New Ariya OS: Dil Mil Gaye.. :) 11/1 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Awsome Avantika..oops Avni...

Loved the way avni played the roll as a cupid...she was so cute..
Loved the VM's specially Tujhe yaad na meri aayi...It was so beautiful..
perfect for the situation..

The emotions ria went through...ufff...so emotional..

Arjun ki Himmat ko Daat Deniki padi:)
He stood by her side even in so much pain...

Finally Ria broke down ...
Ariya Milan too good...

Awesome...
❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
👏 Lovely love the vm and the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
waah!! awesome...🤗

hehe when i first read the confession part.. i thought after ariya shaadi arjun was going to confess on der first night... lol😆

loved it... so prateek's name wasnt in it... arjun's was???😉

loved rathod n especially AVNI!! she was really cute 😳 😳

even i had tears in my eyes reading this.. loved it.. kaash yeisa hi kuch hota onscreen main bhi!! 😔

btw loved the VM's... wow u r good at both writing n making VM.. congratulations... next time make a long VM!!👏
Edited by Queen.Bee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
love it Avantika
amazing piece of work and more important it was just fabulous
no work to describe it
great job dear
thanx 4 the pm 👏 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
hai di...it was awesome.reading all the parts together...wow
the story was too good...
thnx to prateiks family.they understand riya's problem and call off the marriage.nice
and ariya moments were tooo nice
thanks di 4 such a good os
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
You know whats 's blowing me away? These beautiful merges you have done of Sana-Shaleen. WOW! They are superb. For me, Arjun = AriYa. So these OS are like lifelines for me.. Thank you SO much:<3

I'll be back to comment on the overall FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Ha ye lo lamba vala comment
Part 1.
I luv title most..
Really like d 1st part , She love him so much her restlessness shows it.
like how she introduced him to her parents , its shows her disturbe mind , she cn;t even look at him.
and her explnation for marraige to arjun , ans Arjun ko tha , bt Rathod ko bol diya.
So , her mother knew abt it.." Pyar Dobara bhi ho sakta hai , " mujhe us time aisa laga ki use ye diglogue suna du , " Pyaar ek baar hota hai , aur shaddi bhi."
Part 2
Hmmm To Avni madam , aap to ek chance bhi nahi chodti apne honevale jiju ka impress karne ka.😊
Mai bhi yahi karti 😃
love to read their past 3 years , they toghter for past 3 years love each other silently bt never understand each other love.
Riya's condition is too bad. 😭 her mother console her very well , bt she dn't know that he also love her daughter beyond limits.
really like VM . Sahi VM banaya.👏 it shows bth condition.
Oho , Avni madam to aapko sab pehele se pata tha , ha ha Riya di aap se kuch nahi chupati.😆
Are ye kya Arjun jaa raha hai.. Love Rathod "Be the Man Rawte"😊
Rathod & Arjun childhood frnds😊
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sab ETF ki team uske ke saath.
Avini ji itni choti umr mai itni badi badi baatien ha.. Arjun ko samjha rahi ho , great..😃
"Di jabse Mumbai se lauti hain, bohot upset hain..
Aur phir jab Mom Dad ne unke saamne yeh proposal rakha, toh woh toot gayi thi..

Maine khud dekha hai, unhe baar baar aapka number dial karte hue, lekin pehli ring ke pehle hi disconnect kar deti thi..
mere khyaal se woh apni jagah sahi bhi thi.. Woh kehti toh aakhir aapse kya kehti?"

Just love this so much , she love him so much , bt what she can say to him???
"Main Di ko bohot achhe se jaanti hoon.. Woh yeh shaadi sirf Mom aur Dad ki baat rakhne ke liye kar rahin hain.. Lekin woh kabhi khush nahi reh payengi..
Kabhi Prateik se pyaar nahi kar payengi.. Kyunki unhone apne hisse ka pyaar toh kar liya hai, hai na?"

Avni just tel me itni badi baatien teri nenhe se dimmag mai aati kaha se hai?😉
Va beta Arjun ko hi uska dai. suna diya..
Part 3
Finally he meet her & they talked.
Love , how they enterwin fingers with each others.
Love Arjun's talk & his confession.😊
Awww they kiss in office😉
Are ye kiya Riya ne , mana kar diya,, bt i really like her reason & respect her reason ,
"Aaj agar maine shaadi se inkaar kar diya, toh sab aapko blame karenge.. Aap par ungliyaan uthayenge.. Aur yeh, main hone nahi doongi..
Aap mera guroor hain, Sir.. Aur main aapka insult hote hue nahi dekh sakungi.."

How much she respect him.
Awww im 😭😭😭😭😭
Part 4
My fav song u add in VM.. 👏👏👏👏 its suits their situation.
Love how he respect her decision & stand their in her wedding hall . he is true lover , he only think abt his love. and her happiness.
So , bride comes.
I dn't have word to explation her condition
You really potrayed her condition & her outbrust vry well , i love & like each line. After Arjun's exist she collasped , she know now she can't do anything without him.
Aur ye dekho yaha badi ro rahi hai uske liye aur Choti apna chance hai kya puch rahi hai..😃 ye Choti bhi na shaitan hai.
Like how Rathod understand her , even when her parents fail to understand . He is real Chief.
Part 5
Ek baat bol , ye end hamesha itna teary kyu hota hai???
Happy hota hai par teary kyu?
U really made me cry..😭😭😭
She broke down 😭😭😭😭 and really love , how u potrayed Arjun's metal condition👏 he is back when he know abt "Riya"
Yeeeyyy finally marraige broke ( shadi tutne ke baad khush honewali mai duniya ki 1st ladki hongi)😉😆
Arjun taking care of her & ahem ahem... suhaag raat tak wait nhi kar sakte dono...😆😆😆
And this Avni & Rathod kabab mai haddi kahi ke😃😉😆😆😆
really love this OS.
and awesome concept dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sadiyoun se ek sapna Hai,
Kaho Pura Karogey Tum??
Bhool Jao Mere Siwa Sab Kuch,
Kaho Aisa Karogey Tum??
Nahi Kuch Or Tamana Ab,
Ke Bas Mere Hojao Tum,
Kabhi Na Chor K Jaogey,
Kaho Aisa Karogey Tum??
Faqat Ik Lafz Sunney Ko,
Kaey Barson Se Tarsa Hun,
Mujhey Apna Bana Lo Tum,
Kaho Aisa Karogey Tum???

wow wow wow its just awesome brilliant n mindblowing
i wonder how can u write so well...the every little things u discribe r just perfect
i had tears in my eyes while reading penultimate part .i just loved loved it
i am biggest fan of ur stories
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
i felt as i am watching film
is was mindblowing dear
amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Wow!!! Superb!!
Outstanding OS!!
Loved arjun's confession!!
Avni's flirting was so cute!!
Rathod shouting at Arjun and telling him to go get his girl..loved their friendship!!
The pain of Ariya was so beautifully described.
The best part was the reunion!!!
Loved the OS altogether, it was mindblowing!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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