Ariya FF:LV KE LIYE...kuch bhi karega*ONHOLD*

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yas23

@yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

amazing start
loved rathore nd arjuns bonding
cont soon

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

thanku so much dr for ur lvly comment,
so r u realy waited for first part...so the wait is over ,
plzzz plzz i want ur more n more comment for continue this ff,
so plz kanjuse matt kerna..hope u like...
n if u not like then stop kerne ke liye bhi comment ker sakte hai ,
jitane jayada like kerage or comment karenge main ye ff tabhi likhungi...ophs app sonch rahe honge ye ff kaise ho gaya...yr plan change ...os se sidha ff...
so plz dont forget to leav ur comment...

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Sumbul Qaiser

@sumbulqaiser

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

nice and totally different concept
continue soon and plz pm me

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

wow this is amazing...

kaha tha ye ff...meinto dekha hi nahi...

wow im so excited after reading this...

please please please please please ...bolo na ki wo ladki riya hai jisase rathore ki shadi hone wali hai and arjun is going make her fall for him...wow

hey dear please add me in your pm list...and please update soon

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

**PART-A**
"vo pehali mulakat"

SCENCE-Time-4:32 pm,
city-dehli
one man is trying
to fix his bike..due to some mechanical problem the bike is stop in mid way...
_
uff ek to etani garmi or uper se ye bike bhi achank se kharab ho gaye...vo bhi mid way...or dur dur tak koe najer bhi nahi aa raha...
.
the person phone has ring..
ye bhi na khud to aram se apne gher per baida hai...or morning se ten times call ker chuka hai...
haan bolo...
.
ARE ETNA
GUSSA KYUN HOTE HO MAIN TO BUS PUCH RAHA THA KE KAHAN PAHUNCHE...
.
u ask the same question sinces morning for ten time...
.
ARJUN YR AB EHSE KYUN BOL RAHA HAI...ANYWAY YE BATA TU US LADKI SE MILA YA NAHI...
samm!!!! tera dimag to thik hai bike kharab ho gaye hai meri...midway main huin...or tujhe us ladki ke padi hai...
arjun is fustrated n cut the call..
.
ye sam ka bachha dekh longa ese to main..main he bebkuf tha jo eski baat maan ker yahan chala aya...
sudenly one girl is running his direction n without asking his permition sit his bike...
.
are areere who r u or ese kaise mare bike per baide gaye...
g-sakal se to lagta nahi ke tumhare pass mind nahi hai..
she getup from the bike n again sit dekha kaise baide..
.
Ar-mera matlab bina mari permition ke meri bike per kaise baide,samjhe tum ya samjhayon...
ufff es tarah ghurana band karo or jaldy bike chalao kuch goonas mere piche pade hai...
A-to esmain mein kya karon...goona mere piche nahi tumhare piche pade hai..ab ese kapde pehano ge to achhe achhe log tumhare piche pad jayenge...
G-kya matlab hai tumhara..
dekho mujhase dur rehana samjhe tum jante nahi main kon huin..
A-kyuin kahi ke princess ho..Or mujhe koe shok nahi tumse chipakane ka samjhe..ab. utaro meri bike se
G-are kaise man ho ek ladki ke help kerne ke vajaye..us se lad rahe ho...

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

KYA...arjun ki bike kharab aur wo bhi mid way...bechara...aur uppar se rathore ne usaka dimag kha raha hai...arjun ki to halat kharab ho gayi hai

OMG...a girl sits on arjun bike without his permission and kon guns usake peeche pade hai...

hey kya wo girl riya hai...tell na?

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

A-tumhe samajh nahi ata maine kaha utaro meri bike se..
G-nahi utarongi jo kerna hai ker lo..
A-to thik hai goona ka waite karo..
G-dekho tum pachataoge..sidhe shide bike chalo..
A-are vaha ..arjun ..arjun rawte ko order...bike meri main chalon ya na chalaon ye meri margi...
G-ehse kaise tumhari margi..
dekhi ager mujhe kuch ho gaya to sara eljam tumhare uper ayega...
tum jante nahi main crime reporter huin...
mere bade bade polish
officer se pehchan hai ,
ek phon call or tum sidha jail main jaoge samjhe tum...
.
A-dekho mera dimag pehale he kharab hai ab tum use or kharab mat karo...
esase pehale goona aa jayen utaro meri bike se..
.
G-lagta hai tumhara screw sach main kharab hai..
goona aa jayenge ese liye to keh rahi huin bike chalo...
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A-ohhh just sutup jab tak tum bike se utarogi nahi to kaise bike chalonga...
.
G-zero fig hai meri bilkul karena ke taraha..
tum mujhe baida ker bhi bike start ker sakte ho...
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A-tumhara dimag sach main kharab hai..tumhen. kise crime reporter bana diya..
jaror koe fake college hoga..jahan tumne ye crime reporter ka corse kiya tha..
.
G-oye meri degree per sabal mat udana,pure college main first aye the,
vahan ke sir meri aaj bhi tarif kerten hai
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A-haan vo to kerten hongen...ab jara goonas ko bhi tarif karne ka moka do..
.
G-kya matlab hai tumhara,
A-kuch nahi ab bike per baidane ka koe matlab nahi ...goonas tumhari sava ke liye aa gaye hai ,just look ur behind..
G-what goona aa gaye..khade khade mara muh kya dekh rahe ho..jaldy se bike start karo
A-nahi ker sakta
G-kyun??
A-bike kharab hai
G-what tum pehale nahi bata sakte they
A-etni der se to try ker raha tha ,tum batane ka moka deti tab na
goona -pakad lo dono ko
A-are bhai maine kya kiya ,jo kiya es ladki nai kiya.
G-are kyun ese bhi pakado bhai,ek yo khatara bike,or upper se khadus

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

so thats was my update ,i kno its short but if i get mor response then very soon. i will update next part,
n plz tell me how was that ,did u like or not,Plz dont forget to leav ur comment its realy important for me...
samjhe ya samjhayon...

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Moumi

@Moumimon

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Awsome..Awsome..Awsome...😛
i am loughing madly after reading last scene...🤣
Wow amaizing dear..egarly waiting for your next update...😳

Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Moumimon
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Awsome..Awsome..Awsome...</font>😛<font color="#CC3366" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">
i am loughing madly after reading last scene...🤣
Wow amaizing dear..egarly waiting for your next update...</font>😳

Thank u so much dr...
i m very happy yr chalo update padker hasin to aye...i will update next part today Night dr