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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Take a bow dear
no wrds
speechless
lov it
one of my fav..!!

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Khushboo

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow this was really beautiful and emotional!
Poor Arjun was scared too lose Riya and their baby
Loved the ending! :)
Amazing work!

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bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

I was crying
super emotional
every sentence has great impact
no words for such a wonderful work
thnx for writing such a story 😊

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update.
Its heartouching os.
Finally riya gets her arjun.

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sonycs001

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Posted: 12 years ago

nicely written

so sad that ria got the news of the happiest thing in such a way

thank gor ariya became one again and ria acted in a brilliant way to make arjun understand his mistake

thanks for the update

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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

excellent two shot.

a way too emotional.

loved it so much.

Edited by akanksha1371986 - 12 years ago

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rocking_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

firstly welcome back!!!!

and you came back with a bang!!!!!

loved it...!!!!

the way Riya acted to make sure she gets her message understood by Arjun...!!!!

got scared when she took the gun and pointed at herself...

shock when she said she didnt want the baby...

cried when she explain how baby's life will be if it doesnt have a dad in its life...!!!!

very emotional and well written fab work!!!!👏👏

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