans are standing before him.
The man facing the shore spoke-
sari tayari ho gayi
man2- haan boss
man1- ye plan jaroor kamyab hoga
man3- haan boss, hum isse fail nahi hone denge.

Next day-
the whole mumbai is looking colourful with different colours.

Rose villa- 8.23.am

seema- ajay kaha ho aap..itni der ho gayi hai,Sab mehmaan aate hi honge
Ajay- ok seema,aa raha hoon.
Seema- mai colours n sare arrangements check kark aati hoon ..
She goes out to check the arrangement.
All set. She goes to check the colourdipped holi water.

She drowns her hand in the tub ..
Seema- wow nice colour ..aaj bahaut maja aayega..
And she left to wash her hand.

ETF conf room: 9 . 24 am

shree n chotu are sitting there with sad face.
Aisha comes n joins them.
Aisha- arre tum dono itne sad kyun ho?
Chotu- kya aisha ! Aaj holi n hum yaha etf conf room mai baith k safed deewar dekh rahe hai...
Shree- haan yaar chotu..
Aur aisha tumhe toh koi fark nahi na.. Jab bulao always ready.

Aisha- tum dono band karo y sab rathod sir aa gaye na toh..
Chotu- ab unhi ki kami thi..

Suddenly rathod enters ..

The three stood up.


His phone started ringing. He received the call. After finishing the call .
Rathod- guys ek naya case hai.

Chotu-shree- murmured - ho gaya humara holi.

Rathod- kya kaha?

Shree- nothing sir , wo case kya hai?
Rathod- rose villa, waha holi ki party ki tayari ho rahi thi par waha k party holder yani Mr. Ajay sharma ki dead body bathroom mai mili hai.
Hume waha jana hoga.

The trio- yes sir!
Rathod- ye Raute kaha hai?
Shree- anhi tak aaye nahi ..mai abhi inform karta hoon..

They headed towards rose villa.

Rose villa - 10. 23 am.
Seema was crying helplessly hoding onto the dead body of her husband.
Liza came forward n console her n made her stand n kep her away from the body.

She goes to examine the body.

Aisha came forward to console her.
Aisha- hum aapka dard samajh sakte hain..par u have to be strong...hume aapki co-operation ki jarurat hai.
Seema just nodded.
Arjun- toh kaise hua ye sab.
Seema- aaj ghar mai holi ki party thi n ajay waha dobara check karne gaye the. Un k aane k baad
unhe kuch ajeeb si mehsus hone laga . Wo dobara nahahe chale gaye. Phir bath room se chikne ki awaj aayi n unki saans phul rahi thi ..
Aur usk thodi der baad woo...

She bursted out crying .
Arjun left the place..n goes to liza.

Arjun- kuch pata chala.
Liza- haan sir... Isk haath mai kuch rashes hain jaise koi allergic reaction. Mujhe check karna hoga .

Arjun- sayad isne rang wale paani mai haath dala hoga...
Liza- ho sakta hai..maine samples collect kar diye hai.. Mujhe forensic lab jana hoga..

Arjun- ok.

Rathod comes there.
Rathod- ho sakta hai ki holi main chemical milane k karan ye hua ho.. Aaj kal kuch jada rasayanic cheesin use kiya jata hai. .. Iski matra bhari ho jaye natiza ye hota hai.

Arjun- itna jada bhi nahi rathod.. I mean chemicals ki wajah se kisi maut ..ye itna aasan nahi..

Rahod- tumhare paas koi nayi theory hai.
Arjun- wo mai forensic report aane baad bataunga.


Etf conf room-

rathod - shree is ajay ki sari info nikalo... Kisi se koi dushmani ..ya kuch aur.. Pata karo.. Ho sakta hai ye ek planned murder ho.

Arjun- haan ye bhi ho sakta hai.
Rathod- kyun ki jab seema check karne gayi tab kuck nahi hua n ab ajay ki body mili..

Arjun- kuch toh chut raha hai.

Liza comes with forensic reports.

Liza- arjun sir aap sahi the. Iski maut rang wale pani k contact mai aane se hui hai.

Uss pani mai mercurus chemical mila n ek tarah k bacteria..

Agar ye dono ek saath aa jaye aur pure pani k contact mai ho.. Toh aadhe ghante mai insaan ki maut .

Par ek ajib si baat pata chali hai.
Hume sir ek tub se ye chemical mili hai.. Baki k 5 pure clean..

Arjun- ok tum jao.

Rathod- ho sakta hai seema ne ye kiya ho..

Arjun- nahi rathod seema ye nahi kar sakti.. Wo ajay se bahaut pya..
Kahai chodo tum nahi samjoge

Rathod stay silent fr some time

Arjun- agar ye sirf ek planned murder hota toh seema bacteria kyun use karti.

Iska matlab ye sirf ek trial hai. Ho sakta hai sirf chemical testing k liye ho
Iska matlab Samje ya samjhaun..

Rathod- haan koi bahaut bada bio attack hone wala hai jis mai ye bacteria bio weapons hai

Hume jald hi kuch karna hoga.

Aisha- par sir ..itna kam time n har jagah bheed bhi bahaut hai
Rathod- hume under cover jana hoga

Aisha- par itne sare jagah mai se hum jayenge kaha

Arjun- wahi jaha sab se jada bheed ho.
Shree pata karo mumbai mai sabse jada log kaun si party aayenge
Hume wahi jana hoga
Wo jo bhi log hai sirf jada logon ko marna chahte hain.

Shree- ok sir..
Rathod- chotu apni local informers ko active karo ..kuch pata chale toh khabar kare..
Rathod- guys lts start.
TBC


Main mobile se update karti hoon so word limit hai toh
Pls tell me should i cont or not .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice dear
continue soon
waiting 4 next part
pm me when u update
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Fab as always.
Unique concept.
Loved it.
Please continue.
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looks intrsting !!!!!
plz cont soon!
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awsum start...!!!
case is interesting...!!
continue soon...!!
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Continued..


Shree - sir malad mai ek bahaut bade playground mai mumbai sabse badi holi party arrange kiya gaya hai..

Arjun- lets go.


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arjun rathod shree n chotu wears white dresses n liza n ayesha are in white salwar ..
They enter the ground.
There was colours eveywhere.

Rathod- spread up guys..

Sab alag alag ho jate hai..

Shree was searching sth . He heard
sth..

Man 1- arre iss baar toh hungama hoga..
Man2- haan aaj toh rango ki barish hogi ..
Man-1- haan aaj toh tanker se paani spray kar wane wale hain..

Here rathod n ayesha are found each other .
A guy come to aisha n forcefully trying to put colour on her.
Rathod ran towards him n hold his hand.
Rathod- kosish bhi mat karna ..
The guy - kuyn teri biwi lagti kya?
Rathod- haan ..ab kuch aur.
He left.
Aisha- thank you sir.
Rathod- its ok.

Shree called everyone through microphones..

Rathod- haan shree
shree- sir yaha kuch special arringements kiye gaye hain...
He told them about the plan.

They all run toward the tanker.
Arjun- ho na ho inhi tankers mai se hi kisi mai wo bacteria wala water ho..

Arjun- liza check karo..

Liza goes n checked.

But nothing found.

Rathod- damn it!! Kuch nahi mila..
I think hume chalna chahiye..

They all started to leave .
Suddenly at the gate they saw another tanker enters the ground.

Arjun noticed it.
Arjun- rathod stop!!
Rathod- raute kuch nahi mila ..ab aur kya..
Arjun- shree ye water suppliers CK water suppliers hai na.
Shree- yes sir..

Arjun- ye gadi asli nahi hai..
Rathod- wo kyun?

Arjun- in sab baton ka waqt nahi hai..

They all rushes to the tanker n caught the driver.
He admit that he was told to do sth like this..

A mad scientist was involved in this.

They arrested him.

The scientist- mere research ka babnaam kiya hai logon ne...
Jo galati maine nahi ki thi uski saja mili muje..
Maine toh water purifier banaya tha jo gande pani ko saaf kar sake par unlogon ne mera project badal diya.

Maine thaan liya k mai kisi ko nahi chodunga..
Rathod slaps him.

The driver - par ye tum ko kaise pat chala..

Arjun- apni gadi k num. Par gaur kiya hota toh jaan jate..
CK water suppliers k sare water tankers k num aise arrange kiye hote hai jaise sare num ko agar milaoge toh sum total 9 hoga jaise
540, 333, 801,,
par iss tanker ka num toh kuch 986 hai..
Ab samjhe ya samjhaun...


Arjun- holi sir rango ka khel nahi hai, asli rang toh logon k dil mai basa pyaar aur chahat hai..aur ye sab wo holi khel kar zahir karte hain...
Tum desh k ek honhar scientist ho, par apni soch ka galat istemal kiya hai tumne ...


Saying so arjun left the place..


Its over guys ..

Aliya di pls tell me how is it.
Good or bad.
I need ur comment.

And others pls tell me how is it..



N don't worry mera fun factor abhi baki hai..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vamp super OS!
fantastic babes..i actually felt like i'm watching arjun live
awesome👏
i'm going to add this OS link in my challenge post,so that more ppl can read it😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aliya_begh

Vamp super OS!
fantastic babes..i actually felt like i'm watching arjun live
awesome👏
i'm going to add this OS link in my challenge post,so that more ppl can read it😎




thank you di.
Aap ko pasand aaya..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing dear
loved it
aliya dear maje aa gye thank u fr d grt ch..
me sing
holi ke din sab mil jate h
lol..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tumhari jitni bhi tarif karu utna kam hai.
Hats off to you,my entertainment queen.
Loved the whole OS.
It was like as if I am watching Arjun live and exclusive.
Loved it to the bits.
Thank you so much.

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