OS: Pang Of Jealousy *DISCONTINUED*

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 12 years ago

Charecters:

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte
ACP Sameer Rathod
Ankita Rathod
Zebbie Khanna
Shreekant Sen
Chandrakant Patil
Dustin Coelho
Raghu Sir
Sheen
Mrs.Raghu

special appearance:
Varun Dhawan
Siddharth Malhotra

Edited by zebbie0504 - 12 years ago

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 12 years ago

It was Shree and Sheen's engagement.Everybody was very happy,especially Arjun and Rathod.They were really for Sheen,because,both of them considered her as their baby sister.

Zebbie and Chotu were touched by this nature of both their seniors'. Zebbie had tears in her eyes.Chotu noticed it.

Chotu: Kya hua,Zebbie? Tumhare aakho mein aansu? Arjun sir agar dekhliya,toh mera band baja denge?

Zebbie(smacking lightly Chotu): Arey aisa kuch nahi,Chotu.Yeh toh khushi ke aansu hai.Arjun sir aur Rathod sir ki yeh caring side maine pehli baar dekhi hai.Ek larki ke zindagi mein ek bhai ka mehetva kya hota hai,sirf wohi jaane jiski koi bare bhai na ho.

Saying this,she goes away from there.Chotu tries to stop her,but she went away.

Mrs.Raghu notices this.She sees Zebbie standing at a distance. She goes to her.
Mrs.Raghu keeps a hand on Zebbie's shoulder.She feels it and wipes her tears.

Zebbie turned back.

Zebbie: Oh! Sorry,Ma'am. Party mein thora ghutan si mehsoos horahi thhi,isiliye thori side pe aagayi.Chaliye.

Mrs.Raghu: Zebbie,at least jhoot toh maat bolo.Main janti hu,tum kya feel kar rahi ho?

Zebbie: Aisa koi baat nahi hai.

Mrs.Raghu: Tumhe batani hogi.Tumhe Arjun ki kasam.
She stops at that.She turned back and hugged her.She was crying.

Mrs.Raghu: Zebbie,main janti hu,tum Arjun se bohut pyaar karti ho,be intehaan pyaar.Tum toh Arjun ko janti ho.Roshni ke jaane ke baad woh ekdum toot ke bikhar chuka hai.Phir usne thhan liya ke,Sikander ko marne ke baad hi woh chaen ki saans lega,aur,dekho,wohi hua.Arjun toh chaen ki saansein le raha hai,par,uski zindagi abhi bhi veeran hai.Aur uski veeran zindagi mein rang sirf aur sirf tumhi bharsakti ho.

She breaks the hug and wipes her tears.

Mrs.Raghu: tumhe aab rona nahi hai,Zebbie.Arjun ko paane keliye tumhe kuch karna hai.

Zebbie: Main kya karu,Ma'am? Main toh sirf unke liye ek colleague se zyada kuch nahi hu.

Mrs.Raghu: hmm...Jealousy ka naam suna hai? Make him jealous by doing something.

Zebbie: Haww... Jealousy create karu? Par kaise??

A voice came from behind.

It was Sheen.

Sheen: Bhabi,hum sab madat karenge aapko...Samjhhe ya Samjhhau?

Zebbie blushed at that word,BHABHI,

Sheen: Haan,Zebbie bhabi.Hum karenge madat. Hum sab.

Precap: Surprise... Varun Dhwan and Siddharth Malhotra enters.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oye,koi toh comment karo... Warna main ro dungi

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

superb start...
loved it...
wow to arjun ko jealous krne ki planning ho rai hai... nice... ;)
precap is interesting...
new enteries...
continue soon...
cant wait for the next part...
lol ro mat zebbie... :D

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ankita2804

@ankita2804

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Posted: 12 years ago

jealousyyy...
wow wow wowww...
zebbies...jo krna h jaldi karo...
cant wait to see arjun getting jealous hehehehe...

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 12 years ago

Note.

Hello everyone.
Many of you may know that I was severely ill and was admitted in the hospital with high fever and lower abdominal pain.
I just came back today from the hospital and started this OS as my comeback gift to all.
But,i will be very happy if you all let me have rest for a day and let me post the swhole story tomorrow,please.
If i write the story today,it will take a long time,coz,i am writing with my one hand only and my other hand is bandaged due to IV drip needle was twisted.And that is really hurting me.
Still,to make my readers feel happy,i m using both my hands.
So,please,excuse me for today and i will,pakka, post the next half of this story by tomorrow.
Till then,
Take Care.
Keep me in ur prayers.
Pray for my quick recovery,as well.
Thanks a lot.
Love,
Zebbie.

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@Wj.mad

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Posted: 12 years ago

jealoucy
a small word with lots of benefits nd loss but in dis case it is benefit
nice dear
update soon
nd pm me

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Pihu Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

aww..

Sheen is too cute..

awesome update

continue soon..

Take care & get well soon dear..

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 2.

Sheen: Mom,plan 1 ready.

Mrs.Raghu: bingo.

Zebbie(confused): Plan 1 ka matlab,what????

Sheen: Dekhti jao,Bhabhi.Aaj toh bhai ko super jealous bana ke hi chorenge and unke mooh se woh teen lafz kehlwake hi chorenge.

Zebbie blushes a lot.

Mrs.Raghu: Dekha,Sheen.Humare Arjun ka naam sunte hi Zebbie ka mooh sharm ke maare laal hogaya hai.

Sheen: Haan,Mom. Waise,woh dono,mere handsome heroes kahaan hai?

Mrs.Raghu: Raste mein hai.

Zebbie: Handsome heroes...???

Sheen: Arey bhabi,Thori der mein sab pata chalega.Bhabhi,yeh lehenga pehno.Aab bohut hi khubsurat lagogi.

Zebbie: Thik hai.

Mrs.Raghu: Chalo,Sheen.Niche chalo.

Sheen: Haan,Mom.

Sheen calls Shree.

Shree: Haan,Sheen.

Sheen: Shree,plan 1 started. Woh dono aarahe hai.

Shree: Great.Main abhi Rathod sir,Ankita,Chotu ko batata hu.

Sheen: Ok.

Shree: Waise,Zebbie ko woh lehenga diya tumne jo tumne kharida?

Sheen: Haan.Diya na.Aab aayega party mein asli maza.Kaam mera;Naam kisi aur ka aur Jealousy shuru.Yahoo... Chalo,rakhti hu,bye.

Shree: Bye.

Zebbie in Sheen's room.

Zebbie changes into that lehenga.It was so pretty and gorgeous.Moreover,it was backless.The choli was black in colour with golden polkas,while the lehenga wasglossy vermillion red and had black and golden borders.The dupatta had a mixture of black,golden and red colour.She didnt wear heavy jewellery.Just a pair of heavy earrings and a locket with the letter,"A".

(lehenga Zebbie wore):

(her earrings):

(alphabet locket):

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In the party.

Two hot guys enter.Everybody stare at them and at their physique.

Sheen and Ankita stare at them and were lost.

Both the boys go towards the dias and wish the couple.

Guy1: Congratulations,Shree and Sheen.

Guy 2: Congratulations to both of you.

Shree: Thank you,Mr.Varun Dhawan aka Rohan Nanda of SOTYY.

Sheen: Thank you,Mr.Siddharth Malhotra aka Abhimanyu of SOTY.

Varun: welcome,Shree.Waise,mujhe tumhare ETF ke team se milna hai.Intro nahi karwaoge unhe.

Sheen: Zarur karwaenge.Pehle tum dono Mom,Dad aur Commissioner uncle se milke aao,Samjhe ya Samjhhau?

Siddharth: Koi itna pyaar se samjhaye aur hum na samjhe??? Humari itni majaal.milke aate hai,Tab hum plan 2 ka start karenge.

Shree: Sure.

Sheen: Sam bhai,Varun aur Siddharth aagaye hai.Plan 1A start karo.
Rathod: Sure.

Precap: Real fun starts.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago