OS: Mere Ghar Aayi Ek Nannhi Pari

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola amigos.
This was one of the first OS i had written in my previous IF id,which got deleted.
Some of the readers,may know abt this OS,but,i thought,to write it again for everyone.
.The plot is slightly changed with Ankita as the new charecter.Hope u all will like it.
Story in the next post.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rathod was pacing from this end to that end of the hospital.Shree and Chotu were behind the doctors to enquire about Ankita's health and her unborn baby.Riya was praying to her Durga Maa for keeping the mother and the baby safe.
Here,Rathod was sweating out of tension.
Arjun observed this and placed a comforting hand on Rathod's shoulder.
Rathod: Arjun,I am really worried for Ankita and my baby.Agar undono ko kuch hogaya,toh,main...
Arjun: Ssshh... Rathod.Ankita ko kuch nahi hoga.ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod ki biwi jo hai. Just pray to Bhagwaan.
From a distance,Riya was observing this.
Riya's Mindvoice(MV): Arjun sir ko Rathod sir keliye itne concerned dekke bohut khush hu.Bhagwaanji,inki dosti salamat rakhna.

Just then,a baby's loud cry broke their thoughts.The cry came out of the OT.Rathod was feeling very elated and happy.
The Doc came out.
Rathod immediately went upto the Doc.
Rathod: Doc,Ankita kaisi hai? Aur mera baby?
Doc: Chill,ACP Rathod. Congratulations.Mrs.Rathod have birth to a beautiful baby girl.Aapke ghar Maa Lakshmi padhari hai.Congratulations.
The whole team were rejoicing after the news of Rathod's baby girl's birth.
Arjun went upto him and hugged him.
Arjun: Congratulations,Rathod.Aakhir tu baap bann gaya.
Rathod: Thanks Arjun.Waise,tu toh meri bacchi ka bare chachu ban gaya,wo bhi akdu wala.
Arjun(feigning anger):Rathod...
Rathod: Sorry,yaar.
Tujhe bhi mubarak ho.
Shree: Mubarak ho,Sir.
Chotu: Aapko mubarak ho,Sir.
Rathod: Thanks,Shree and Chotu,Tum dono toh Majle chachu aur Chote chachu ban gaye.
Chotu: Sir,main toh majle chachu ban gaya.
Shree:Aur main,Chote Chachu.
Rathod: Haan.Waise,Riya kaha hai?
Riya: Main yahi hu,Sir.Mithhai laane gayi thhi.Mubarak ho,Sir.
Rathod: Thanks,Riya.Sabka mu mithai karwao.
Riya: Sabse pehla haq aapka hai.Mu kholiye.
Shree,Chotu,Riya and Arjun,in turns,stuffed Rathod's mouth with laddoos.
Rathod went to the Doc.
Rathod: Doc,kya main Ankita se mil sakta hu?
Doc: Sure,but,aab hum Mrs.Rathod ko Cabin mein shift kar rahe hai,tab mil sakte hai,ok.
Rathod: Sure.

After an hour,
Ankita was transferred in the cabin.She had tears of joy on her eyes.It was clearly reflecting from her eyes,that,she has,finally,become a mother of a Girl.
Everybody went inside.
Rathod went towards his wife and his baby.
As he lifted up his baby and took her in his arms,he felt so relieved and serene.
He looked up at Ankita,who was smiling at him.
Rathod spoke up.
Rathod: Thank You so much,Ankita,for giving the the best gift of this world.I just cant express my happiness now.Kaise tumhe shukria adah karu?
Ankita: Kuch karne ki zarurat nahi hai.Aapki goud mein maine apki beti ko sop di,isse behtar khushi aur kya hosakti hai. I love you,Sam.
Rathod: I love you too,Ankita.
With that,he bends a little lower and pecks Ankita's forehead and pecked his princess's forhead and cheeks.
Rathod: My princess...My Pari.
Aaj se,meri beti,Parineeta Sameer Damsingh Rathod ke naam se jani jayegi.Any problems with that,Ankita?
Ankita: Isse accha naam toh aur hohi nahi sakta.Parineeta aka Pari,humari Pari.
Arjun: Sam,dont u think,Pari ko sabse introduce karwana hai?
Rathod: Oh Yeah...
Pari,this is ur Rj Chachu.
This is ur Shree Chachu.
And,This is ur Chotu Chachu.
Riya: Aur,main iski Riyu maasi,kyun,Anki?
Ankita: Ekdum.
Riya fishes her hand into her pockets and brings out a box.
She opens the box and takes out two gold little bangles.
Rathod and the others are confused.
Shree:Yeh kya hai?
Riya: Shree,yeh maine bachpaan mein pehni thhi,jab mera janam huya thha.Maa ne pehnayi thhi.Toh,yeh aab meri Pari beti keliye.
She slowly and gently holds Pari's little hands and make them wear it.
It was looking very beautiful on Little Pari's hands.
Rathod: Riya,iski kya zarurat thhi?
Riya: Sir,yeh tohfa Pari ki Bare chachu aur Bari Chachi ki taraf se,yani,mere aur Arjun sir ki taraf se,kyun Arjun sir?
Everybody were shocked and happy.
Arjun: Itna shocked maat hona,warna,Pari dar jayegi.Haan.Maine decide kiya hai,ki,ek mahine baad,main aur Riya shaadi karenge.
Ankita: Really!!!!! Yay...
Rathod: Wow,Arjun. I am really proud of you.Congrats:
Arjun: Thanks.
Shree and Chotu:Congrats,Riya and Arjun Sir.
Riya and Arjun: Thanks a lot.
Rathod: Wah!!!! Aaj toh double celebration hogi,kyun,Ankita?
Ankita: Definitely.
Rathod(hugging his daughter): Mere Ghar Aayi Ek Nannhi Pari,hum sab ki Pari.


The End.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww...
Shooo cuteee...
Ucha.ged d plot for me ... Zebbie ... Cant thank u moree... Thanxxx a lottt...

Lovex the way u put everonez emotions...
N those bangle...wowieee

double celebration...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very chweeet!!!!!!!!!
loved it!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankita2804

Awww...
Shooo cuteee...
Ucha.ged d plot for me ... Zebbie ... Cant thank u moree... Thanxxx a lottt...

Lovex the way u put everonez emotions...
N those bangle...wowieee

double celebration...


welcome,Darling.
Love u too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great OS zebbie
Nice very nice.
It's really celebration time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
superb OS :) loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
aww... So cute... Sameer-Ankita-Pari trio was sweet...

Ariya... Kya bolun? So lyk Arjun... Apne akdu style main... No comments, no questions bas announcement... "1 mahine baad meri aur Riya ki shaadi hai" Hey bhagwaan...is ladke ko Love-ology mein thodi si akal to do!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
wow!!! nyccc!!!

congos to sameer- ankita and ariya!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
choo chweet zebbie...
ariya shaadi...
and samita ke beti pari(kya wo main hun????😉😆?)...yay...😉
nice dear...
if possible do give us a sequel😊

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