Ariya FF: Battle Scars Chp1-pg11-PMsL8r

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sana

@Luna92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

amazing👏 this is defo different yaar... wow...
want to read more..update soon dear😊

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

hey dear brilliant update...riya's editer now very impressive...n she did her task preety well tooo then why is has been to take off from her...plz update soon wait nahi ho raha...ya battle scars is am awesome song thanx to u...

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

awesome update
loved the bonding between riya nd ana
riya nd shrees friendship is amazing
intersting precap
thanx 4 the pm
love to read more
continue soon

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shruti

@shrutisweety

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

unresd my comment in pg-11

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@Wj.mad

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

amazing update
waiting 4 next update

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gousia24

@gousia24

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

loved the bonding between riya nd ana
riya nd shrees friendship is amazing

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

tooo gud de

1st of all i want to say tht u r brillnt

ff is superb

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Shru di
its is a awesome story.
Lved it a lot.
Its serious, and the lines you used in the pro, just loved that line and it have the true meanings.
Cs is awesome. Curious abt arjun and chotu relation.

When will you update this piece??

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Chapter one is fantastic.
You left me speechless di. The begining was very nice. The girl and her pain, you described it fantasticly.
Love this riya of yours. And he relation with shree is aweosme.
And this work suits her.
Pls di update soon.