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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
thank you so much for adding riya in this FF
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Part 1

Love u guyzz fr ur sincere comments…..

Here is the first part of my FF….
enjoy………….

It was yet another normal day in ETF. Everybody was engrossed in doing their respective works. Rathod had given each of them some or the other works to be completed.😊

Shree was busy downloading new apps, softwares and some databases. Liza was busy with her new date….i mean a new dead body to be postmortemed. Arjun was busy doing NOTHING. Yeah he ws engrossed in some thoughts. And we all know wat and whose thoughts they must be of. Aisha was searching fr some work on internet. She was surfing fr any new criminal news so dat they got to solve a new case. And our Rathod was busy watching her antics from the glass window of his cabin.😳

Then came Chotu to Shree and said……

Chotu: arey shree kya kr rha hai?

Shree: kya batau yarr…. Sare kaam mujhe hi krne padte hai….dekh na Rathod sir ne kuch naye Apps donload krne ko khe hai….maine unse kha ki mere pass job hi softwares hai , they r enough … pr vo mane hi nhi…
acha khasa mai coffee pee rha tha baithke… kaam pe laga diya…😕

Chotu: aai ga…! Mujhe to vishwas hi nhi ho rha ki ye tu keh rha hai shree. Tujhe to hamesha ye sab kaamo me maja ata hai na..? ye alag alg tarah k apps aur softwares download krna…. Aur apni girlfriend k saath busy rehna…tujhe to pasand hai na…?🥱

Shree: (shockingly) GIRLFRIEND….??? Ye kab bani ? aur mujhe pata bhi nhi chala?😲😲

Chotu: are tera laptop…..😆
(shree gives him a disgusting look…..)

Vaise tujhe hua kya hai…? Aj subah se dekh rha hu … tera mood off hai…fir se us liza k saath jhagda hua kya..?

Shree: (flaring up at chotu) tu to uska naam bhi mat le mere samne…. Lashon k saath rehkr khud bhi puri tarah insensitive ho gyi hai. Are yarr subah maine use bas itna kaha ki jakar aisha ko bol do ki rathod sir use bula rhe hai, to kehne lagi kit um khud jakar kehdo…. She said no to ME….😡😡

Chotu: are yarr shree itni choti si baat pr itna kyu bhadak rha hai….. tu to aise behave kr rha hai jaise vo teri girlfrnd hai aur tujhe romance krne se mana kr diya….😆

Shree: kya? Girlfriend? Aur meeri? Vo to meri friend bhi nhi ban sakti kabhi……😡

Vaisde vo dekh hamare rathod sir kaise chup chup ke aisha ko nihare jar he hai….. 😳

Chotu: tujhe kya lagta hai in dono k beech kbhi kuch ho skta hai…?😳

Shree: pata nhi ….. pr I hope ki kuch ho jae….. kam se kam akdu ACPs ki list me se ek naam to kam hoga….😆😉

They both share a hi fi nd start laughing…….😆😆

There Rathod ws feeling an irk to talk to Aisha… she looked so beautiful…. Her silky black hairs , her beautiful eeys always carrying a spark, her so well maintained body postures, her luscious lips as if inviting his..to claim them.. 😳😳

Rathod: wat m I thinking of…. Kya ho gya hai mujhe? Come on Sameer , have u lost it… she's jst ur team member nd u both merely share time nd space…

Rathod said to himself in a bit annoying tone to himself..

All were busy when a news flashed on TV screen…

BREAKING NEWS:😲

Aj subah sheher k ek bohot hi naami vyakti MR. Manish Vadhwa k ghar pr unki biwi ki jail hui lash mili hai…. Aas paas k logon ka kehna hai ki ye keval durghatna ho hi nhi sakti kyuki kal raat ko Mr.Vaddhwa k ghar se ladai ki awaze aa rhi thi..

It didn't take Rathod a min to call commissioner nd take the case in their hands…

Rathod calls the team to the conference table…

Rathod: team we have a case… tum sab ne Mr. Manish Vadhwa k bare me to suna hi hoga… he owns 3 3-starrer nd 2 5-starrer hotels in the city… pr aj subah unke ghar me unki biwi ki jail hui lash mili hai… lets go nd find the culprit… Shree tumhare pass aur koi jankari hai..?

Shree: yes sir , maine abhi vo news dekhi. Par twist in tale is that ki kal raat se hi Manish ka koi pata nhi hai… kisi ko pata nhi ki vo kha hai. Uske padosiyon ka kehna hai ki kal raat ko uske aur uski biwi k beech jhagda hua tha.

Aisha: par shree iska matlab kahi ye to nhi ki manish apni biwi ki mout k liye jimmedar hai? (aisha asks suspiciously)

Chotu: pr mujhe nhi lagta ki aisa kuch hai

Arjun: kyu chotu? Kya tum Manish vadhwa ko personally jante ho?

Chotu: nhi sir par maine uski shadi k bare me 5-6 mahine pehele paper me padha tha.

Rathod: haan, aur us article me likha tha ki Manish ne love marriage ki hai….

Aisha: aur vo apni biwi se bahut pyaar bhi krta hai… khair pyar ko nafrat me badalte vaqt nhi lagta..(her facial expression changes a bit. Rathod notices it bt thn again changes the topic to pull her back into reality)

Rathod: sach kya hai ye to hame vaha jakar aur investigation krke hi pata chalega… lets go

Arjun: shree, mai, rathod, aisha aur chotu pehle chale jate hai… tum liza ko lekar pohuch jao

Hame vaha uski jaroorat padegi…

😲

Shree: sir mai….? (a bit annoyed, nd irritated) vo khud bhi to aa skti hai na…🤢

Rathod: haan vo aa skti hai, pr forensics ka itna sara samaan, lekar drive krke ana… its not dat easy… tum use le ana.. (nd with a glare) aur mujhe vaha jane k baad tum dono k beech koi arguments nhi chahiye….😡

They all leave , leaving behind a miffed nd irritated shree… Aisha comes to him nd in a teasing manner…😉
Aisha: come on Shree be a gentle man… u mst help her na.. vo bechari akeli kaisi aayegi….😉

Shree: (in a tit for tat manner) accha gentle man uske saamne banna chahiye jo khud gentle woman ho…. Aur jahan tk BECHARI ka sawaal hai … to tum jaldi se jakar SUV me baith jao… varna tumhe ARjun sir ki daant sunni padegi… aur fir tumhe pata chalega… ki BECHARI kise kehte hai…😆

Aisha: ur right…. Bye…😊

Aisha murmered in a low voice…"oh god, lagta hai Shree ka mood kuch jyada hi kharab hai… aj to volcano futega shayad… pr kiska ye nhi pata….."

Hassshhh…. Phew… its all fr today….

No precap fr tis part bt I promise the next part has a dramatic twist… nd those who r still annoyed with me fr not putting riya in this part…. Again I have to say only one thing to them… "have patience guyzz…. Riya is ofcourse there in the FF bt u'll hv to wait fr her entry.." let me knw dat do u like the start…. Nd the pairing of SaSha (Sameer-aisha) ……???

Plz do comment. Ur comments r very much imp to me nd my baby…this FF is my baby… nd I pamper it with my love nd expect u all to shower it with ur love nd gifts…. Gifts? Your likes nd comments r the gifts…

Silent readers atleast hit the like button….

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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
nice!!!sweet wala nice!!!!
hahaa kaya toh bhi nok jhok shree aur liza ka...!
awww sameer looking at aisha secretly so chweet!
wanna know badly kya hoga wen liza and shree are going to the crime scene!
waiting for next update...!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
awsum update...
sam secreately looking at aisha and his thoughts... cool...
ooo shree ka mood itna khrab... ab to liza shree mai nok jhok pakki...
waiting for riya's entry and for the big turns and twists...
continue soon...
plz pm me whenever you update...
thx...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
thank you so much for adding riya in this FF
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
superb update :) loved it
chotu called laptop shree's girlfriend 😆
chotu and shree's conversation was really funny
rathore secretly looking at aisha and loved his thoughts :)
poor shree his mood was so off and now rathore asked him to come with liza
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Sent u a buddy request ...pls pls PM me the next parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
continue soon yr...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: rinku321

Part 1

Love u guyzz fr ur sincere comments'..

Here is the first part of my FF'.
enjoy''''.

It was yet another normal day in ETF. Everybody was engrossed in doing their respective works. Rathod had given each of them some or the other works to be completed.😊

Shree was busy downloading new apps, softwares and some databases. Liza was busy with her new date'.i mean a new dead body to be postmortemed. Arjun was busy doing NOTHING. Yeah he ws engrossed in some thoughts. And we all know wat and whose thoughts they must be of. Aisha was searching fr some work on internet. She was surfing fr any new criminal news so dat they got to solve a new case. And our Rathod was busy watching her antics from the glass window of his cabin.😳

Then came Chotu to Shree and said''

Chotu: arey shree kya kr rha hai?

Shree: kya batau yarr'. Sare kaam mujhe hi krne padte hai'.dekh na Rathod sir ne kuch naye Apps donload krne ko khe hai'.maine unse kha ki mere pass job hi softwares hai , they r enough ' pr vo mane hi nhi'
acha khasa mai coffee pee rha tha baithke' kaam pe laga diya'😕

Chotu: aai ga'! Mujhe to vishwas hi nhi ho rha ki ye tu keh rha hai shree. Tujhe to hamesha ye sab kaamo me maja ata hai na..? ye alag alg tarah k apps aur softwares download krna'. Aur apni girlfriend k saath busy rehna'tujhe to pasand hai na'?🥱

Shree: (shockingly) GIRLFRIEND'.??? Ye kab bani ? aur mujhe pata bhi nhi chala?😲😲

Chotu: are tera laptop'..😆
(shree gives him a disgusting look'..)

Vaise tujhe hua kya hai'? Aj subah se dekh rha hu ' tera mood off hai'fir se us liza k saath jhagda hua kya..?

Shree: (flaring up at chotu) tu to uska naam bhi mat le mere samne'. Lashon k saath rehkr khud bhi puri tarah insensitive ho gyi hai. Are yarr subah maine use bas itna kaha ki jakar aisha ko bol do ki rathod sir use bula rhe hai, to kehne lagi kit um khud jakar kehdo'. She said no to ME'.😡😡

Chotu: are yarr shree itni choti si baat pr itna kyu bhadak rha hai'.. tu to aise behave kr rha hai jaise vo teri girlfrnd hai aur tujhe romance krne se mana kr diya'.😆

Shree: kya? Girlfriend? Aur meeri? Vo to meri friend bhi nhi ban sakti kabhi''😡

Vaisde vo dekh hamare rathod sir kaise chup chup ke aisha ko nihare jar he hai'.. 😳

Chotu: tujhe kya lagta hai in dono k beech kbhi kuch ho skta hai'?😳

Shree: pata nhi '.. pr I hope ki kuch ho jae'.. kam se kam akdu ACPs ki list me se ek naam to kam hoga'.😆😉

They both share a hi fi nd start laughing''.😆😆

There Rathod ws feeling an irk to talk to Aisha' she looked so beautiful'. Her silky black hairs , her beautiful eeys always carrying a spark, her so well maintained body postures, her luscious lips as if inviting his..to claim them.. 😳😳

Rathod: wat m I thinking of'. Kya ho gya hai mujhe? Come on Sameer , have u lost it' she's jst ur team member nd u both merely share time nd space'

Rathod said to himself in a bit annoying tone to himself..

All were busy when a news flashed on TV screen'

BREAKING NEWS:😲

Aj subah sheher k ek bohot hi naami vyakti MR. Manish Vadhwa k ghar pr unki biwi ki jail hui lash mili hai'. Aas paas k logon ka kehna hai ki ye keval durghatna ho hi nhi sakti kyuki kal raat ko Mr.Vaddhwa k ghar se ladai ki awaze aa rhi thi..

It didn't take Rathod a min to call commissioner nd take the case in their hands'

Rathod calls the team to the conference table'

Rathod: team we have a case' tum sab ne Mr. Manish Vadhwa k bare me to suna hi hoga' he owns 3 3-starrer nd 2 5-starrer hotels in the city' pr aj subah unke ghar me unki biwi ki jail hui lash mili hai' lets go nd find the culprit' Shree tumhare pass aur koi jankari hai..?

Shree: yes sir , maine abhi vo news dekhi. Par twist in tale is that ki kal raat se hi Manish ka koi pata nhi hai' kisi ko pata nhi ki vo kha hai. Uske padosiyon ka kehna hai ki kal raat ko uske aur uski biwi k beech jhagda hua tha.

Aisha: par shree iska matlab kahi ye to nhi ki manish apni biwi ki mout k liye jimmedar hai? (aisha asks suspiciously)

Chotu: pr mujhe nhi lagta ki aisa kuch hai

Arjun: kyu chotu? Kya tum Manish vadhwa ko personally jante ho?

Chotu: nhi sir par maine uski shadi k bare me 5-6 mahine pehele paper me padha tha.

Rathod: haan, aur us article me likha tha ki Manish ne love marriage ki hai'.

Aisha: aur vo apni biwi se bahut pyaar bhi krta hai' khair pyar ko nafrat me badalte vaqt nhi lagta..(her facial expression changes a bit. Rathod notices it bt thn again changes the topic to pull her back into reality)

Rathod: sach kya hai ye to hame vaha jakar aur investigation krke hi pata chalega' lets go

Arjun: shree, mai, rathod, aisha aur chotu pehle chale jate hai' tum liza ko lekar pohuch jao

Hame vaha uski jaroorat padegi'

😲

Shree: sir mai'.? (a bit annoyed, nd irritated) vo khud bhi to aa skti hai na'🤢

Rathod: haan vo aa skti hai, pr forensics ka itna sara samaan, lekar drive krke ana' its not dat easy' tum use le ana.. (nd with a glare) aur mujhe vaha jane k baad tum dono k beech koi arguments nhi chahiye'.😡

They all leave , leaving behind a miffed nd irritated shree' Aisha comes to him nd in a teasing manner'😉
Aisha: come on Shree be a gentle man' u mst help her na.. vo bechari akeli kaisi aayegi'.😉

Shree: (in a tit for tat manner) accha gentle man uske saamne banna chahiye jo khud gentle woman ho'. Aur jahan tk BECHARI ka sawaal hai ' to tum jaldi se jakar SUV me baith jao' varna tumhe ARjun sir ki daant sunni padegi' aur fir tumhe pata chalega' ki BECHARI kise kehte hai'😆

Aisha: ur right'. Bye'😊

Aisha murmered in a low voice'"oh god, lagta hai Shree ka mood kuch jyada hi kharab hai' aj to volcano futega shayad' pr kiska ye nhi pata'.."

Hassshhh'. Phew' its all fr today'.

No precap fr tis part bt I promise the next part has a dramatic twist' nd those who r still annoyed with me fr not putting riya in this part'. Again I have to say only one thing to them' "have patience guyzz'. Riya is ofcourse there in the FF bt u'll hv to wait fr her entry.." let me knw dat do u like the start'. Nd the pairing of SaSha (Sameer-aisha) ''???

Plz do comment. Ur comments r very much imp to me nd my baby'this FF is my baby' nd I pamper it with my love nd expect u all to shower it with ur love nd gifts'. Gifts? Your likes nd comments r the gifts'

Silent readers atleast hit the like button'.




Please add me to your list, so you can tell me when u update. :) Good Job btw:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
nice waiting for Riya entry,
great part continue soon

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