New Ariya FF: Kurbani ( Chap 3 : Pg 10) 02/04 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: akanksha1371986

this is nice but please update your other works also

eagerly waiting for thm


TFS

Sure. Will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Just read it..
Nice one..
Liked it..
PM me when you update next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

3 years ago

Ooty

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XQ46R4yRGZ8

(Play this)

The mist has started clearing. Rays of sunlight is falling here and there. Birds are chirping around. A group of children are getting ready to dance. Music begins. A girl is dancing in the middle, with her back to the viewers.

[This is where they are dancing

]

Kalvarae kalvarae

Kalvarae kalvarae
Kanpugum Kalvarae
kaikondu Paareero
Kankondu Saereero
Kalai Solli Thaareero

The girl spins around, facing the door of the gazebo. She is a girl of about 20. She laughs in a light manner and continues dancing with the kids.

Arjun and Sam is walking through that way. Arjun turns his head hearing the music. He sees the girl dancing and stops in his tracks. Sam who didn't realize that Arjun had stopped keeps walking forward. When he realizes that Arjun is not listening to him he stops. Turning around, he sees that Arjun is standing at the same spot. Sam walks back to Arjun and follows his gaze. Seeing the girl, Sam smirks and hits Arjun with his Shoulder. Arjun runs his hands through his hair and smiles.

Ummai enni ummai enni oomai kangal thoongaathu

Thalaiva en thalaiva agamariveero arulpuriveero

Vaaram thorum azhagin baaram

Koodum koodum kuraiyaathu

Urare en urave udai kalaiveero

Udal aniveero

The girl looks up while dancing, sensing someone watching her. She sees Arjun and Sam. She smiles at Sam, who smiles back. She also smiles at Arjun, but then lowers her eyes, seeing the way in which Arjun was looking at her, her cheeks becoming cherry red.

Aaa….Aaa. (Humming)

She spins once more and then begins singing, looking shyly at Arjun.

En aasai en aasai

Naanaa solven

En aasai naanaa solven

En aasai neeye sonnaal

Kannaale aamaam enbene

Engenge udaithum pogum

Angange uyirum pogum

Anbaale aala solvene

Valimigum idangal

Vali migaa idangal

Thamizhukku therigintrathe

Valimigum idangal

Vali migaa idangal

Thangalukku therigindrathaa

She spins, and spins, slowly bring her dance to a stop.

Kalvare kalvare

Kalvare kalvare

Kanpugum kalvare

Kaikkondu paareero

Kankondu sereero

Kalai solli thaareero

Kalvare kalvare

Kalvare kalvare

Kanpugum kalvare

Kaikkondu paareero

Kankondu sereero

Kalai solli thaareero

She stops, taking deep breaths. She loosens the dupatta, tied around her waist. She wipes her face once and then drinks some water. She smiles at the kids and tells them that the class is over. She then walks towards Sam and Arjun.

Sam sees her coming and says, "Don't run away anywhere. Talk to her."

Arjun glares at Sameer for his comment.

The girl reaches the guys and says hi to Sameer. Sameer also replies in the same friendly.

Sameer pointed towards Arjun and said, "This is my friend, Arjun, ", turning towards Riya, "and this is Riya."

Arjun and Riya smiled at each other and shook their hands.

Now

"Riya!"

Arjun woke up with a start. He wiped the sweat from off his face. These were the only things that he had about her. In fact the only things. It was these memories that urged him to go on.

In Riya's House

"I still remember the day I had met you guys."

Sameer looked up from the magazine he was trying to concentrate in. Rahul looked up too. Both of them had been waiting for Riya to say something. Her silence were killing both of them. But they also knew that the past was not something that easy to recall. Especially if the memories brought pain.

Riya looked and Rahul and continued, "But now all that is left is memories. But I am trying to forget them. When my parents had fixed my marriage with Rahul, I had told him everything. He had listened to them patiently, and had understood me. I will never let him down. "

Suddenly the door bell rang.

"I will get it", Riya said.

Seeing that Riya was out of earshot, Rahul said to Sameer, "She is doing all this to make me happy. But I know. Deep down she still loves ACP Raute."




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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Lolz no pm hehe
awesum dear
lov it..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Lolz no pm hehe
awesum dear
lov it..!


sry. PM not working.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
awesome.. loved their first meeting scene..

so riya still loves arjun.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
nyc part!!! waiting 4 more...

Rahul is so understanding
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
amazng dr.

loved it so much.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
great update...
ariya's first meet was lovely...
hmm so she still loves him and even rahul knows...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
superb update :) loved it
flashback was nice
arjun was lost seeing riya
their first was lovely
so rahul knows that riya still loves arjun
can't wait to read more
continue soon

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