ariya story JALAN KI BU updated part last pn 8

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Kanishka

@kanishika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wow Rathod Ki Shadi

Continue soon n do PM Me

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debu

@shuruli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow! Wat a damn it!!! strt dear pankhuri:)
Rathore ki shadi ab Jaipur mein kya khichdi pakne wali:)= awesome start khud ki shadi mein invitation jaisa letter mummy se*lol*
Do continue soon n pls pm me:)

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piyal

@Pankhuri96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

hi!it's me pankhuri.thanx for your comments.plz mujhe koi batao ki agla part kaha likhu.main toh naii ho na.mujhe todi help karona plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by pankhuri96 - 12 years ago

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wow sameer marriage...
Y so small update...
come soon dr...

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piyal

@Pankhuri96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

HERE IS THE NEXT PART

SHREE:"ARE YAAR YEH RATHORE SIR HAMPE YEH SUBHA SUBHA BOMB KYU GIRA RAHE HAI?"(in his mind)

ARJUN:"TUMHARI SHAADI?KIS SE?KAVI BATAYA NEHI TUMNE!"

RIYA:"SIR,AAP TOH BARE HI CHHUPE RUSTAM NIKLE?SHAADI HAI AUR HAME HI NAHI BATAYA?THIS IS BAD SIR!TOH KAB HAI SHAADI?HAM SAB KAB NIKLENGE KAL?"

RATHORE:ITNE SARE SAWALO KA MAIN EK SAAT JAWAB NEHI DE SAKTA.WAISE HAM SAB KAL 9 AM NIKAL REHE HAI.SAB TIME PE CHALE JANA.

ARJUN:"MAI NEHI ARAHA HU."

RIYA'S FACE TURNED SAD.SHREE PATTED HER SHOULDER.

RATHORE:"MAIN WOH SAB KUCHH SUNNA NEHI CHAHTA.MAA SA NE KHUD TUMHE ANE KO KAHA HAI.AT LEAST UNKI BAAT TOH MAAT TALO?"

ARJUN:"OK.KOSHIS ZAROOR KARUNGA."

RIYA WAS HAAPY.

NEXT MORNING:

SHREE,CHHOTU,ARJUN WAS STANDING FRONT OF THE OFFICE.RIYA COMES.GUESS WHT?

RIYA IS WEARING A RED SAREE.OPENED HAIR,LOOKING OWSOME.

SHREE:"WOOO!!!!!!KYA LAG RAHI HAI RI!"

CHHOTU:"SAHI KAHA YAAR!!!!"

ARJUN WAS STAUNT FOR FEW SECONDS>BUT CONTROLLED HIS DISAER.

RIYA:"KYA HUA?THIK THAK LAG RAHI HU NAH?"

SHREE:"NAHI EKDAM DHASUU LAG RAHI HAI.LAG RAHA HAI JAISE TERI HI SHADI HAI"

ARJUN:"AAB BAAT KHATAM HO GAI HO TOH CHALE?"

IN THE CAR

SHREE PLAYS THE SONG"AA RE PRETAM PAYYARE"

SHREE AND CHHOTU DANCE WITH THIS SONG.

RIYA:"KYA HAMESHA ITEM SONG SUNTE RAHETE HO.KUCH SLOW SONG NAHI SUN SAKTE.MAI GAANA CHANGE KARRAHI HU."

she changes the song and play"ISHQ WALA LOVE"

when the song was playing arjun was staring at riya continueusly.the whole way was passed nicely.

PRECAP:

they reached rathore's house.then ek dhamaka hoga arjun ke dimaag me.fir shuru hogi jalan ki bu.

comments plz.

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wow loved it!! so arjun is already falling for her.. can u write without caps?? nice story waiting for jalan ki bu!!! update soon!!

post in the same thread but when update please mention it in the title of the post!!

Edited by Queen.Bee - 12 years ago