Ariya OS: Be Intehaan

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"Mujhse door raho,Riya. Aag hu main,jal jaogi tum,"Arjun told her,as he held her upper arms tightly.

"Agar iss aag mein pyaar hai,toh,main iss aag mein khudko jalane keliye taiyaar hu.Tumhare pyaar mein mar mitne keliye taiyaar hu,Arjun.Mujhe akela chhorke maat jao,Arjun.Main mar jaungi tumhare bagaer," Riya replied,with tears in her eyes.

"Nahi,Riya.Main tumhe apni zindagi barbad karte hue nahi dekh paunga.Mujhse itna pyaar maat karo.Mere pyaar mein sirf aur sirf dard milega,khushiyaan nahi," Arjun replied to her in a furious tone.
But,Riya was adamant.

"Arjun,agar tumse pyaar karne ke badle mein mujhe dard milta hai,toh mujhe manzoor hai," Riya replied.

Arjun couldnt control his anger now.So,in a fit of rage,he slapped her hard that she fell down and hurt her forehead.
Sameer,Ayesha,Ankita,Shree,Chotu and Raghav were shocked to see this.

Sameer: Arjun... Stop it... Kya kar raha hai,tu? Riya ke pyaar ko thukraha hai?
Arjun: Woh samajhti kyun nahi hai,Sam?
Sameer: Woh samjhegi bhi kaise? Woh toh tujhse be intehaan pyaar karti hai.
Ayesha: Riya,utho... Aakhein khulo...

Riya ko chot lagne ki wajah se behosh ho jati hai.Riya ke aankho se aansu ke do boondh nikalti hai.Raghav goes to take out the car.While Shree called the hospital,and Chotu carried her.
Riya mumbled something in her unconscious state.
Riya(mumbling): Arr...ju..n...
Me..r...a. p..ya..ar tum...he huu..mesha sala..mat.. rakhega...
Jee..te...jee na sahi, pp...a..r,marne ke baad...
I... Love... You,Arjun...
After saying this,she went unconscious fully.

Then,Arjun realized,how much she loved him.He took Riya in his arms from Chotu and took her to the hospital in his SUV.others followed them.

In the hospital,everybody waited outside the ICU for the DOC to come out.
Atlast,Doc came out.
Arjun went forward.
Arjun: Riya kaisi hai?
Doc: Patient aab thik hai.Khatre se bahar hai.Sar pe chot lagne ki karan woh behosh hai.Adhe ghante mein hosh ajayega.Unke chehre se lagta hai ki woh kafi mental stress mein thi.Behosh ki halat kuch kehrahi thhi.
Ankita: Kya keh rahi thhi,Doc?
Doc: "ARJUN,MUJHE AKELA CHHORKE MAAT JANA...MAIN NAHI JEE PAUNGI..."

everyone were amazed to see the depth of love of Riya for Arjun.
Arjun clamped his face with his hands and slumped down on the hospital bench.Tears were flowing down from his eyes.
Everyone present there,felt bad for both of them.
BG Music:
"Jab saason mein teri saasein mili ho,
Phhir sulagne lage,
Ehsaas mere mujhse kehne lage,
Haan,bahon mein teri aake jahaan toh,
Phir se kehne lage,
Sailab jaise phhir se behne lage,
Khoya hu main,aaghosh mein,
Tu bhi kahaan aab hosh mein,
Makhmali raat ki ho na subha,
Be intehaan,Be Intehaan,
Yu pyaar kar,Be Intehaan,
Dekha karu sari umaar,
Tere nishaan,Be intehaan,
Koi kasar na rahe,
Meri khabar na rahe,
Chule mujhe iss kadar,
Be Intehaan."

precap: Finally,Arjun confesses his love.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww!! nyccc!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

arjun slapped riya ????😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 !!

precap is awsomeee!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳!!!

update soon!! 😉 😉 😉!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: alee001

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">woww!! nyccc!!!👏</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">arjun slapped riya ????😔!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">precap is awsomeee!!!😳!!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">update soon!!😉😉😉!!</font>





hmm...
Gusse mein thappar mar dia Arjun ne.
But,final part mein sab kuch accha hoga.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update...!!!
ooo arjun slapped riya...!!! :(
but wo behoshi ki halat mai bhi arjun ka hi naam le rai ti...!!!😊
precap is lovely...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21

amazing update...!!!

ooo arjun slapped riya...!!! :(
but wo behoshi ki halat mai bhi arjun ka hi naam le rai ti...!!!😊
precap is lovely...!!!
continue soon...!!!




sure.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one zebbie...
m waiting for next part...
update soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update...!!!
ooo arjun slapped riya...!!! :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Final Part.

Arjun slumped down on the bench and clamped his face.Tears were flowing down from his eyes.He was having flashbacks of how Riya saved him from the gunshot,how she prayed for his recovery,how they met.
Ankita was watching this from a corner.She went up to him and hugged him.
Ankita(in a concerned tone): Bhai,kuch nahi hoga Riya ko.
Arjun(sobbing): Maine Riya kko dard aur dukh ke sivai kuch nahi dia,uske badle mein Riya ne mujhe pyaar,izzat aur khushi di. Mujhse aur sehen nahi hota.Mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho chuka hai.Main aaj hi Riya se apna pyaar ka izhhar karunga.
Ankita:Thats like my ideal brother.Love u,Bhai.
Arjun: Love u too,Chutki. Waise,maine socha hai ki tera aur Rathod ki sakharpura agle hafte karu.Kya khayal hai?
Ankita blushes hardly and runs away from there.

Scene changes in ICU.

Nurse was checking Riya's medical chart,when,sudeenly,she saw Riya was regaining consciousness.
Now,Riya was fully awake.
She asked the nurse about Arjun.
Nurse: Dont worry,Ma'am.Your colleagues are here and ur Arjun,also. Main abhi jaake bulati hu.
Riya nodded her head.
As the Nurse went out,she informed that Riya is awake.Everybody went inside to see her,but,Arjun stood outside.
Riya: Ankita,Arjun kaha hai? Unhe bulao na,please. Mujhe unse milna hai.
Ankita: Sabar karo,Riya bhabhi...
Riya was shocked after hearing this,and,she also blushed.
Ayesha: Aye haye,Riya.Tum sharmate huye bohut acchi lagti ho.
Riya: Thanks. Arjun ko bulao na.
Rathod: Woh nahi ayega.Woh tumse nazre nahi mila sakta after aaj jo ussne kiya.
Riya: Sir,hum unki dard dete hai jinse hum pyaar karte hai.Mujhe pura vishwas hai ki Arjun mujhse bohut zyada pyaar karte hai.

Everybody,present there,were amazed at Riya's love for Arjun.
Riya: Hmm...Woh nahi manenge.kahawat toh suni hogi,"ghayal hui sherni aur bhi gussewali hoti hai."

everybody understood what she was going to do.

They start their plan.

Riya(acting like she is in great pain):Arjun... Mujhe bohut dard ho raha hai.
Arjun's head shot up after hearing that.He immediately ran inside the ICU.
Arjun(with concerned tone): Riya,meri jaan,kya hua hai? Dard horaha hai? Doctor ko bulata hu.
As Arjun gets up to call the doctor,Riya grabs his hand.
Riya: Mujhe doctor ki nahi,apki zarurat hai,Arjun.
Aap doge na mera saath?
Arjun nods his head and hugs Riya tightly.Riya also hug him with the same passion.
Rathod: Chalo,hum sab chalte hai.Let the two love birds spend some time together.
Everybody leaves Arjun and Riya.

Riya notices that Arjun was crying.
Riya broke the hug,and,sat up.
Riya: Yeh kya... ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte rotey bhi hai.Hey Maa Durga...
Arjun: I am sorry,Riya. Mujhe tumpar haath nahi uthana chahiye thha.I didnt know what happened to me at that time.Please,mujhe maaf kardo.
Riya: Maine apko tabhi maaf kardia thha.Bhala,main apne dil ki dharkan se kitni der naraz rehti,boliye?
Arjun: Riya,kya tum iss akdu,sadu,gussewale,aur tumhe pyaar karne wala ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte ki biwi banogi?Kya tum mujhe romance karna sikhaogi?Kya tum mujhe humare bacche ki papa kehlane ki haq dogi? Riya,will you marry me?
Main janta hu ki maine tumhe bohut dard diye hai,par,phir bhi,main apni baaki ki zindagi tumhare saath bitana chahta hu? Kya tum meri zindagi ki hissa banogi?
Riya was amazed at his sweet and honest confession.
She immediately replied,YES.

Then,Arjun hugged her tightly,promising not to leave her again and to always love her and keep her happy.

BG Music.
"Koi kasar na rahe,
Meri Khabar na rahe,
chule mujhe iss qadar,
Be intehaan...


Be Intehaan,Be Intehaan,
Yu pyaar kar,Be Intehaan."



the End.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read it fully
so nice
riya's love 4 arjun is pure and from the core of her heart
ariya was the best
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice!! ariya's love for each other was so pure!!

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