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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update :) loved it
loved what ankita said about arjun in the beginning :)
awww arjun gifted riya a new dress
arjun is really Romeo 😆
girl's dresses were so pretty
arjun lost seeing riya in that dress and even Sam was lost seeing ankita
loved when arjun called her riya ji :)
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yupiee ab pari riya tum ho to
me anku ban jati hu yay
arjun sis wink
lov d bond btw anku n arjun
haye arjun ji riya ji wah wah kya bat h
love reading it
sam bro sharma gye wow lol
lov u
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Posted: 12 years ago
sam toh gayi ab 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey hi dear🤗... awesome update😃😃😃😃😃...anku is so badmaash n sweet behna😆😆😆😆... arjun riya ke liye emotional😃😃😃😃😃...arjun's ya yu kahun ur dressing sense amazing...beautifull selection👏👏👏👏👏👏...both were looking gorgeous... now dinner😉😉😉...parr kya hoga...???? sam sharmaa gaya😆😆😆😆😆😆...amazing work 👏👏👏👏...update sonn
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update..
Beautiful girls in beautiful dresses...
Arjun-Ankita bonding...too lovely
Loved the update..
Continue Soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was so cute...
i lved the dresses actually...
lolzz...arjun na...tease karne ka 1 chance nai chod ta...dusht...
aha...someone is jealous!!😉
update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arjunkibehen

Next update kab???????



very soon... may to now o tomorrow morn pakka... almost ready...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry m terribly late...
i had this part ready but could not update y'day due to internet problems...
and yes... ab iss story ko thoda intense bana rahi hun...
i felt i was going off track so bohut mushkil se waapas laayi hun...
ye part and upcoming parts are bit intense...
just hope you all like it...
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"sharmagaya bechara..." Arjun said...

Arjun had a sly smile on his face and winked at two most important people in his life.

He soon finished his snacks and went in to call sameer.

They both came out and Arjun announced

"maasa, hum log pehle film dekhna jaa rahe hai aur phir dinner pe. Thoda der ho sakta hai humare aane mein aap pareshaan mat hoyiega..."

He took her blessings and held ankita and walked out.

Sameer too bent down to take blessings and without waiting for riya he strode out.

They reached multiplex with chatter of riya and ankita as lost friends, or I can say mele mein bichde do behane!!!!!

Soon, they reached and Arjun parked the car, all went inside. They stood in queue, suddenly riya told she is going to get popcorn, winked at anki and strode out.

Not much later, ankita kept her demand infront of Arjun, winking at him. Arjun smiled at her and went in the same direction as riya.

Sameer hesitated to speak to ankita. He was not sure how to approach ankita as he was the one who broke up with her. He hesitated for long and finally decided that he had to speak to her.

"urm...ank-ankita"

"ji kahiye sameer" one part of her was relieved that he was finally voicing his thoughts but another part was still angry on him.

"wo mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi..."

"I am all ears sameer..."

"I am sam for you anku"

"you were before you dumped me sameer Rathod. Not now. you are just arju's friend for me. Nothing more."

Her heart broke into pieces when she spoke those words but that was the only way she could make him realize his mistakes.

"anku main..."

He was interrupted by a voice from behind

"oye hero, ladki se baad mein baat karna. Line mein aage badh"

Sameer turned exasperated and took 4 tickets for aashiqui 2...

(P.S.: I did not watch this movie so dunno what it is... so ll just use songs here n there...heck..i dun even know song sequence in that... random honge...sorry)

He took the tickets and came out of line.

He saw Arjun and riya carrying many popcorn bags and cold drinks. They all went inside and settled. To their luck, they had got corner seats.

Arjun made ankita to sit at the corner, himself settled next to her, next to him was riya and last was sameer.

Lights went off and the movie started. Sameer was not at all interested in the movie but for his fiance and friend he sat in.

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa (x2)

Itna bata doon tujhko
Chaahat pe apni mujhko
Yun tto nahi ikhtiyaar
Phir bhi yeh socha dil ne
Ab jo laga hoon milne
Poochhu tujhe ek baar

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa


Read more: https://www.lyricsmint.com/2013/04/chahun-main-ya-na.html#ixzz2TkrtXQWi

Arjun with hooded lids saw riya and she did the same. Suddenly his eyes flickered to sameer and riya's to ankita.

They could see love, longing and sadness being separated.

Riya and Arjun saw each other and shared a knowing look.

They continued watching the movie and after some time...

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


Read more: https://www.lyricsmint.com/2013/03/tum-hi-ho-aashiqui-2.html#ixzz2Tkr5hqtu

The song played and Arjun held riya's hand and made circles on her palm with his thumb.

The song portrayed his emotions pretty well. Riya's eyes welled up.

Ankita's condition was no better. She was showing her brother that she was happy but she was actually not. Her love rejected her. She knew he liked her too if not loved her, but what he did broke her heart.

Sameer could no longer sit in that hall. At the same time his phone rang and he excused himself out.

Ankita wanted to cry her heart out so she excused herself stating to use washroom.

Arjun and riya were very well aware of what was going in their brains.

Sameer, the supercop, was loggerhead now. he was simply angry on ankita that she delayed telling about them to her brother. He felt offended.

And now, he had very less time to amend things.

He saw ankita moving near washrooms and followed her.

"ankita ruko"

***************

Back at haveli, something very interesting was taking place.

"suniye ji... bhaisa, aap bhi yahin baithiye, bhabhisa aap kahan jaa rahi hai??? Sab ko bulayiye. Hume kuch zaroori baat karni hai aapse..."

At the same time two devils in disguise made their entry. Yap. None other than Shree and chotu, riya's best friend and the two who knew about Arjun and riya's relationship.

Riya's mom welcomed them as she knew these two.

They all settled in the garden and sameer's mom spoke.

"mujhe kuch gadbad lagraha hai ji..."

"kya hua?"

"aapne sameer ka bartav dekha hai? Mujhe lag raha hai ki wo shaadi se kuch khush nahin hai... nahin mera matlab ye nahin hai ki riya mein kuch kharabi hai par mane dono ki aankhon mein kuch ajeeb notice kiya hai..."

Riya's mom was tensed and choree shared a knowing glance.

"ye kya keh rahi ho tum? Hosh mein to ho? Shaadi ko ek hafta reh gaye hai aur tum..."

"meri aankhein dhokha nahin khati hai. Bhaiyya, mujhe Arjun se baat karni hai aur saath hi riya aur ankita se bhi. Kuch to choot raha hai. Maine Arjun ki aankhon mein ankita beti ke liye pyaar dekha haipar ye wo pyaar nahin hai..."

***************


Back to theatre:

The love birds were in their own world..

Outside:

"anku, please meri baat suno..please."

"kyun sunu main tumhari baat sameer? kyun? Tum tab meri baat nahin sune when you ditched me then why should i?"

"I cannot bear this anymore anku please. I felt rejected when you said you don't want to tell about us to your brother. I thought you were playing with my emotions so..."

Ankita furiously grabbed his collar and pushed him to the nearest wall.

"you felt rejected?? Wah. I was insanely in love with you dammit aur tum?!?!!! Maine bas waqt maanga tha tumse bhai se kehne ke liye. Nothing else. You thought that I was playing with your emotions but you did play with my emotions. You broke my heart. I know how it feels."

Tears flowed from her eyes.

but he had turned his back to her when she said those words.

"main tumhare emotions ke saath nahin khel raha tha anku...trust me. But ek baat zaroor kahunga tumse. Arjun ke saath aisa kuch mat karna ki uska dil toote.. he is my best friend, I cant tolerate seeing him broken."

She was stunned by his words.

Rage filled in her.

He made him face her

"agar aisa hai ye bhi sunn lo sameer Damsingh Rathod. Riya meri friend hai. If you cant love her, leave her please. She deserves to be happy"

"its none of your business ankita"

"hell its my business when it concerns you sam cos I love you at the same time I cant see any OTHER girl being hurt by you. You think I have not noticed the cold behavior she is receiving from you?? Hell. Tum pyaar karna jaante hi nahin ho sam. Main hi paagal thi jo tumse pyaar kar baithi."

He had enough now. he wanted to amend things with her and did things exactly opposite to it.

"agar tum mujhse itna hi pyaar karti ho to Arjun ke saath kyun ho?"

"kyun? If you can MOVE ON in your life, then why cant i?

We both know each other very well, understand each other well... tum jao aur apni Riya se shaadi karo sameer, aur mujhe mere haal pe chod do. Pehle hi mera dil tum tod chuke ho I don't want you to break it further. You should have told me if you did not love me back then sam..."

He slammed his lips, taking her lips in a fierce kiss, letting his frustration, his anger, helplessness in that kiss.

She was stunned by this action of sam. She wanted to hear a simple assurance saying he loved her but not this.

She pulled apart and slapped hard across his cheek.

"maine socha tha ki mera pyaar yaani tum mujhe izhaar karoge, mujhe lejayoge doli mein bithake par tum... sorry sam ki main waapas aayi. I am leaving the earliest. Goodbye"

She was hurt by his words, his actions. She ran to washroom to fix herself.

Sameer cursed himself for his words and actions. He had to mend it... mend it all.

He decided that he would first explain situation to everyone and then pacify her, make her his for ever. He dejectedly went inside and sat on his seat. He did not bother to see the worry lines on his friend's face.

****

Arjun and riya had heard everything what transpired between sam and ankita.

To say Arjun was furious would be understatement.

If it weren't riya, he would have definitely knocked some sense in him. he had messed a big time. The matter which could be solved easily had taken a big twist.

He knew his sister. She was way more stubborn than him. she had decided to go out of his life so she would do that, no matter what.

He had immediately called sameer's mom and said they had a serious matter to discuss.

****

Soon they reached home and both sameer and ankita went to their respective rooms. Both did not sleep a wink that night...

Arjun and riya saw this and then turned to maasa. At the same time they saw choree. They both nodded their heads and everyone went in a room.

****

Next morning, at the breakfast table,

"ek baat kehni thi sameer beta. Shaadi humne jald rakhne ki sochi hai. Agle hafte nahin balki kal hi shaadi hogi"


******

ll be continued soon...


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Posted: 12 years ago
EDITED!

fantastic update :) loved it
awww they went to movies and then dinner
mele mein bichde do behane 😆
feeling bad for both rathore and ankita
yayyy chotu and shree are here :)
sam's parents think he is not happy about this marriage
poor ankita was crying
awww sam was thinking about arjun at this time too and asked ankita not to break his heart
ankita slapped him 😲 rathore kinda deserved it after what he did
ariya heard their conversation
seems like arjun and riya have told everyone about them
omg now sam is getting married in one day
can't wait to read more
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pari mera sweetu
awesum
ariya amazing
sam bro teas lol
lov it
awesum sng
haila sam bro phew
nyc arjun bro
shreetu grt
lov it..!

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