Writer of the Week10-Ramz?-18/03/13 - Page 5

Originally posted by: haruhi26

🤣🤣🤣OMG Arjun sounded just like a kid, wonderful Saba🤗

Now here's your next challenge😉, kuch hatke hein😆:

well continue from this, Rahore teaches Arjun how to propose, and thus Arjun is practising with Rathore, and Riya sees this and her reactions...😉

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

Shit shit shit shit shit...
Mithuz u and ur arisha i was know ...
mujhe pata tha u will give me os of arisha and wo bhi aisa jaisa i neer expect...
huh !!!
don't worry hot seat mili hai toh clallenge to pura karna hi padega
soon will give you your Arisha os sweetie 😃

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

LOL!!! U know me nah... Mein Arisha Dewani hu!!!😉

I m waiting for the OS!

All the best!!

Originally posted by: tani23

Rami here i cum

My challenge

:

Write n Ariya OS: Arjun planning to propose Ria. He decides to propose her one day. he reaches d place n finds shree proposing her, (Shree was practicing to propose Liza with Ria n Arjun misunderstands this).

He was upset, n backs off thinking Ria s happy with shree.

Ri notices a change in his attitude.

She s irked woth sudden change n finally confronts arjun. Ariya fight n den finally ria coming to know d reason of arjun's behavior,. n she proposes to arjun instead.

Write n OS on dis whole concept. I want only 1 chapter. (600 words maximum limit)

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Rami...!!

My OS challenge...

On Arisha after marriage... Typical husband-wife fights on small matters... Arjun Shows his male ego and determines to prove that he is better than the Ayesha ... What she can do, so can he..

Ayesha asks him to handle household work for a 3 days... Arjun readily accepts, but then he realizes he cant... Ending mein he bends down to Ayesha sayin he cant handle, but Ayesha says he has to now as he is going to be a father now...!!!

Make it comedy, with the ending confession of Arjun a bit emotional...!!!

(After WOTW, please post all ur OS challenges in the Forum at one thread.)

(Get ready for more OS challenges!! U are going to be grilled tough)

OS: Challenge

Aisha and Arjun are a Married couple, May you thing why i haven't say Happy married couple it's because...

It was an evening of that day; Arjun just came home and ring the bell

Aisha who was busy in kitchen and she didn't hear the door bell

Arjun was tired of work and angry coz his boss scolds him in office today. He again ring the door bell even kick the door and Yells Aisha

She hear Arjun's voice and immidiatly run to the door , she open the door and there was arjun standing Angrily ...

Aisha : aagaye Tum ( With a smile )

arjun : Dikhayi nahi deraha kya ?

aisha : nahi mera matlab tha ke ... ( Before she can complete Arjun cut her )

Arjun : kya matlab tha tumhara huh ?

Aakhir tumhari problem kya hai ?

agar yaha kade ho kar behas karne ki bajaye 1 glass paani puch leti toh kya ho jaata ?

lekin nahi...tumhe to ladne ( Fighting ) Ka shoq hai , pehle to office se boss ki daant suno aur ghar aake tumse behas karo ...

Aisha : nahi arjun me...( He cut )

Bs karo aisha mujhe to samajh nahi aata ke aakhir koi mujhe chain se jeene kyun nahi deta ???

He through the bag on sofa hardly and walk away to room ...

Aisha was still standing there and a tear drop from her eyes...

Later in bedroom

Arjun was lying on Bed relaxing , aisha bring a glass of milk for arjun

Aisha : Arjun...tumne kuch nahi khaya kam se kam doodh

arjun get up and say " Tumhe meri parwah ho to tab na "

aisha : arjun tum hamesha mujh se aise rudely baat kyun karte ho ?

aakhir meri galti kya hai jo tum mujhe itni badi saza de rahe ho ?

Dam ghutta hai mera yahan

Arjun : saza ? aisha mene tumhe har tarha ki aazadi di hai phir bhi tum kehti ho ke tumhara dam ghutta hai ?

Aisha : arj...

Arjun : nahi ...tumhari koi galti nahi hai koi galti nahi hai aisha kyunke saari galti to meri hai na...jo mene tumse shaadi ki...

After hearing that aisha was like half on Earth

aisha : samajh mein nahi aata arjun ke tum itne badal kese gaye ?

ab tum woh shaadi se pehle wale arjun bilkul nahi rahe

najane wo arjun kaha chala gaya jo mujh pe jaan lutata tha ...

arjun : plz aisha mein pehle hi bohat thaka hua hoon nahi sunni mujhe tumhar faaltu ki bakwaas

aisha : aur agar yeh baat mein tumse kahun ?

ke arjun mujhe tumse bakwaas nahi karni toh ?

agar mein kahun saara din office ki kamar tod mehnat ke baad ghar aake mujhe ek housewife banna padta hai aur mujhse ye ghar ke kaam nahi hote toh ?

arjun : aisha tum koi akeli wife nahi ho jo office aur ghar dono ek saath sambhalti hain

aisha immidiatly say : Aur unke husband unse tumhari tarha ladte nahi

agar itna hi asaan lagte hain ghar ke kaam to 3 din ...sirf 3 din ghar ke kaam karke dikhao to mein maan jaungi ke housewife banna mushkil nahi ...

Arjun : Challenge de rahi ho ?

aisha : kuch aisa hi samjho

Arjun : done...

Aisha : thike hai kal se le jar agle 3 din tak pura ghar tumhare sar...

Both was looking at each other like a cat and mouse look in eachother eyes'

Next day

Aisha wake up and saw arjun was not there she got tensed she get up and go out

The was all Smokey and a smell was comming from kitchen she move to kitchen from where the smoke and smell was coming , and the whole kitchen was messy suddenly aisha saw arjun Coughing and was cooking egg , aisha cough and ask arjun ye sab kya kar rahe ho tum ?

Arjun : bhul gayi tum ne mujhe challenge diya tha whole house sambhalne ko

Aisha : wo to mene bs aise hi kaha tha that doesn't mean ke tum ghar sambhal sako ge

Arjun : don't disturb me go and take get ready for office mein late jaunga

Aisha : arjun are you sure tum kar lo ge na ?

Arjun give her a look

Aisha : acha baba jaa rahi hoon ( She leave while giggling )

Later in Dining table

Aisha was sitting on chair waiting for breakfast , arjun come with breakfast and put the tray in front of aisha

Arjun : ho gaya ready nashta , dekho kitne ache lag rahe hain toast

Aisha hold a toast which was half burn ,

Aisha : ( Laught ) ye break breakfast tum ne banaya hai ?

Arjun : haan mana thora jala hua hai by the way tum egg tast karo

Aisha take a bit of egg, she taste and say "yakh"

Arjun : kya hua ???

Aisha : it's so salty

Arjun : what ? par mene toh sirf 5 spoons daala tha , itni nahi hoga tum phir se check karo

Aisha : ohm...really to thike hai tum khud hi taste kar lo .

She give him a bit and he immediately through out from his mouth and give a look to aisha like now what ???

Aisha laughs out loud

Later aisha leave for office while arjun was busy in cleaning whole house after cleaning the room he sit down on floor for rest , after a little time when he realize he immediately get up and start cleaning rest whole house ...

In the office 4.30 pm

Aisha was doing her work but a thought of arjun come in her mind and her hands stop working she saw him he didn't reach office till yet , she pick he phone to call him on phone but then she call on house telephone , arjun's head was on table and he was taking a break suddenly the phone rang he pick the phone and say "Hello

Aisha hear his voice and feel he was tired , he again say hello but then aisha cut the phone,

Arjun : cut kar diya ?

Ho na ho aisha hi hogi ( He say with a smile ) .

It was 6.30 now and aisha take leave from office , she just come in front of house door and open the door ...

The house was dark , all light's was off and she was shocked , suddenly arjun switch on the lights and the whole house was decorated with balloons etc...

That was a big surprise to aisha given by arjun , he come in front of aisha and sit down on his knees and wish her Happy anniversary Mrs. Aisha rawte and give her a rose ...

Aisha's eyes was full of tears , arjun get up and say " I am sorry aisha aaj pura din ghar sambhalte sambhalte mujhe ehsaas hua ke ek housewife sab se hardworker hoti hai i am really very sorry mein bohat sharminda hoon

Aisha : nahi arjun...tumhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya mere liye yehi kaafi hai upar se ye surprise ( With a smile )

Arjun : to lao mera gift ?

Aisha : gift kaisa gift ?

Arjun : matlab tumhe yaad nahi tha ke aaj hamari wedding anniversary ...jao mujhe tumse baat nahi karni

Aisha smile and bring out a watch and give to him

Aisha : Mr. Daarling apni wedding anniversary ho aur hum bhul jayein aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya ?

Happy 2nd anniversary Mr.Rawte

Arjun look at her and both hug eachother

Happy ending😆

Finally mithuz ka first challenge complete hua

Mithuz i am sorry if mene aap ke expectations tak nahi likha toh !

But mujhe jo acha laga i just write up . hope u will like it !!!

Come soon with another interesting challenge

PS . as u say ke arjun kehe i can't handle that but aisha say u have to that irritates me a litle so have not include this father waali baat and haan i made it a little emotional