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@mishree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

yr, u r wondrfl writer tumari tarif k liye words nhi hai mere pas tumari hr story dil say likhi hoti hai jo mujhai padh kr khushi hoti hai jo mai byan nhi kr skti yr gud going i love ur writing skill

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@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Just read it...
Nice one...
So Riya nd Arjun in lift...
Loved it...
waiting for last part...
Update Soon...

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

lovely update
ariya romance superb😳😉
liked their cute little fights
hehe riya doesn't know that he is the guy her dad choose for her😆
oops arjun kissed her blushing blushing😳😆
precap is interesting
riya is angry on him😔 arjun plans to go back to his place😲
hope she ll stop him
w8ing 4 next part

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Jass_k5
yr, u r wondrfl writer tumari tarif k liye words nhi hai mere pas tumari hr story dil say likhi hoti hai jo mujhai padh kr khushi hoti hai jo mai byan nhi kr skti yr gud going i love ur writing skill

Ohhh etani tarifff...how sqeet yr..thank u so much dr

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Princeess07
Just read it...
Nice one...
So Riya nd Arjun in lift...
Loved it...
waiting for last part...
Update Soon...

Thanks dr..bus wait khatm hone vala hai

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: madmadona
lovely update
ariya romance superb😳😉
liked their cute little fights
hehe riya doesn't know that he is the guy her dad choose for her😆
oops arjun kissed her blushing blushing😳😆
precap is interesting
riya is angry on him😔 arjun plans to go back to his place😲
hope she ll stop him
w8ing 4 next part

Ohhh blushinggg..hummm...thanks dr for ur lvly lvly comment...
Bus thoda or wait

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Ohhh mujhe kuch kuch ho raha haiii...
kuch kuch nahi sab kuch ho raha haiii...!!
ohhh thank u so much dr frsss for liking this os ...
n reading n leaving ur valuable comments,..
so maine soncha finaly last part post ker he duin...
but i think..ye last nahi last second hoga...
just wait for few more minute...!!
lv ur frs
ur piya...

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NEXT PART=5

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Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

PART=4
"uff ab pyaar ke etani badi saja to mat do,
ohh mere humsafer ab to maaf ker do"

SCENCE-Ariya r in lift n arjun kiss riya without her permission..
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Sameer-arjun kya huya tum etane pareshan(tence) kyun lag rahe ho,
But arjun didnt ans.
.

OTHER side-
siya-Hey riya tum etane gusse main kyun lag rahi ho

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Sa-hey arjun baat kya hai,or tum ab tak they kahan,
arjun,
sameer wave his hand in front of his face,
arjun comes out his thought.
Ar-haan sam kya baat hai,
Sa-yahi to main tujh se puch raha hoon,kya huya
kab se avaj de raha hoon..per tera to kuch pata he nahi,
.

Siya-riya ab kuch bolegi ya ehse hi muh phula ker baide rahegi,
pata he mujhe kitani tension ho gaye the teri,pata nahi tu kahan chali gaye,

Ar-kuch nahi sam i meet her,
Sa-wao thats grate,vo to mujhe pata tha to use ke sath hoga,maine siya se bhi yahi kaha tha,
bechari bekar main he tension le rahi the,
Ar-siya ?
.

Siya-ager sameer mare sath nahi hote to pata nahi main kya kerti,vo to sam ne,
she lost in sameer thought,
Riya-sameer se sam,
vaise ye hai kon ?

Sa-ehse kya dekh rahe ho arjun.
Ar-tumne bataya nahi ,ye siya kon hai,ye ab siya ka kya chaker hai
.

Ri-hum sam..tum kuch bologi,
ab ye sam kahan se aya ?
Si-vo oo main.
(in mind)-ye sameer ko sam..ye mujhe ho kya gaya hai..her face is bushing,she hardly hide her blush.
.

Ar-koe kitani bhi koshish ker le apna blushing face chupane ke,per vo bhul gaya hai,i m arjun ..acp arjun
jisase kuch chpana mushkil he nahi namumkin hai.
to ab bologe ye siya
Sameer was silent
.

Ri-ab bolo siya darling i m waiting.
ab ye sameer,ohh realy sorry i meen ur sam,
right siya,

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Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Sahi kaha na maine..
are waha ri,yahan mai tumhare liye tense hoon,
or tum ho ki,
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Sa-baat ko change kerna koe tum se sikhe,
ab bologe ke etane ghante(hours) kahan gayab they,
or jo pareshani vala face bana rakha hai,
eske piche reason kya hai
in a sad tune-
Ar-kuch nahi sam ,i do a big mistake,
Ri-how dare he,usaki himmat kaise huye,
Si-kya huya riya,or kiski baat ker rahi hoon,kahin arjun ke to nahi

SA-what big mistake,tumne ehsa kya kiya,
Ar-vo maine ..

Ri-yes us arjun ke,usaki himmat kaise huye mujhe bina pooch kiss kerne ki,

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Sa-what u kiss her,
but how ..?
Ar-how meen,ab ye bhi tumhen batana padega(in veru fustrated,didnt kno what he said)
Sa-tum bhi na arjun kaise baat ker rahe hoo,
i meen direct kiss,

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Sa-direct kiss,ye arjun to bada fast hai yr,
Ri-just shut up siya,mujhe gussa aa raha hai,or tumhen majak soojh raha hai,
Thats why i hate pollice officer,
pyaar vayaar ke koe feelings he nahi hoti,
bus jo man aya vo kerte hai,

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Ar-haan yr ,
ab vo mujhase naraj ho gaye hai,use to pehale he polish vale pasand nahi,
Sa-Ab tumne kaam he ehsa kiya hai,naraj to hogi na bina apni feelings bataye,
Direct kiss

Si-omg sidha kiss
(in mind per mere vo ehse nahi hai),
Ab kya kerna hai age,Siya kne that arjun was the same guy that riya's father choose for her
.
(jab ariya lift main they,
tab sameer ne arjun or apne baare main sab kuch siya ko baata diya tha,but riya stil didnt know anythink,bez sameer stoped siya didnt say anythink to riya,
jab tak arjun khud na
bataye tab tak )
Ri-age kya kerna hai matlab,
Si-maaf kerna hai ya nahi,
Ri-maaf or vo bhi arjun ko
kabhi nahi,vo bhi baki ladkon ke tarah he hai..

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Ar-vo to mujhe baki ladkon. ke tarah sonch rahi hogi,
how culd i say her..that how much i lv her,
jab jab usake dad ne first time usake or meri shadi ke baat ke,
or uski photo dikhaye,vo mujhe tabi pasand aa gaye..
per jab mujhe pata chala,ke riya ne shadi se maana ker diya..or vo kahi chali gaye hai..
Sa-i know arjun, tumhare halat to dekhane layak the,
jitana kabhi tum kise criminal ke piche nahi pade..
utane bechain to tum riya ka pata jane ke liye ho rahe they..
poor shree..tumne sari raat use etf office main bida ker rakha jab tak usane riya ka no. track kerke sahi location ka pata nahi bataya..

Ar-to kya kerta sam..
use bas bhul jata,
main. yahan goa aya tha riya ke dil main apne liye jagah banane..
per pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya,jab vo mere samne hoti hai,to main sab kuch bhul jata hoon,
hamsafer banane aya tha use but use ko naraj ker diya,
pyaar kaise jataya jata hai bus yahi nahi ata
.

WHAT HAPPEND IN LIFT~~
Riya heart pov-
riya hv no idea why she trust that stanger..
bus three hours he huye they dono ko lift mai..
but phir bhi,kuch to baat the arjun main,she likes his compani ,she likes his closeness,she like to spend time with him,
she enjoys each passing seconds with him..
she wanna to ask him the meaning of lv n the importence of lv in life..
so when she ask arjun..
what is life..?
Arjun reply life is lv..
when she ask about the meaning of lv-
bez arjun is only one who take very special place in her heart in only few hours..
she wanna to know the feeling is that..
vo kon saa ahsas hai jo vo feel ker rahi the..
but she unwere the feeling,which she feel for him,
So she wanna to clearyfy the meaning of lv..
thats why she ask arjun what is lv..?
~~
Ri-arjun what is lv
arjun is totaly lost in her..
her inocent smile..
her closeness,

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago