OS :: Down Memory Lane (Last Part on Page 11) - Page 7

Originally posted by: -sree13-

my besties back with bang 😉


Reserved

aww... Thanks dear. Un-res soon!

Originally posted by: polly_03

suchi :
the poem was beyond hilarious🤣..poor sameer, so badly trapped by megha😆, waise must say, megha did keep her words, she actually reached the place where sameer is now, hope she bheja-fries him here too.😆update soon.

Thank you so much for reading the part and appreciate the piece with your valuabe comments. You want more bheja-fries...lol. Sameer ki bhi toh socho. 😆

Originally posted by: purecure

No doubt ...surely knew dis os wld b rocking...seriously...!!!

amazing nok-jhok act. teasing by megha uff jhilli chinki...

d most funny hing...rathore 88 kgs 18 yrs gulabjamun rasgulley...

seriously different storyline...

n liked megha's diaogue...mera naam megha hai ,laxmi kant pyarelal nahii...

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dat dialogue was like hell...i mean if i feel sad i shall red di os...has-has ke zameen pe hi let jaaongi..!!

seriosuly dis os was mind-blowing...sorry laugh-blowing...!!!

really likes dat teasing of maegha's n dat big expalinatio dialogue wen rtahore asks"what u do??"

n atlast bt not least...as usual awesome poems...first one was emotional ...thot serious os at first th after reading...relaised yeh poem end part ko hi connect karega i guess...n second poem was heehee...haahha...!!!

amazing...n fantastic OS...!!!

claps...!!

feels like CQ ki aatma tum logo mein ghus gayi hai!!!😉

omg...like TABOHN dis is another one which i will be really waiting for...bt d sad thing is it wil end tommrow...anyhow will b waiting for next n last update!!!

please update soon...n sorry for d late comment...!!!

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thank you so much for your heartfelt reply. This is the best compliment the OS has ever got. We're flattered.

Originally posted by: ankita2804

OMG...
How can you guys be sooo creative in writing...
awesome...
I felt as if I was reading a script with all the lines and emotions written ...
It sooo awesomeee...
Megha Di... hadd se zyada jalan ho rahi hai aapse
It was a Hilariousss part...
cant stop laughing... so much of sweet tauntingsss...
that '5 cadets' wala joke was the most funnypart...
bachpan me kitna cute lagta hoga na Golu ... awww
such a sweet OS dearies,,,,,, well done...
LOved it sooo much...

Thank you so much dear. We're delighted to get your reveiws. Your appreciation motivates us a lot.

Originally posted by: prava55663

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Loved it...me cracked up with the update...

loved the shyari...

us ladki ne prem patr ko apni bhai ko de di...aur sameer poor soul..

really that so funny...

i am still laughing!!

Megha aagayi...

Thank you so much dear for your wonderful feedback.

Thanks to everybody who liked, commented and went through this OS. Our heart-felt thanks to dashequalsd3 , CrAzYaRjUnIaN92 , .9.Sara.9. , lola123 , princesshelen , Payal_156 , yas23 , -Siaa- , Moumimon , fatima15 , pihu_angad , shruti-love , M.V.Kohli007 , Sinner.gurl , meghasingh , haruhi26 , -sree13- , Leki , funkylicious , kgmu86 , polly_03 , IndigoBlues , Krishnaluv94 , samiya.059 , prava55663 , Radhika Shah , shrutisweety , tani23 for their precious co-operation and likes. The Last Part of this OS will be there in the next post. Hope you'll enjoy the part. Thanks.

Down Memory Lane
Part 3
'Woh actually mujhe kuch yaad aa gaya', said Rathore.
'Kamaal hai aapko mujhe dekh kar kuch yaad aa gaya. Aksar toh log mujhe dekh kar mujhe chodke baki sab kuch bhool jate hain. Aap pehle hain jinhe mujhe dekhkar kuch yaad aa raha hai', said Megha.
'Achchha ch...oh i mean Miss Singh yeh aapka first day hai aur aap 5 mins late hain', Rathore said adapting his officer avatar.
'Sir 5 min late ana koi badi baat nai hai but agar aap office 5 mins jaldi bhi aa gaye lekin yadon mei kho gaye toh kya faida hai. Mein agar crime scene pe 5 late pahunch gayi toh utna nuksan nai hoga jitna agar aap crime scene pe pahunch gaye lekin 20 min tak khayalo mei kho gaye toh kya hoga...', said Megha with a grin to make Sameer realize that he had been in flashback mode for 20 minutes.
Sameer controlled his laugh with great difficulty chinki was same 'KABHI BHI APNI GALTI NA MAN'NE WALI'
'Sir mein late zaroor ayi hoon but mei case solve karne mei mahir hoon', said Megha confidently.
'Par Miss Singh ETF ke pass waise case aate he nai hain jinki aap expert hain', said Sameer with utmost seriousness on face.
'Kya Matlab?', said Megha bit confused.
'Matlab yeh hame criminals ke bones break karne hote hain ladka ladki k beech mein break up nai. Hum robbers ko pakdte hain hotel mei khana khakar dusro ko rob nai karte. Aur shopping complexes mein crimes ko rokte hain na ki shop-keepers ko tang karke bargaining...aap samajh rahi hain Miss Singh what i want to say', said Sameer deliberately.
Her senior's words compelled her to take a stroll Down Memory Lane.
Some voices echoed in her ears.
'oye gundi'
'rasgulley'
'oye laddu tension mat le mei naina aur uske boyfriend k beech breakup karwa he dungi'
'agar nai mani toh arz hai
Woh bewafa hai to kya huwa mat bura kaho usko
Tum kisi aur k saath set ho jao dafa karo usko'
'bade aye ... Acp Ban kar maza chakhne wale...ACP SAMEER DHAMSINGH RATHORE ...AKA ACP MOTU'
She looked at him. Straight in his amused eyes.
This name ACP Sameer clicked her and brought her back from reverie and she remembered having seen the name plate of same name outside the cabin.
'Aap...you... Gosh! Tum...oh my Gosh! Tum kitne badal gaye ho...oh tum to motu rathore se rowdy rathore ho gaye ho...!
Haye woh extra kgs kya kiye woh bhi kha gaye kya lekin acha huwa tum smart ho gaye ho', she restarted her blabbering just like torrential rain drizzling irrespective of time.
'Enough! Chinki mujhe bhi kuch bolne do'
Ik umar ke baad us ko dekha,
Aankhon mein sawaal they
hazaaron,
Honton pe magar wohi tabasum,
Chehrey pe likhi huyi yaadein
Lehjey mein magar balaa ka
thehrao,
Awaaz main goonjti judai,
Baanhen thi magar wisaal-e-
samaan,
Simtti huyi baazuyon mein,
Taa'der mein sochti rahi thi,
Main kis shajar se katt gayi thi,
Kis chahato ko door kar diya tha,
Main us ke galey lagi huyi thi,
Woh ponchh raha tha mere
aansu
meri ankhain has rahi the
The Friends hugged each other and this last sentence was heard by Chhotu and Shree who had come to ask for half days leave and Shree's who had just found interest in detective stories told Chotu,
'Chhotu Arjun Sir ko bulao jaldi'
'Par woh toh ek hafte ki chuti pe gaye hain'
'Arrye chotu yeh Rathore sir nai koi aur behrupia hai aur yeh ladki new arms expert Megha Singh nai koi Chinki hai. Mujhe toh lagta hai inn dono ne mil kar Rathore Sir ko kidnap kar lia hai. Yeh Rathore sir nai ho sakte itne haste huwe aur is mini skirt wali ladki ke gale mil kar haste huwe. Rathore sir to smile b nai karte aur kahan yeh hasna aur gale lagna', said Shree dramatically.
Please Like and Comment. Hope we stood upto your expectations. Thanks.
-Samiya & Shuchi.

I am so so so so sorry for unresing so late...really very sorry.

me first...me first😃

first of all🤗to both of u samchi...love u so much...

loved rathore's taunting...

and then the most hilarious part...shree...
rathore sir has been kidnapped..lol

rathord said to her she is 5 mins late
bht her answer was the best😆
abhi apni galati nahi manati 😛
rathore as ACP motu😆
va va kya dialog ta motu rathore se rawdy rathore ban gaye
shree bi na kuch bi bolta rehata hai
poem was awesome👏

yaar just loved the entire 5min wala chaska!!