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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: fatima15
awesome start :) loved it
loved arjun and that girl's fight😆especially the last scene...they are just too funny...
who is that girl? riya?
can't wait to read next part
continue soon

Ohhh thank u fati forr liking n for ur sweet n lvly comment...last scence is also my fav...yup i will update may be today ...hop u enjoy...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: anu91
So lovely update...
I think tat girl should be riya...
But it was so short come with long update yaar...

Thanks dr,...ohhh next time its should be long ...
is riya...hummm...next part padna padega...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Thank u so much fr for ur lvly comment n liking,
hope u enjoy next part to...
kehate hai choti choti nok jok se ek naya rista banta hai...dekhate hai en dono ke nok jok kahan tak jati haii...
i hope u all enjoys n. plz dont forget to leav ur lvly n valuable comment...itd realy important me to write next part...
n sorry for any error n sorry if i bore..n realy ...if u not like then also comment to say its bad or bore...
bez i wana to kno kitno ko pasand aya or kitano ko nahi...thank u so much...
by piya...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

**PART-1-B**
**"Vo pehali mulakat-2"**

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SCENCE-Arjun n the girl both argue n sudenly four goonas r came there..
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A-are bhaye maine kya kiya jo bhi kiya es ladki ne kiya..pakadna hai to ese pakdo..
G-are kyun ehse bhi pakado bhai,ek to khatara bike or
upper se khadus..
Ar-kya kaha..khatara bike ...or khadus...maine kaha tha ke aao or aa ker meri bike per baid jayo...haan haan ab ehse kya dekh rahi ho...bolo ..bolo chup kyuin ho..
G-galti ho gaye maaf ker do...god age se kabhi es khatra per nahi baidonge...
meri he kismat kharab hai jo aker tumhari ed khatara per baid gaye...
A-oho kitni bholi ban rahi ho...kise kaha tha bike per baidane ko...jab mana ker raha tha tab tumhari samajh main nahi aya...
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G-haan. samajh main nahi aya..ager aa gaya hota to abhi main yahan nahi hoti..
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YE KYA LAGA RAKHA HAI TUM DONO NE...APNI YE NOTANKI BAND KARO..
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Arjun already angry first bez of sam n then that girl... n now goonas ke etani himmat arjun. rawte ko chup hone ko kahen...or arjun kuch na kare ab bhala ehsa ho sakta hai...poor goona..
arjun give one tight punch on his face..his face color change black n blue ...AHHH..goona put his hand on his face..ahhh mere sare naye teeth hila ker rakh diye...abhi to nayee lagvaye they ..
A-tumhen dikhaye nahi deta abhi main es ladki se baat ker raha huin...or galti se bhi koe mujhe bich main chup hone ko kah de to...show again his punch..
1 Gonna-sorry bhaye..galti ho gaye age se nahi bolunga...n imedeatly hide himself from other goona.

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A-haan to main kya keh raha tha..ek to bina mere permissionke meri bike per aker baid jati ho..or upper se mujhe he char baaten suna rahi ho..
2Gonna-ye kya laga rakha hai...
girl also fustrated with arjun..giv one tight slap to that goona...
G-kyun. kaisa laga slap ab chup

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Ab chup chap jaker piche khade ho jaooo...mujhe bhi nahi pasand ke mere bich main. koe bole..
G-tum samajhate kya ho apne aap ko,
A-main to kuch nahi samajhata.. per tum ek to jaan na pahchan..or aker kise bhi aanjan bike ke piche baide gaye...
G-main etni bhi bebkuf nahi ke bike per baidane se pehale uska naam na padon..crime reporter huin crime samjhe..haan or kya kaha tumne..anjan bike..lagta hai tumhari ankhen nahi battun hai..
bajan hai ..bajan..yahan focus ker ke dekho ..dekho kya likha hai..
b.a.j.a.n=bajan..samjhe
khud ke bike or khud ye bhi nahi pata kon se compani ke hai
(Using fake name of bike model)
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Ar-Hahhhaaa omg hahhhaaa...tum sach main kamal ho...hahhhaaa
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3Goona-band karo apna ye hasna pagal bana diya tume hum...befor he cud compete...continusly two punch on his face...
tum logon. ko ek baar main samajh main nahi ata ..bich main no interfare..samjhe ya samjhayon..he only nodded in yes..
A-ab ser kyun hila rahe ho muh se kyun nahi bolte..
samjhe ya phir se samjhayon
Goona-first open his mouth n remove his teeth that was
already broken by arjun's punch..sssaammjh gayaa bbaahhye..
A-to main kahan tha..ohh yes omg lagta hai god jab mind de rahe they to tum shoping per chali gaye hogi...
tabhi ti opper ka mala(meens her mind ,flor)ek dam khali hai..
G-haan haan god ne sara ka sara mind jo tumhe de diya ..or vaise bhi tumhen eski jayada jarorat hai..
A-meri samajh nahi ata tumhen crime reporter kisne bana diya,
G-kyuin tumhen etani problem kyun ho rahi hai mere crime reporter banane se...
4 ,5 GOONA BUS BAHUTE HO GAYA TUM DONO KA DRAMA ..AB BAND KARO...HE TOOK HIS GUN N POINTED TOWARD ARJUN N GIRL...
GO-SIdhe shide bol ke vo file kahan hai..
Girl-kon se file tum kis file ke baat ker rahe ho..
Go-chup chap bata de varna mujhe jayada time nahi lagega...shoot

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Kere mai...ab. jaldy bol verna..
G-achha to tum us file ke bare main puch rahe ho...per
voo vo file mere mere pass
nahi hai..
Gon-tere pass nahi to kise pass hai ..mere khopdy(head) maat guma..chaldy se bol kiske pass hai..
G-kuch yad nahi aa raha..
A-yan yad bhi kaise ayega usake liye to mind chahiye..or vo to tumhare pass hai nahi,
G-(in mind) bachu bahut insult ker de tumne mere..baar baar bole rahe ho ke dimag nahi ..dimag nahi..ab ehsa dimag use karunge ke lene ke dene pad jayenge..
A-ab es tarah face ke expression change kerne se mind thode he mil jayega..
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SUTUP U BOTH..DEKHO MUJHE GUSSA MAAT DELAO..CHUP CHAP BATA DO VO FILE KISKE PASS HAI..HE SHOOT HIS GUN IN AIR..es baar to hava main chalaye hai but next time..
G-vo file mere pass nahi mere boss ke pas hai..
Go-kon hai tumhara boss jaldy bolo..
G-nahi main nahi bataongi..
she hold arjun hand n say..plz boss dont tell him that where is the fill..
A-what r u saying..i m not ur boss ..khud ko bachane ke liye mujhe phasa rahi ho
Go-ohh tere boss ne sahi kaha tha tera to such moch opper ka mala khali hai
now he pointed his gun toward arjun..bata kahan hai file
A-main nahi janta or apni gun niche rakho verna..
Go-verna kya kerlega tu
A-tumhen bhi ek demo dikha he deta huin..file chahiye na tumhen..abhi deta huin.
he give five six punch on his face ..stumak
he almost fainted other goona help his to stand properly
.abhi bhi file chahiye
Go-file kon se file ..kaise file..tum kon ho bhaye..tum kahan se aye ho
A-Ans chahiye
Go-noo bhaye..are bhaye chalo yahan se ab kya or mar khani hai says to other goonas
its almost night.
arjun repaire his bike..n start to leav
G-are kaise man ho etni rat mai mujhe akela chud ke jaoge.
arjun giv her five hundred rup ..ye lo or texi main aa
jana
T.B.C
PREC-ARJUN MEET RIYA N SURPISE

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

lovely part... lovd the way Arjun nd dat girl i suppose its Riya handed the goons...so finally Ariya meeting... hmmm waiting for dat... update soon...

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arnavkhushi1206

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Fantastic!!! Such a lovely update...loved the little fight between the girl and Arjun it was sooo funny...the way they handled the goons when they came into their conversations was too funny...I was laughing so hard throughout this part! I loved it!! 😛

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

haha poor goons
omg lovely fight b/n arjun & that girl hope it's riya
riya s so funny she told them arjun is her boss hehe😆
nice precap w8ing 4 ariya meeting
pls cont soon